[Predictions] Naruto 661: Connected

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Naruto : ...ku..ra...ma i .....

and Naruto fell on the ground

Madara : It's time to change the mazo to the original Juubi..... In the mean i will play with
these shinbobi..... i will start with killing the heart of the alliance.

Madara was looking at Naruto

Zetsu : He is persistent .....still not dead even with the bijuu

The Edo Hokages came to save except Hashirama he's edo tensei was weakenend by Madara's chakra absorption

Hiruzen : Naruto we are coming!
Madara : I don't thinks so Uchiha : Fire flame formation!

A huge sealing barrier covered the Hokages but Minato was able to escape with the Hirashin

Madara saw this

Madara : Impressive......Rinnegan .....Banshoten!
Minato was pulled towards Madara

Minato : ........Sorry Naruto i wanted to give you the other kurama's power....i failed
i couldn't help .....this is......al my fault

Madara : You have a part of the kyuubi...... GEZO MAZO

Naruto was lying there he did not have the strenght to move but he saw
his father being sucked in the mazo

Madara : Now there is only one more thing

Madara stepped on the ground walking towards Naruto.

The kages came were coming Madara made 10 clones Susanoo to deal with them

The tshuchikage and tsunade were crying
Tshuchikage: Naruto........i am......sorry......

Tsunade was still cryinging thinking of Nawaki and the promise with the necklace to Naruto while the Susanoo
clones of Madara were walking towards them.
Tsunade : PLEASE NARUTO YOU MUST BECOME HOKAGE ........

Tsunade fell to here knees

Tsunade : You....just have .....to...

Naruto... did not catch any of it

Madara was almost were Naruto was

Madara : Goodbye Naruto GRAND FIRE DESTRUCTION!

Gaara : SAND SHIELD!

Gaara: This boy......Uzumaki Naruto.....he is our saviour......he works hard..
he doesn't give up...even now he is trying to get on his feet... he's strength of will
will change the shinobi world.

Madara : ............Yasaka Maga tama!

Shikamaru : Schadow strangle jutsu..........That's right we all believe in him
Kiba : Yeah
Hinato : right( i know Naruto-kun will make it he always does)
Shino: ..........

Gaara : You of Yamanaka clan come fast!
Ino : ...uhh? yeah

Gaara : This is the Kazekage this is a request from the kyuubi no.... Kurama

Gaara told what Kurama told him to all the Shinobi

Shikamaru : I ....can't..... hold him...
Gaara : All of you go now!

Sasuke came running towards Madara

Sasuke : Susanoo sword!
Madara : Susanoo

The sword of Sasuke susanoo was caught! By Madara Susanoo and then Madara threw Sasuke with Susanoo in the sky while Sasuke was in the sky

Sasuke : Yasaka Magatama
Madara formed armour around his Susanoo and the Magata didn't even scratch him.

Madara : It's time to die Uchiha boy


Naruto : FUUTON RASENSHURIKEN


Madara : Standing again ........Naruto
 
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UchihaMifune

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Was good except for the whole kages crying bit. I don't really see that happening. Also why would madara finish naruto off with a fire jutsu? To me it seems like he would toy with him or something before dying. Sorry I didn't come here to criticize, overall I liked it :)
 
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Wouldn't Minato be able to just teleport away or hurl a tbb at Madara while being pulled by the rinegan?
 

Byron123

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Now that was as random as f*ck, too much of drama queen and the first dialogues seemed completely off character.
 

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Not bad, can be better if you try
 
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