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NOTE: This is an entirely different prediction. This isn't a continuation of my first 661 prediction; I'll work on that later.
Naruto 661: Redemption!
Naruto's motionless body is left descending to the ground. The Bijuu are pulled in towards the Gedo Mazo and sealed into the giant statue. Madara watches in amusement as everything goes his way. Gaara raises his hand, causing a large hand made of sand to rise from the ground and catch Naruto in its palm. Slowly, he lowers him to his side. The Konoha shinobi look on in fear of their friend's life.
Gaara: "Naruto.....Naruto....Can you hear me?"
Naruto's eyes are barely open. He doesn't look full of life anymore and his chakra signature grows weak and feint. Sweat drops from his forehead down to his cheek alongside his face. Hinata seems to be trembling at the sight and Sakura quickly moves in to tend to Naruto.
Sakura: "Naruto!!"
The tentacle from Gyuki squirms on the sand before transforming into a weakened Killer Bee, who's still alive thanks to Gyuki's chakra from the tentacle. The Cloud ninja coughs several times before looking up at Naruto, who's life is in danger.
Killer Bee: 'Naruto......'
Madara looks down at the statue as it completes the sealing method. The Gedo Mazo begins roaring out from the chakra it has just devoured.
Zetsu: "That was fast. Now you have sufficient time to go and fetch your other eye."
Madara: "My will can handle that, now that Obito seems to be manipulated. Besides, that Octo-freak still has some of the Hachibi's chakra. I'll have some fun with them while the Gedo Mazo begins it's metamorphosis. I'll begin with taking out the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki, everyone seems to love him."
Zetsu: "Cold as always."
Madara jumps from the Gedo Mazo's head as it begins changing its form. Once landing he holds a seal, enclosing the giant statue in a barrier made of super-heated flames. The Susano'o then forms around the Uchiha and begins its attack by hurling two blades at the downed Naruto. Gaara quickly takes notice of the weapons and sends massive hands of sand to deflect the swords.
Madara: "You are a nuisance sand rat..."
Gaara: "You will not harm Naruto any further!!"
Killer Bee: "Awwww yea!! That's the Kazekage for yah he's the main man! How will you stop him and his defensive sand!?"
A miniature Gyuki remains in Killer Bee's subconscious regaining its energy. It opens one eye at the sound of Killer Bee and shakes its head.
Gyuki: "Even at a time like this you still have time for your silly rhymes?"
Killer Bee: "That was a good one! I'm too weak to protect my boy Naruto but at least I can cheer on the ones who are doing the job for me!"
Sakura continues healing Naruto but it doesn't seem to have any effect. The problem isn't a wound but the lack of chakra. Gaara's hands on the other hand catch the blades. But another pair slide underneath them to continue towards the target. Fortunately, Gaara has learned from the previous time and two large hands rise to intercept the blades' trajectory.
Gaara: "Not this time!"
Madara: "So you thought...."
Madara focuses on the hands and they both explode from a repelling force, allowing the blades to pass through. Gaara stares wide-eyed, unable to believe what happened. Sakura ceases her healing and turns her head towards the incoming projectiles, bracing herself for a hit.
Hinata: "Gentle Step: Twin Lion Roar!!"
Hinata immediately steps in front of Gaara, Naruto, and Sakura. She sets her two enveloped palms out and the lion heads enclosing them roar as she thrusts her palm forward. The force deflects the Susano'o blades.
Madara: "So they're all coming to this boy's side? And what a pretty nice Hyuga technique. I wonder what would happen if I kill this one first...."
Madara charges at Hinata as she stands in front of her lover. She is ready to defend him at all costs. Gaara pants and manipulates sand to rey and grab Madara but it's not use; he's too fast!
Gaara: "Hinata!!!!! Move!!!!"
Hinata: 'This time......I'll really protect you Naruto.'
Sakura: "!!!!!"
Madara: "Foolish girl."
Madara lunges at Hinata to impale her with a blade but a massive arrow infused with Senjutsu markings is shot at Madara. The Uchiha places out the blade to block but it shatters and the arrow hits the rib-like barrier, cracking it and sending Madara flying back. Sasuke and Jugo land in front of Hinata moments after.
