[Predictions] naruto 640 by mangafan321

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Minato and his clone uses the hand seals and teleports together. Suddenly minato appears in front of obito with a huge rasengan.


Minato: this is the second time you try to harm my son in my presence.


Huge blast with lot of smoke minato dissapears he and his clone is shown holding hand seals.
Naruto and sasuke are released from his hand with such a great speed that both of them create a big crater in a nearby cliff.


Naruto: damn i thought i am gonna loose my head like the third.


Sasuke: thanks to your dad for saving you for me.


Naruto: what do you mean sasuke?


Sasuke: you will know it soon enough!!!(with a devilish smile naruto looks confused)


Tobirama: so this is the fourth's jutsu. The kunai's with hiraishin marks are arranged in big radius around an object that is itself marked which is that jinchurikii the attack that comes are so fast that it seems like coming from nowhere. Hope that works.


Suddenly minato and his clones rush with huge rasengan hits him and dissapear continuously creating a series of 12 blasts. Minato and his clone stops but both are suddenly caught by juubi's arms smoke dissapears he is covered by a black sphere and he crushes the clone.


Naruto: dad!!!


Obito looks up. Soon performing the seal minato dissapears using hiraishin.


Minato: he can't be stopped with normal attacks well with our special attacks too.


Juubito jumps with a great speed towards naruto.


Sasuke: naruto look out!!!


Just the hand is about pierce naruto but minato appears in between. Holding juubito's body with his chakra arm's.


Minato: i will not let you harm my son no matter how worse you may be obito.


Obito forces his hands but his hands are caught by naruto's chakra arm's.


Minato: naruto this is not enough run!!!


Naruto panicks. Suddenly he pierces minato's body in two halves and just about to hit naruto but he dissapears while juubito's collides through large distance breaking all the hills and forests.


Suddenly in the middle of the battlefield kamui dimension opens and naruto and kakashi comes.

Naruto: sensei!!!


sakura: sensei!!!


Sasuke: kakashi.


Minato: is that kakashi unbeleivable he came out from nowhere huff atleast my son is saved thats all i wanted.


Kakashi: where is obito???


Naruto: he has became uglier than what he was?


Kakashi: what do you mean and where is juubi?


Naruto: sensei,he has become it's jinchurikii.


Kakashi: worse than i thought i saw him using a hand seal that was almost killing him no wonder he is almost equal to invincible now.


Scene changes to madara and hashirama.


Hashirama holding madara in a thick wood branch.


Madara:This is an old technique hashi. Universal push!!!


It breaks the woods then a universal pull.


Hashirama: he is grown unbeleivabily stronger.


Hashirama flies to him and madara catches him by his collar and says now its my time to show something extremely new.


Scene ends showing his rinnegan.


The end.
hope enjoy the manga ignoring the gramatical mistakes.
 
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It's okay.. but there are alot of things they would never say
 

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Pretty good. However I'm seeing two different things.

1. I'm guessing some of the dialogue will be different. The part with Sasuke will not happen. He's completely focus in combat so he isn't pulling an Uchiha rape face. Also I don't see Minato going all defensive about hurting his son nor telling him to run.

2. The alliance was shown last chapter and a bit before so they are probably going to start acting.



Still a great read. Though don't get discouraged if barely anyone posts. Many times people will read them but hardly comment. I actually didn't plan to post until I saw your other thread.....on that note...some people don't like it when you make an advertisement thread. Instead find people who commented on this one or people on your friends list. Ask them to read it and give their opinion. Feel free to ask me on my wall whenever you make one.


Thanks for the read.
 

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Cool prediction bro!
 

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Some of the things Minato said like my son is safe...that's all I wanted were out of character.....but the what Madara said...this is an old technique Hashirama sounded just like something he'd say! All in all, enjoyed reading it! Nice!
 

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I think the great thing about Hashirama is that he doesn't have a dojutsu yet he's still seen as one of the strongest shinobi ever, I want it to stay that way, but other than that, very nice ^.^
 
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good prediction bro... some dialogues were a little unhappenable but all in all it was fun and last part was especially exciting!!
 

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Man, that was awesome. I really liked it, not as other ppl shitty predictions.
 

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this is good,,,, seems possible.. hope we will see some of facts in next chapter....
 

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Minato and his clone uses the hand seals and teleports together. Suddenly minato appears in front of obito with a huge rasengan.


Minato: this is the second time you try to harm my son in my presence.


Huge blast with lot of smoke minato dissapears he and his clone is shown holding hand seals.
Naruto and sasuke are released from his hand with such a great speed that both of them create a big crater in a nearby cliff.


Naruto: damn i thought i am gonna loose my head like the third.


Sasuke: thanks to your dad for saving you for me.


Naruto: what do you mean sasuke?


Sasuke: you will know it soon enough!!!(with a devilish smile naruto looks confused)


Tobirama: so this is the fourth's jutsu. The kunai's with hiraishin marks are arranged in big radius around an object that is itself marked which is that jinchurikii the attack that comes are so fast that it seems like coming from nowhere. Hope that works.


Suddenly minato and his clones rush with huge rasengan hits him and dissapear continuously creating a series of 12 blasts. Minato and his clone stops but both are suddenly caught by juubi's arms smoke dissapears he is covered by a black sphere and he crushes the clone.


Naruto: dad!!!


Obito looks up. Soon performing the seal minato dissapears using hiraishin.


Minato: he can't be stopped with normal attacks well with our special attacks too.


Juubito jumps with a great speed towards naruto.


Sasuke: naruto look out!!!


Just the hand is about pierce naruto but minato appears in between. Holding juubito's body with his chakra arm's.


Minato: i will not let you harm my son no matter how worse you may be obito.


Obito forces his hands but his hands are caught by naruto's chakra arm's.


Minato: naruto this is not enough run!!!


Naruto panicks. Suddenly he pierces minato's body in two halves and just about to hit naruto but he dissapears while juubito's collides through large distance breaking all the hills and forests.


Suddenly in the middle of the battlefield kamui dimension opens and naruto and kakashi comes.

Naruto: sensei!!!


sakura: sensei!!!


Sasuke: kakashi.


Minato: is that kakashi unbeleivable he came out from nowhere huff atleast my son is saved thats all i wanted.


Kakashi: where is obito???


Naruto: he has became uglier than what he was?


Kakashi: what do you mean and where is juubi?


Naruto: sensei,he has become it's jinchurikii.


Kakashi: worse than i thought i saw him using a hand seal that was almost killing him no wonder he is almost equal to invincible now.


Scene changes to madara and hashirama.


Hashirama holding madara in a thick wood branch.


Madara:This is an old technique hashi. Universal push!!!


It breaks the woods then a universal pull.


Hashirama: he is grown unbeleivabily stronger.


Hashirama flies to him and madara catches him by his collar and says now its my time to show something extremely new.


Scene ends showing his rinnegan.


The end.
hope enjoy the manga ignoring the gramatical mistakes.

ok bt the bolded one makes confusion.i know it was obito who attacked .so rectify ur mistake.
 
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