[Predictions] Naruto 637 pediction By Sharingankingitachi

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Madara's Cruelty!!!!
Obito:Damn,He's controlling my body!
Madara:Obito you have served your purpose. It is time for me to be revived and be the Juubi's Jinjuriki
(Obito warps in to the battlefield)
Minato:It can't be?OBITO!
Obito:I can't believe I would actually see you again sensei *makes a faint smile*
Madara:You're not here to talk *keeps forcing obito*
Minato:Why are you here,You're supposed to be dead
Obito:I was rescued by Madara and rampaged the kyuubi at konoha and started the great ninja war
Madara:Shut up and finish the seals already *enraged*
Minato:Obito,I know that you got enraged by Rin's death but why go this far
Obito:*coughs out blood*This...world...is...sick...doing..everything...to...get...revenge
Minato:Obito please stop this madness
Obito:I'm sorry sensei...Madara is in control and I can't redo my sins
Minato:You can by helping us
Obito:There is only one thing I can do RINNE TENSEI!!!
Madara:Finally!
*Scattered lights flow everywhere*
Madara:Wait!He is trying to revive everyone else!
Obito:I can finally see Rin again*dies*
*Juubi transforms and breaks the barrier*
Minato:I will avenge Obito * activates sennin mode fusing with the kyuubi cloak*
The kyuubi sennin mode activated!!!!
 

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Umm... Being honest it is not bad prediction at all. The dialogs are fine and fitting characters's speeches.

However First the biggest problem in your prediciton is that it is too short in my opinion. It couldn't fill 17 pages of real manga.

Second, You didn't go into details so it is not entertaning as it could be of course

Third, Lack of action or well described scene/picture makes it less interesting and keeping intriguing for readers.

Fourth, Last scene with Minato entering KCM/Sage mode hybrid seems totally out of place and has really low chance to happen

Anyway nice try :D:D, try to make better next time :win:
 

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Nice dattebayo!
 
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Umm... Being honest it is not bad prediction at all. The dialogs are fine and fitting characters's speeches.

However First the biggest problem in your prediciton is that it is too short in my opinion. It couldn't fill 17 pages of real manga.

Second, You didn't go into details so it is not entertaning as it could be of course

Third, Lack of action or well described scene/picture makes it less interesting and keeping intriguing for readers.

Fourth, Last scene with Minato entering KCM/Sage mode hybrid seems totally out of place and has really low chance to happen

Anyway nice try :D:D, try to make better next time :win:

Yeah I ran out of stuff to put in and I thought a hybrid of sennin and kyuubi cloak will be amazing and gives the users anticipation to the next chap
For minato fans that is
 
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