uchiha asuku aliyu
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Scene shows naruto's body falling on gaara's sand, killer bee turns to look but gyuki tells him to concentrate or he ends up like naruto
Gaara : no naruto you can't go now we need you
Meanwhile kakshi and minato will be shown breathing heavily
Minato : i don't know how but he has been able to counter almost all of our jutsus
Kakashi looking: but i think he is getting exhausted, minato now looks at zetsu/obito who is also breathing heavily
Zobito : i don't know why obito keeps fighting back.
Just yhen minato eyes widened
Dark kurama : it seems like madara has managed to remove my other half from your sons body
Minato : damn, is naruto okay.
Dark kurama : even though he has uzumaki blood in him i don't think he was as strong as his mother because i don't feel his chakra anymore he now looks up at minato your son is dead
Kakashi : looking at minato as tears drips out of minato's eyes "whats wrong sensie"
Minato clenches his fist " i won't let you go away with this, madara"
Kakashi now kneels down looking at the ground " the war is over naruto can't die"
Zobito : smiling these is my chance to end this two he says rushing towards them when he totally loses control of obito.
Meanwhile madara stands smiling " there goes you reason for fighting he is dead, just stop fighting and i might spare you"
Tobirama looking angrily at madara " damn you, madara"
Hiruzen just quietly sheding tears
Oro: " in the end it's still darkness, the boy treid but he didn't stand a chance"
Tsunade : clenches her fist in anger screaming at top of her voice " i will kill you madara"
Just then sakura pushes away gaara and bends down over naruto " please don't do these to me, don't do these to us, don't do these to hinata you promised her that you will finish this fight" sakura says crying
Gaara now sees looks at madara as the second tails got sealed into the mazo " i have to help killer bee sama" he says and begins to walk away when sakura said " tell naruto i love him and he will always be my hero" gaara now turns and sees her putting her both hands on naruto's chest
Gaara " what are you doing sakura"
Sakura " the same thing elder chiyo did" an image of elder chiyo saving gaara
Gaara " no, sakura you will have to die"
Sakura : " i know but naruto's presence is more important than mine"
Just then sasuke is shown holding her hands " don't be so reckless and selfish sakura ". Sakura widens her eyes in suprise
Sakura : sa sa sauske kun
Sasuke : naruto might be more important but the truth is that if you were to die bringin him back naruto will never forgive himselve and he might end up loosing himselve to hatred towards madara so just let me handle madara, gaara go help bee sama while i go handle madara
Sasuke is shown walking towards madara an image of naruto is shown behind him.
Sakura : "sasuke pLease don't die"
Sasuke " you don't understand do you, the monet baruto kun died his burden became mine and even if i were to die i wiLl not die without ending this war right here, i know these sounds wrong but it is my will of fire"
Sakura eyes widens then she smiles
Gaara is shown helping bee while sasuke is shown walking slowly towards madar
Madara "uchiha brat step back or you die too"
Sasuke : smirks " me die? I have been saving this fight on the day that i am to fight naruto but since his no more, i will give it to you" sasuke says looking at madara as a ps with sage mode markings on the susanoo forms around sasuke
Madara : " as if thats enough to scratch me"
Sasuke : " i am not through" he says as his susanoo grows even biggerm just then madara eyes will widen
Madara : what are these, he pauses for a moment then he smiles unbelievable a susanoo with wings
Sasuke will be shown with a very large susanoo that has wing holding yata mirror and tsotsuka sword
Oro : smiling my experiments has finally paid off
Sasuke : you going down madara
Madara : this brat seems intresting
Just then minato and kakashi appears besides sasuke then the remaining edo kages and the four kages
All together : you going to pay for your actions
Madara in his thoughts things are getting interesting he then looks up and says " make me"
Naruto will be seen in a dark place walking blindly when he heard a voice calling our his name
He now turns and sees a man walking towards him
Naruto : where am i ?
Man : that thin line between the living and the dead
Naruto looking confused : who are you?
