[Predictions] Naruto 663: Pure World

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Naruto 663: The Pure World

Sakura's efforts to provide Naruto with medical attention are pointless; she cannot replenish the Chakra that is needed to keep him alive. She begins crying profusely from her eyes after noticing that his heart has stopped.

Sakura: "Naruto!!!! No...No....No..."

Gaara: "You must keep him alive Sakura!"

Sakura: "He-He's......dead."

Gaara: "!!!!"

Meanwhile, on the other side of the field, Sasuke continues to bleed out. He finds himself drifting from the world.

Sasuke: 'I....I can't leave now.....Please....I must.....live...'

Sasuke ventures off into a glowing light, understanding now that he is no longer alive. Naruto begins experiencing the same thing. It pains him to see that the world has been left behind to suffer and that he cannot do anything about it.

Naruto: "Guess I wasn't cut out to be Hokage. I couldn't save any of my friends and I couldn't even save Kurama. I'm a failure....."

????: "You don't look like a failure to me. Sure, things may seem to be going the other way at the moment, but you shouldn't take it out on yourself."

Naruto turns to the right and sees Jiraiya standing there in the void. The man holds a smile on his face despite seeing his former student here with him.

Naruto: "Pervy Sage!!!"

A tearing Naruto embraces his former sensei in a hug, holding on tightly. Sasuke also enters a void where he stands there looking as if he too has failed. From behind a hand rests on his shoulder. Itachi stands there with a smile on his face.

Itachi: "Sasuke."

Sasuke: "Itachi!!! I-I failed you......I couldn't..."

Itachi: "Relax Sasuke, how exactly did you fail me?"

Sasuke: "I couldn't defeat Madara. I couldn't become Hokage. I couldn't protect Konoha. I-"

Itachi: "Become Hokage? You, you chose to protect the village? So you came to that resolve?"

Tears begin to fall from Itachi's eyes after hearing Sasuke's resolve.

Itachi: "I'm so proud of you Sasuke."

Fugaku and Mikoto Simultaneously: "As are we."

Sasuke: "Mother!!!! Father!!"

Fugaku: "It's good to see you again my son. But you do not belong here. You are destined for greatness my child. Just know we always loved you and we always will. I'm proud of you my son."

Mikoto: "Your father is right Sasuke. You'll always be my baby. Even if we are here."

Sasuke cannot help but cry after hearing those words. He begins running towards them but they fade out of view. Naruto is shown with Jiraiya, who appears to be taking his leave.

Naruto: "And I managed to change Nagato! I chose not to avenge you because it would just keep the cycle going."

Jiraiya: "Just as I envisioned. Naruto, you will save the world. Your time on the world isn't up just yet. Maybe later we'll see each other, but no time soon. Besides, you still have to become Hokage! I'll always love you like a son I never had Naruto....Remember that."

Naruto: "I will Pervy Sage. I won't Madara carry out that plan!"

Jiraiya smirks and crosses his arms as he fades out of view. Naruto drifts into a radiant room where he can also see Sasuke standing.

Naruto: "Sasuke!?"

Sasuke: "Naruto...So you're..."

Naruto: "......With us here how will they stop Madara?

Sasuke: "......"

The scene changes to the battle between Hiruzen and Spiral Zetsu. Three of his clones have been destroyed. Two remain and hold their ground against the threat.

Hiruzen: 'He's just too powerful!'

Spiral Zetsu: "I already told you, you shall not pass!!!!"

The wooden statue holds its multiple arms out and the tips of the fingers chakra gathers. Multiple beams of energy fire out from each hand. Hiruzen holds a hand seal and so does the clone, slamming their palms on the earth afterwards. A massive stone wall stands before the shinobi, defending them but to no use. The powerful beams shatter the wall and devastate the area, killing many. Hiruzen's body is left to regenerate. But while doing so it is bound to the ground by black rods thrown by Spiral Zetsu.

Spiral Zetsu: "Should have told me how it felt to poo...."

From behind the Zetsu Suigetsu appears, holding his fist at his side. He immediately punches the air behind Spiral Zetsu, sending multiple slugs made of water outwards with tremendous force.

Suigetsu: "Water Shotgun!!" 'I cannot believe they have me picking the fight first......'

Spiral Zetsu: "!?!?"

Spiral Zetsu jumps from the statue's head, avoiding the scattering slugs as they blast one of the smaller wooden heads, destroying the portion of the wooden head.

Spiral Zetsu: "A Hozuki? Oooooh, I wonder how you guys poo! I figure it's be something like diarrhea! Am I right?"

Jugo joins Suigetsu's side while Orochimaru traps Spiral Zetsu in the middle by appearing behind the enemy.

Suigetsu: "Enough with the poo talk!!! You sick bastard!"

Orochimaru: "It's about time we join this battle."

Hiruzen: "Orochimaru....."

The scene changes back to Sasuke and Naruto as they aimlessly walk in the radiance of the mysterious room.

Naruto: "Just where are we!?"

Sasuke: "If I knew I'd tell you......"

????: "You are in the Pure World."

The two young shinobi turn their heads in the direction of the voice only to see a figure standing in the light.

Naruto: "Who are you??"

Sasuke: 'Could this be...?'

Who is this mysterious figure that stands before Naruto and Sasuke!?

Naruto 663 End

Ps. Sorry about the lack of action.....Not like one of my usuals.
 
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Action doesnt matter.i'm pretty sure you're mentioning the hermit of six paths.sooner or later he should come because he's the reason for the existence of shinobi and this war.it felt nice reading your prediction.good job.
 

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Really good, Espically the"you shall not pass"...
 

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Good feels man +rep
 

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Did you read my thread before making this haha ^_^
 

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Awesome prediction man..I loved it :) Why not have Kushina also in the void though?
 

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nice dude ,,,,,,,,
 

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No problem it was good
 

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Excellent prediction ! excellent pace of plot and everything

well done and keep it up !
 

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Purely superb job!!! I liked your prediction. It would have become best if only Sasuke's parents waited for him on the other side since Itachi is already happy with how Sasuke was.
:win: :win: :win:
BTW, not every prediction requires action. This prediction didn't even need much action
 

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Very well done , Sasuke meeting his parents now thats something worth seeing . I would love it if , Mikoto tells Sasuke that she and Kushina were friends not only that but Fukaku and Minato were in the same team .
 

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Great prediction.
 

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loved it! Doesn't matter about the lack of action!
 

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Nice job.. You poo on all the other prediction
 

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very interesting, enjoyed it

+ rep
 

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Naruto 663: The Pure World
Spiral Zetsu: "A Hozuki? Oooooh, I wonder how you guys poo! I figure it's be something like diarrhea! Am I right?"[/b]


hahahhahahahahah
 

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if this happens i will be so happy xd nice prediction
 
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