kuramasage
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Been a while since I've done something like this. First off, I'd like to iterate that my fanfic (What-If Naruto) is NOT discontinued. I have a lot of ideas and a good outline of where I'm going for the next few chapters. I've just been busy and am struggling to find the motivation to sit down and type a whole chapter out. I'll hopefully restart it soon. For now, I hope you enjoy this prediction. In case you've forgotten:
() Thinking
[] Action
<> Flashback
A light to strive to!
[The scene opens with Naruto still charging the Giant Rasenshuriken.]
Naruto: (Damn, I'm drained! This'll take a while...)
Obito: Is that it Kakashi? Despite all the lies and corruption, you see light in this world?
Kakashi: I see....Naruto. And my biggest regret is that you merged with the darkness instead of standing tall and facing the despair.
Minato:Obito......
Obito: So, that's it huh? The path I chose.....Infinite Tsukuyomi....it was all.....[stares at the dying Shinju] my lie.
[Obito raises his hand upwards to where Naruto is charging his attack atop the Shinju...when he suddenly seizes up and starts coughing blood.]
Kakashi/Minato: What!
Obito: Uhhh, I guess my time in this world is finally up [holds his heart as he trembles]...I could only last out so long after losing the Biju.
Minato: This is the best ending we could get?!
Obito: I deserve death for my unforgivable actions Sensei...I embrace it... but remember....I died as Obito Uchiha!
Obito: I was a war orphan, Team Minato was my chance to be acknowledged [Taka and the Konoha 11 and Sai are running ahead] but I fell to disgrace and become what we despised [the dead on the battlefield are shown]. However, he's truly different - Naruto Uzumaki! (hehe, what a nice name and all.)
Obito: Look at them [wide view of the Shinobi Alliance running] they flock to him. Not for protection, not for self-glory, no it's because they want to help him! This world [the Shinju is falling apart and receding from the moon] is indeed, however slowly, correcting its mistakes! Naruto is a special child...the way to peace. He can succeed. [Naruto and his clones concentrating as they charge the attack].
Obito: He will win us peace. He'll make you Sensei, Lady Kushina, Jiraiya, the Sage of the Six Paths....very proud. He might even win the girl...[a side by side panel of Sakura and Rin]. Sensei, Kakashi thank you for giving me a good send-off.
<Naruto grabbing Obito's hand>
Obito:You were right....the Will of Fire never dies!
[With that final bold statement Obito sucumbs to his injuries and dies.]
Kakashi: Looks like I'll still have to be your light in this world. [He kneels down and closes Obito's eyes.]
Hashirama: Wood Style: Wood Spikes Ring!
[Madara blocks with his Gunbai and dodges around to avoid the rest of the spikes.]
Madara: I'm not do...What the.?!
Hashirama: Looks like the Shinobi Alliance won, it's over Madara.
Madara: (They beat Obito..) I won't quit! I'll still steal your Sage powers and then I can start again!
[Madara uses Almighty Pull to bash Hashirama into boulders and kicks him in the head. When Hashirama stands up Madara appears behind him with a rod in hand.]
Madara: (Now!)
???: Fire Style: Dragon Flame Breath!
Hashirama: Hiruzen! [Madara is knocked out of the way.]
[Madara activates Susano'o and tries to slash them. He is stopped when he is enveloped in sand.]
Madara: The Kazekage...he's trapped my Susano'o!
[Madara is forced to cancel his Susano'o and summons two Wood Clones whom throw him out of the sand but get buried themselves.]
Madara: Why you...(Izuna..?)
[Sasuke has also arrived and stands before Madara!]
Sasuke: The traitor Madara Uchiha....good to finally meet face to face.
Madara: I knew an Uchiha was with the Alliance but one so similar to Izuna...
Sasuke: I'm the only survivor of the Uchiha Massacre..
Madara: (Massacre...Obito must have eliminated them so as to have one less threat to intervene.)
Sasuke: I'll end you! Chidori Sharp Spear!
[Madara absorbs it through the Preta Path and launches missiles due to the Asura Path at Sasuke.]
Madara:You'll have to try harder than that hatchling!
Ay: Lariat! Remember me!?