Jugo: "Good hit Sasuke."
Killer Bee: "Oh shit! I remember those eyes! I can't believe that he just saved our lives!! Yea booooooy!"
Sasuke: "Hinata, get away from here. You too Gaara. We'll handle this from here."
Madara stands to his feet and smirks, beginning to walk towards Sasuke and Jugo.
Madara: "My own blood turning against me.....Eh, I'm used to it. I'm afrai-"
The Uchiha quickly shifts his gaze at the ground and jumps back as large snakes try to strike him with their fangs. Madara quickly slashes at them, decapitating a few before landing back. Orochimaru, Suigetsu, and Karin land beside Sasuke and Jugo.
Orochimaru: "It's about time I join this, don't you think Sasuke?"
Suigetsu: "Dammit!! I'm always getting dragged into crazy shit!! I should have-"
Karin, in a comedic fashion, punches Suigetsu.
Karin: "Shut up already!!!"
Sasuke: "Karin, go and give Naruto some of your chakra. You and him are from the same clan so it should help him a lot. The rest of us will fend Madara off."
Karin: 'How'd he.?' "Got it!!"
Karin runs back to Naruto's side and gives Sakura a nod before rolling up her sleeve.
Karin: "Bite."
Naruto weakly bites onto Karin's arm, beginning to restore his chakra.
Sasuke: "It's time."
Suigetsu: "Shit....This is gonna be troublesome."
Jugo: "Guess I have no choice but to resort to my Stage Three transformation..."
Orochimaru: "Hmmm...Let's see what kind of power this Dragon Sage mode will grant me."
Madara: "Now I'm pumped!"
The panel ends with Sasuke's hair rising upwards from the powerful chakra he's exerting, forming his Perfect Susano'o. Jugo's markings are spreading across his body and steam is releasing from pores on his shoulders. Suigetsu simply draws the Decapitator Blade. Orochimaru holds his hands together and horns begin to grow from his head as he begins to enter Sage Mode. Madara's Susano'o takes full shape. Will they successfully fend off the threat that is Madara!?!?
Chapter End!
NOTE: Got into it....I apologize for the length.
Naruto 661: Redemption!
Naruto's motionless body is left descending to the ground. The Bijuu are pulled in towards the Gedo Mazo and sealed into the giant statue. Madara watches in amusement as everything goes his way. Gaara raises his hand, causing a large hand made of sand to rise from the ground and catch Naruto in its palm. Slowly, he lowers him to his side. The Konoha shinobi look on in fear of their friend's life.
Gaara: "Naruto.....Naruto....Can you hear me?"
Naruto's eyes are barely open. He doesn't look full of life anymore and his chakra signature grows weak and feint. Sweat drops from his forehead down to his cheek alongside his face. Hinata seems to be trembling at the sight and Sakura quickly moves in to tend to Naruto.
Sakura: "Naruto!!"
The tentacle from Gyuki squirms on the sand before transforming into a weakened Killer Bee, who's still alive thanks to Gyuki's chakra from the tentacle. The Cloud ninja coughs several times before looking up at Naruto, who's life is in danger.
Killer Bee: 'Naruto......'
Madara looks down at the statue as it completes the sealing method. The Gedo Mazo begins roaring out from the chakra it has just devoured.
Zetsu: "That was fast. Now you have sufficient time to go and fetch your other eye."
Madara: "My will can handle that, now that Obito seems to be manipulated. Besides, that Octo-freak still has some of the Hachibi's chakra. I'll have some fun with them while the Gedo Mazo begins it's metamorphosis. I'll begin with taking out the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki, everyone seems to love him."
Zetsu: "Cold as always."
Madara jumps from the Gedo Mazo's head as it begins changing its form. Once landing he holds a seal, enclosing the giant statue in a barrier made of super-heated flames. The Susano'o then forms around the Uchiha and begins its attack by hurling two blades at the downed Naruto. Gaara quickly takes notice of the weapons and sends massive hands of sand to deflect the swords.
Madara: "You are a nuisance sand rat..."
Gaara: "You will not harm Naruto any further!!"
Killer Bee: "Awwww yea!! That's the Kazekage for yah he's the main man! How will you stop him and his defensive sand!?"