Man smiling : "rokudo senin"
Naruto eyes widen : "sage of the six paths"
The two finally meets please i know there are typing errors so please bear with me
Gaara : no naruto you can't go now we need you
Meanwhile kakshi and minato will be shown breathing heavily
Minato : i don't know how but he has been able to counter almost all of our jutsus
Kakashi looking: but i think he is getting exhausted, minato now looks at zetsu/obito who is also breathing heavily
Zobito : i don't know why obito keeps fighting back.
Just yhen minato eyes widened
Dark kurama : it seems like madara has managed to remove my other half from your sons body
Minato : damn, is naruto okay.
Dark kurama : even though he has uzumaki blood in him i don't think he was as strong as his mother because i don't feel his chakra anymore he now looks up at minato your son is dead
Kakashi : looking at minato as tears drips out of minato's eyes "whats wrong sensie"
Minato clenches his fist " i won't let you go away with this, madara"
Kakashi now kneels down looking at the ground " the war is over naruto can't die"
Zobito : smiling these is my chance to end this two he says rushing towards them when he totally loses control of obito.
Meanwhile madara stands smiling " there goes you reason for fighting he is dead, just stop fighting and i might spare you"
Tobirama looking angrily at madara " damn you, madara"
Hiruzen just quietly sheding tears
Oro: " in the end it's still darkness, the boy treid but he didn't stand a chance"
Tsunade : clenches her fist in anger screaming at top of her voice " i will kill you madara"
Just then sakura pushes away gaara and bends down over naruto " please don't do these to me, don't do these to us, don't do these to hinata you promised her that you will finish this fight" sakura says crying
Gaara now sees looks at madara as the second tails got sealed into the mazo " i have to help killer bee sama" he says and begins to walk away when sakura said " tell naruto i love him and he will always be my hero" gaara now turns and sees her putting her both hands on naruto's chest
Gaara " what are you doing sakura"
Sakura " the same thing elder chiyo did" an image of elder chiyo saving gaara
Gaara " no, sakura you will have to die"
Sakura : " i know but naruto's presence is more important than mine"
Just then sasuke is shown holding her hands " don't be so reckless and selfish sakura ". Sakura widens her eyes in suprise
Sakura : sa sa sauske kun
Sasuke : naruto might be more important but the truth is that if you were to die bringin him back naruto will never forgive himselve and he might end up loosing himselve to hatred towards madara so just let me handle madara, gaara go help bee sama while i go handle madara
Sasuke is shown walking towards madara an image of naruto is shown behind him.
Sakura : "sasuke pLease don't die"
Sasuke " you don't understand do you, the monet baruto kun died his burden became mine and even if i were to die i wiLl not die without ending this war right here, i know these sounds wrong but it is my will of fire"
Sakura eyes widens then she smiles
Gaara is shown helping bee while sasuke is shown walking slowly towards madar
Madara "uchiha brat step back or you die too"
Sasuke : smirks " me die? I have been saving this fight on the day that i am to fight naruto but since his no more, i will give it to you" sasuke says looking at madara as a ps with sage mode markings on the susanoo forms around sasuke
Madara : " as if thats enough to scratch me"
Sasuke : " i am not through" he says as his susanoo grows even biggerm just then madara eyes will widen
Madara : what are these, he pauses for a moment then he smiles unbelievable a susanoo with wings
Sasuke will be shown with a very large susanoo that has wing holding yata mirror and tsotsuka sword
Oro : smiling my experiments has finally paid off
Sasuke : you going down madara
Madara : this brat seems intresting
Just then minato and kakashi appears besides sasuke then the remaining edo kages and the four kages
All together : you going to pay for your actions
Madara in his thoughts things are getting interesting he then looks up and says " make me"
Naruto will be seen in a dark place walking blindly when he heard a voice calling our his name
He now turns and sees a man walking towards him
Naruto : where am i ?
Man : that thin line between the living and the dead
Naruto looking confused : who are you?
Man smiling : "rokudo senin"
Naruto eyes widen : "sage of the six paths"
The two finally meets please i know there are typing errors so please bear with me
. You definatly have potential, and i will look forward to seeing more from you. Just spend more time writing these, and they will truly be awesome! + rep