[Madara is pushed back as he tries to keep up with Ay's immense speed. He manages to find an opening but comes under fire from Onoki. Madara sweats under the pressure but soon escapes Onoki's range and is able to grab Ay's hand and throw him into Hiruzen. He then runs towards Onoki and has to avoid sand and Particle blasts. He managaes to jump off a sand attack and get up to Onoki, slamming him to the ground with a Suano'o arm. Next he bounds off to Gaara and beats down the young Sand shinobi.]
Naruto: (Almost there, any moment now...he's spotted me!)
[With a smirk, Madara activates Perfect Susano'o and runs towards Naruto's location. He is met halfway by a mass of purple chakra....Sasuke's Perfect Susano'o, which he proceeds to stabilise.]
Karin: (Sasuke-kun is so..)
Hashirama: I'll lend a hand, or a thousand! [He summons the buddha statue which dwarfs even the Perfect Susano'os!]
[Sasuke and Madara clash blades when the buddha grabs Madara's and chokeslams it. As it tries to get back up, the buddha decks it across the battlefield. Madara counters with a diagonal slash across its whole body. Madara rapidly repeats this motion but the buddha punches the slashes and powers on, until it grabs the Susano'o.Madara fires missiles at it to break the grasp while Sasuke's Susano'o moves forward and stabs Madara's. The buddha then shoulder tackles Madara's, creating distance between them and Sasuke.]
Madara: Don't underestimate me!
[He uses Almighty Push through his Perfect Susano'o, causing a massive crater which knocks over Sasuke and severely damages the buddha statue.]
Hashirama: [Gets his buddha to get up from it's knees to assume a very groggy standing position.] The Rinnegan truly is something else...
Madara: I got it from you. I'll explain - win or lose, the purpose of our fight at the Valley of the End was to get your DNA. I used Izanagai to survive the stab and escape. In my old age I finally achieved Rinnegan from combining Sharingan with Senju DNA. I used Zetsu, my aid created with your DNA, to transfer my own, new combined DNA to a young Uzumaki boy named Nagato. When he fell to despair it awakened in him too!
Sasuke: Nice story but...you aren't some kind of God! I'm ending this! Uuhwhoaaaaa!
[Sasuke focuses deeply and is able to coat an arm of his Perfect Susano'o and its sword in Amaterasu flames!]
Tobirama: (That's how it's done..)
[Madara and Sasuke engage again, this time with Sasuke knocking back Madara's sword due to his Amaterasu blade. As Sasuke pushes Madara back, Hashirama goes to help but hios buddha statue is stabbed. Sasuke takes the chance to slash Madara through the Susano'o, causing it to start to disintegrate.]
Shukaku: Don't forget us!
[The Biju take turns to attack Madara, injuring him and quickening the fall of his Susano'o.]
Madara: No, No , Nooooooo! Almighty Push! [The Biju are knocked back a little].
Naruto: Thanks! Now I don't have to tell them to move. I'm ready, bastard!
<Yamato informs Kakashi that Naruto has only 50% completed his Rasenshuriken before he engaged Kakuzu.>
Naruto: Here it is, 100% complete - my jutsu! Giant Rasenshuriken!
[Naruto jumps off the almost completely destroyed Shinju and launches his attack.]
Madara: (I'll just absorb it..)
Tobirama: We've never exactly got on..so here's a present for all our past grievances!
Madara: Tobirama you bastard, what are yo-
[Tobirama had teleported before Madara, and slashes across his eyes!]
Madara: Gwuha, (they won't regenerate in time I can't absorb it!!)
[Tobirama teleports out of the way as Madara is completely engulfed by the Giant Rasenshuriken.]
[As Madara regenerates, Hiruzen starts to seal him.]
Madara: (I failed huh) [He looks at the buddha statue.] (I can't believe it...that moron was right, not one person beat me or Obito...we were defeated by teamwork from all the nations. Unbelievable! Izuna will surely give me an earful for this. Heh, maybe just maybe....we were..I mean the world can...)
[Madara is sealed as Naruto, Hiruzen, Tobirama, the Kages and the Biju look on.]
[The buddha statue falls to pieces.]
Hashirama: We're done, huhhuh. Good job Sasuke.
[Sasuke puts his hand on Hashirama's shoulder.....and a White Zetsu groans in agony as it pops out of his body and envelops Hashirama!!]
Hashirama: What the hell!? Urguheuaourgh...Sasuke...
