[Predictions] Naruto 665 Prediction "AKUMA NO MI" by Mangafan 321

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Black obito:- madara sama!

Madara:- you were late i had to come all the way here!

Black zetsu:- I have captured the yin kurama.

Madara:- ( so that boy only carried the yang part)

Meanwhile kakashi takes out Minato's customized kunai.

Kakashi: The time has come for it's use. Sensei we can't do anything here we have to go somwhere where he could never find us.

Minato:- Where???

Kakashi:- To the kamui dimension!!! I have only enough chakra to transport naruto and myself. You take obito and teleport yourself there.

Minato(looking at the kunai at kakashi's hand):- Alright...

Gaara and Sakura:- We can't leave naruto like that.

Minato:- You two ought to be here and defend the alliance.

Sakura(looking at naruto's face):- but..

Kakashi:- if u want protect naruto protect his dreams sakura. Protect the alliance.

Kakashi warps holding naruto.

Madara:- Well, that's great excuse you got!!!

Madara goes to grab obito's rinnegan. Suddenly minato hold's obito's neck.

Minato:- Sorry for the interference but someone needs him urgently than you bastard do!!! Teleports quickly.

Madara tries to cut him from the middle but only a piece of his clothing comes out.

Madara:- Idiot!!!

At sasuke's side

???- Kuchiyo se no jutsu.

Whole lot of smoke.

Tobirama:- what are you trying to do with that boy???

???:- Trying to save him.

He and sasuke dissapears with the summoning.

Karin:- I can't feel sasuke and the guy anymore.

Orochimaru(The summoning felt familiar):- seems like he is in safe hands now!

Karin:- No, I got to save him.

Karin,Orochimaru, Juugo, Suigetsu reaches the spot.

Karin(holding tobirama by collar):-
Where did u hide sasuke kun old man tell me or i am gonna kill u!!!

Tobirama:- I don't think i can hide him at my current state.

Orochimaru:- stop rushing karin!!! we got to help him now.

At the alliance side:-

Tenten:- these are the rikudou's tools.

Lee:- Are the helpful to us in anyway??? (catching the gourd)

Darui:- these requires too much chakra but the damage caused by these is incredible.

Gai:- we don't have enough chakra left. We should give it to someone who has still the requirable amount of chakra left but no one has any chakra left except....

Seen shows face of sarutobi.

Madara's side:-

Madara:- let's begin with my plan here. Akuma no mi( fruit of the devil)!!! .

Bz obito:- kuku!!!

Kakashi:- seems like you're in trouble now.

Bz obito:- No

Minato:- ???

Bz obito:- And you cannot hold me here you forgot that i can warp myself too!!!

Starts too warp but stopped. Focus on kakashi's sharingan.

Kakashi:- i can't hold him for long. We have to wrap this up quickly.

Suddenly wood grows from bz obito's back piercing minato on different areas.

Sweat on minato's face.

Minato:- Hold on naruto your father will not let you down!!!

Dark kurama:- This guy is regaining his conciousness. ( close look on obito's pale face ) Probably because he turned back into jiinchuriki. Maybe if i....

Last page:-

Sasuke and yamato are lying side by side. A glass is shining in the darkness.

???:- Itachi i owe u my life.

:::::----[×××××]----:::::

Plz!!! Ignore my grammatical mistakes :sweat: and enjoy. :win:
 

sandy uzumaki

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Everything was great :win:


But I can't forgive the part where Karin holds Tobirama by his collar !! :rage:


Who does she think she is !! :rage: :rage:
 

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You forgot that the fruit is the mysterious man tho.
 

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Well, it wasn't that bad. I'd give you about 6 or 7/10 though.
Btw, correct your mistakes next time, it's really uncomfortable..
 

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Well, it wasn't that bad. I'd give you about 6 or 7/10 though.
Btw, correct your mistakes next time, it's really uncomfortable..

ouch!!! dat hurts :dead: was it punctuation problem??? :shy:
 

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Everything was great :win:


But I can't forgive the part where Karin holds Tobirama by his collar !! :rage:


Who does she think she is !! :rage: :rage:

what the hell, Karin holds tobirama by the collar.??

I'm not reading this shit.!!
 

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what the hell, Karin holds tobirama by the collar.??

I'm not reading this shit.!!

who the hell do you think you are??? get lost with your ass from here if you don't like it and dare not call anyone's work a shit.
 

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Its ok very basic but ok but u didnt add more questions if u don't add question u can't make a a greater next chapter
 
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