[Predictions] Naruto 639- "Determinated"

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The first panel shows the Hashirama wood clone destroyed and Tobirama slowly regenerating
Hashirama: Damn it!! He's too strong! There is something we must do to defeat him!
Tobirama(while regenerating): I'm not sure if we can beat him! He's too strong for us.
Minato(after teleporting at he first and seecond hokages):We dont have the power to stop him, but... Naruto and Sasuke, they can beat him.
Tobirama: What makes you to think that they can beat him?
Minato: They are like the sons of Rikudo: they complete each other. But now... we must distract Obito's attention from them.
Tobirama: I trust you Minato. I hope you're right. Now, Let's beat him!
(At the battlefield)
Naruto: Sasuke, we're too distracted. We ust keep focus on Obito! He'll destoy the world!
Sasuke:!?
(back to Hokages)
Minato is teleporting near Obito and try to hit him with a rasengan but he absorbed it. Hashirama use a mokuton jutsu but Obito destroy it with the Juubi tails and then atack both hokages, making them to regenerate slowly. Tobirama try to atack but is hit and he is regenerating too.
Naruto:Dad, are you OK?
Minato: I'm fine, but stay there.Don't come here!You need to gather chakra! you and Sasuke!
(in Naruto's mind)
Kurama: I'm done! You can enter in bijuu mode any time you want!
Naruto: Ok!!!
(at the battlefield)
Sasuke(thinking):This is his bijuu mode? He's strong!
Naruto:Sasuke, are you ready?
Sasuke: Let's get him, Naruto!
Naruto makes a bijuu dama and he throws it at Obito.Sasuke uses katsuchi to make the bijuu dama even stronger but Obito uses Shinra tensei to throws it back to Sasuke. Sasuke activates Susano'o but the bijuu dama destroys it.Sasuke fall down, being very injured.
Sakura:Sasuke-kun!!!!
Sakura rushes at Sasuke and starts to heal him.
Naruto:What have you done?!?(Determinated and angry) Obito! You'll pay for that!!! I'll make you feel pain in every part of you body. I will kill you for that!!!
The last panel shows an angry and determinated Naruto, while making a huge bijuu dama.

End

I hope you like it!!!
 

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... :( sorry, I didn't like it at all. Poorly structured, poor action, good catch of personalities, way too short, and Minato making the parallel was kinda forced.

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