[A flash of light and then Hashirama's lifeless body falls to the ground as it changes back to the dead Zetsu it was revived for.]
[Sasuke raises his face to reveal Sage Mode!]
A shocking betrayal! Sasuke took Hashirama's Sage Mode!
() Thinking
[] Action
<> Flashback
A light to strive to!
[The scene opens with Naruto still charging the Giant Rasenshuriken.]
Naruto: (Damn, I'm drained! This'll take a while...)
Obito: Is that it Kakashi? Despite all the lies and corruption, you see light in this world?
Kakashi: I see....Naruto. And my biggest regret is that you merged with the darkness instead of standing tall and facing the despair.
Minato:Obito......
Obito: So, that's it huh? The path I chose.....Infinite Tsukuyomi....it was all.....[stares at the dying Shinju] my lie.
[Obito raises his hand upwards to where Naruto is charging his attack atop the Shinju...when he suddenly seizes up and starts coughing blood.]
Kakashi/Minato: What!
Obito: Uhhh, I guess my time in this world is finally up [holds his heart as he trembles]...I could only last out so long after losing the Biju.
Minato: This is the best ending we could get?!
Obito: I deserve death for my unforgivable actions Sensei...I embrace it... but remember....I died as Obito Uchiha!
Obito: I was a war orphan, Team Minato was my chance to be acknowledged [Taka and the Konoha 11 and Sai are running ahead] but I fell to disgrace and become what we despised [the dead on the battlefield are shown]. However, he's truly different - Naruto Uzumaki! (hehe, what a nice name and all.)
Obito: Look at them [wide view of the Shinobi Alliance running] they flock to him. Not for protection, not for self-glory, no it's because they want to help him! This world [the Shinju is falling apart and receding from the moon] is indeed, however slowly, correcting its mistakes! Naruto is a special child...the way to peace. He can succeed. [Naruto and his clones concentrating as they charge the attack].
Obito: He will win us peace. He'll make you Sensei, Lady Kushina, Jiraiya, the Sage of the Six Paths....very proud. He might even win the girl...[a side by side panel of Sakura and Rin]. Sensei, Kakashi thank you for giving me a good send-off.
<Naruto grabbing Obito's hand>
Obito:You were right....the Will of Fire never dies!
[With that final bold statement Obito sucumbs to his injuries and dies.]
Kakashi: Looks like I'll still have to be your light in this world. [He kneels down and closes Obito's eyes.]
Hashirama: Wood Style: Wood Spikes Ring!
[Madara blocks with his Gunbai and dodges around to avoid the rest of the spikes.]
Madara: I'm not do...What the.?!
Hashirama: Looks like the Shinobi Alliance won, it's over Madara.
Madara: (They beat Obito..) I won't quit! I'll still steal your Sage powers and then I can start again!
[Madara uses Almighty Pull to bash Hashirama into boulders and kicks him in the head. When Hashirama stands up Madara appears behind him with a rod in hand.]
Madara: (Now!)
???: Fire Style: Dragon Flame Breath!
Hashirama: Hiruzen! [Madara is knocked out of the way.]
[Madara activates Susano'o and tries to slash them. He is stopped when he is enveloped in sand.]
Madara: The Kazekage...he's trapped my Susano'o!
[Madara is forced to cancel his Susano'o and summons two Wood Clones whom throw him out of the sand but get buried themselves.]
Madara: Why you...(Izuna..?)
[Sasuke has also arrived and stands before Madara!]
Sasuke: The traitor Madara Uchiha....good to finally meet face to face.
Madara: I knew an Uchiha was with the Alliance but one so similar to Izuna...
Sasuke: I'm the only survivor of the Uchiha Massacre..
Madara: (Massacre...Obito must have eliminated them so as to have one less threat to intervene.)
Sasuke: I'll end you! Chidori Sharp Spear!
[Madara absorbs it through the Preta Path and launches missiles due to the Asura Path at Sasuke.]
Madara:You'll have to try harder than that hatchling!
Ay: Lariat! Remember me!?
[Madara is pushed back as he tries to keep up with Ay's immense speed. He manages to find an opening but comes under fire from Onoki. Madara sweats under the pressure but soon escapes Onoki's range and is able to grab Ay's hand and throw him into Hiruzen. He then runs towards Onoki and has to avoid sand and Particle blasts. He managaes to jump off a sand attack and get up to Onoki, slamming him to the ground with a Suano'o arm. Next he bounds off to Gaara and beats down the young Sand shinobi.]