A miniature Gyuki remains in Killer Bee's subconscious regaining its energy. It opens one eye at the sound of Killer Bee and shakes its head.
Gyuki: "Even at a time like this you still have time for your silly rhymes?"
Killer Bee: "That was a good one! I'm too weak to protect my boy Naruto but at least I can cheer on the ones who are doing the job for me!"
Sakura continues healing Naruto but it doesn't seem to have any effect. The problem isn't a wound but the lack of chakra. Gaara's hands on the other hand catch the blades. But another pair slide underneath them to continue towards the target. Fortunately, Gaara has learned from the previous time and two large hands rise to intercept the blades' trajectory.
Gaara: "Not this time!"
Madara: "So you thought...."
Madara focuses on the hands and they both explode from a repelling force, allowing the blades to pass through. Gaara stares wide-eyed, unable to believe what happened. Sakura ceases her healing and turns her head towards the incoming projectiles, bracing herself for a hit.
Hinata: "Gentle Step: Twin Lion Roar!!"
Hinata immediately steps in front of Gaara, Naruto, and Sakura. She sets her two enveloped palms out and the lion heads enclosing them roar as she thrusts her palm forward. The force deflects the Susano'o blades.
Madara: "So they're all coming to this boy's side? And what a pretty nice Hyuga technique. I wonder what would happen if I kill this one first...."
Madara charges at Hinata as she stands in front of her lover. She is ready to defend him at all costs. Gaara pants and manipulates sand to rey and grab Madara but it's not use; he's too fast!
Gaara: "Hinata!!!!! Move!!!!"
Hinata: 'This time......I'll really protect you Naruto.'
Sakura: "!!!!!"
Madara: "Foolish girl."
Madara lunges at Hinata to impale her with a blade but a massive arrow infused with Senjutsu markings is shot at Madara. The Uchiha places out the blade to block but it shatters and the arrow hits the rib-like barrier, cracking it and sending Madara flying back. Sasuke and Jugo land in front of Hinata moments after.
Jugo: "Good hit Sasuke."
Killer Bee: "Oh shit! I remember those eyes! I can't believe that he just saved our lives!! Yea booooooy!"
Sasuke: "Hinata, get away from here. You too Gaara. We'll handle this from here."
Madara stands to his feet and smirks, beginning to walk towards Sasuke and Jugo.
Madara: "My own blood turning against me.....Eh, I'm used to it. I'm afrai-"
The Uchiha quickly shifts his gaze at the ground and jumps back as large snakes try to strike him with their fangs. Madara quickly slashes at them, decapitating a few before landing back. Orochimaru, Suigetsu, and Karin land beside Sasuke and Jugo.
Orochimaru: "It's about time I join this, don't you think Sasuke?"
Suigetsu: "Dammit!! I'm always getting dragged into crazy shit!! I should have-"
Karin, in a comedic fashion, punches Suigetsu.
Karin: "Shut up already!!!"
Sasuke: "Karin, go and give Naruto some of your chakra. You and him are from the same clan so it should help him a lot. The rest of us will fend Madara off."
Karin: 'How'd he.?' "Got it!!"
Karin runs back to Naruto's side and gives Sakura a nod before rolling up her sleeve.
Karin: "Bite."
Naruto weakly bites onto Karin's arm, beginning to restore his chakra.
Sasuke: "It's time."
Suigetsu: "Shit....This is gonna be troublesome."
Jugo: "Guess I have no choice but to resort to my Stage Three transformation..."
Orochimaru: "Hmmm...Let's see what kind of power this Dragon Sage mode will grant me."
Madara: "Now I'm pumped!"
The panel ends with Sasuke's hair rising upwards from the powerful chakra he's exerting, forming his Perfect Susano'o. Jugo's markings are spreading across his body and steam is releasing from pores on his shoulders. Suigetsu simply draws the Decapitator Blade. Orochimaru holds his hands together and horns begin to grow from his head as he begins to enter Sage Mode. Madara's Susano'o takes full shape. Will they successfully fend off the threat that is Madara!?!?
Chapter End!
NOTE: Got into it....I apologize for the length.