Naruto: (Almost there, any moment now...he's spotted me!)
[With a smirk, Madara activates Perfect Susano'o and runs towards Naruto's location. He is met halfway by a mass of purple chakra....Sasuke's Perfect Susano'o, which he proceeds to stabilise.]
Karin: (Sasuke-kun is so..)
Hashirama: I'll lend a hand, or a thousand! [He summons the buddha statue which dwarfs even the Perfect Susano'os!]
[Sasuke and Madara clash blades when the buddha grabs Madara's and chokeslams it. As it tries to get back up, the buddha decks it across the battlefield. Madara counters with a diagonal slash across its whole body. Madara rapidly repeats this motion but the buddha punches the slashes and powers on, until it grabs the Susano'o.Madara fires missiles at it to break the grasp while Sasuke's Susano'o moves forward and stabs Madara's. The buddha then shoulder tackles Madara's, creating distance between them and Sasuke.]
Madara: Don't underestimate me!
[He uses Almighty Push through his Perfect Susano'o, causing a massive crater which knocks over Sasuke and severely damages the buddha statue.]
Hashirama: [Gets his buddha to get up from it's knees to assume a very groggy standing position.] The Rinnegan truly is something else...
Madara: I got it from you. I'll explain - win or lose, the purpose of our fight at the Valley of the End was to get your DNA. I used Izanagai to survive the stab and escape. In my old age I finally achieved Rinnegan from combining Sharingan with Senju DNA. I used Zetsu, my aid created with your DNA, to transfer my own, new combined DNA to a young Uzumaki boy named Nagato. When he fell to despair it awakened in him too!
Sasuke: Nice story but...you aren't some kind of God! I'm ending this! Uuhwhoaaaaa!
[Sasuke focuses deeply and is able to coat an arm of his Perfect Susano'o and its sword in Amaterasu flames!]
Tobirama: (That's how it's done..)
[Madara and Sasuke engage again, this time with Sasuke knocking back Madara's sword due to his Amaterasu blade. As Sasuke pushes Madara back, Hashirama goes to help but hios buddha statue is stabbed. Sasuke takes the chance to slash Madara through the Susano'o, causing it to start to disintegrate.]
Shukaku: Don't forget us!
[The Biju take turns to attack Madara, injuring him and quickening the fall of his Susano'o.]
Madara: No, No , Nooooooo! Almighty Push! [The Biju are knocked back a little].
Naruto: Thanks! Now I don't have to tell them to move. I'm ready, bastard!
<Yamato informs Kakashi that Naruto has only 50% completed his Rasenshuriken before he engaged Kakuzu.>
Naruto: Here it is, 100% complete - my jutsu! Giant Rasenshuriken!
[Naruto jumps off the almost completely destroyed Shinju and launches his attack.]
Madara: (I'll just absorb it..)
Tobirama: We've never exactly got on..so here's a present for all our past grievances!
Madara: Tobirama you bastard, what are yo-
[Tobirama had teleported before Madara, and slashes across his eyes!]
Madara: Gwuha, (they won't regenerate in time I can't absorb it!!)
[Tobirama teleports out of the way as Madara is completely engulfed by the Giant Rasenshuriken.]
[As Madara regenerates, Hiruzen starts to seal him.]
Madara: (I failed huh) [He looks at the buddha statue.] (I can't believe it...that moron was right, not one person beat me or Obito...we were defeated by teamwork from all the nations. Unbelievable! Izuna will surely give me an earful for this. Heh, maybe just maybe....we were..I mean the world can...)
[Madara is sealed as Naruto, Hiruzen, Tobirama, the Kages and the Biju look on.]
[The buddha statue falls to pieces.]
Hashirama: We're done, huhhuh. Good job Sasuke.
[Sasuke puts his hand on Hashirama's shoulder.....and a White Zetsu groans in agony as it pops out of his body and envelops Hashirama!!]
Hashirama: What the hell!? Urguheuaourgh...Sasuke...
[A flash of light and then Hashirama's lifeless body falls to the ground as it changes back to the dead Zetsu it was revived for.]
[Sasuke raises his face to reveal Sage Mode!]
A shocking betrayal! Sasuke took Hashirama's Sage Mode!
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