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(Chapter starts with Obito being taken over and forced to make the hand sign.)
Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!
Naruto: What's going on? Where's Kakashi Sensei?
(Kakashi warps out to the real world.)
Sakura: Sensei! (She runs over to Kakashi and starts healing him.)
Kakashi
sees Minato and Sasuke) Sensei and... Sasuke?
Sakura: Don't worry. They are on our side.
Kakashi: Wow.
Minato: Obito? Is that you?!
Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Sen-sei?
Minato: Obito!!! (Minato remembers how the masked man 16 years ago used the same swirling space time jutsu.) (To himself: Could that possibly have been Obito?)
Hashirama: Who is this person 4th?
Minato: He was my student long ago, but he supposedly died in a war. I don't know how he stands before us now.
Naruto: Dad, he's no longer the person you once knew. Obito is on Madara's side!
Minato: What!!!!!!!!? (Thinking: So that was Obito 16 years ago. But, why?)
Hashirama: If he's on Madara's side then...(looks at Madara) Madara what are you doing to him?
Madara: (shouts) I will live again Hashirama!!!!! Obito was and is simply my pawn! I only have one use for him now, and that is to have him resurrect me! In a few moments, I will come back to life! Obito will then die.
Minato: !!!!!!!!
Hashirama: Madara, how could you do such a thing to your partner!!!?
Madara: You're too soft Hashirama!
Random ninjas:Come back to life? How is that possible?
Naruto: (Remembers the conversation that Madara and Obito had when Madara first got to this battlefield. He remembers how they stated that Nagato was supposed to use rinne tensei to revive Madara.) Crap!! Everyone, we have to kill Obito before he gets completely taken over by that black stuff! If we don't, he'll revive Madara with the power of the rinnegan! Charrrrrrrrge!!!!!!!
(All the shinobi charge at Obito who is about 60% taken over.)
Madara: Not on my watch!
(Madara jumps down in front of Obito, forms his normal susanoo, swings a susanoo sword and chops up a lot of ninjas.)
Sasuke: Naruto, I'll handle Madara!
(Sasuke goes into his full susanoo and charges at Madara with an amaterasu sword in one hand, his normal sword in another hand, the shield that can function as a bow in another hand, and the orb of black flames in the last hand. The 2 susanoos clash with their swords continuously. One of Madara's susanoo's empty hands then tries to punch Sasuke's susanoo in the stomach, but Sasuke blocks the punch with his shield. This action however, left the head of Sasuke's susanoo unguarded. With Madara's susanoo's other empty hand, it punched Sasuke's susanoo in the face. This sent Sasuke and his susanoo flying backwards.)
Naruto and Sakura: Sasuke!
Sasuke: I'm not done yet! Blaze release: Kagutschi susanoo!
(Sasuke fires 2 amaterasu arrows at Madara. Madara blocks them with his 2 susanoo swords, but both swords break and a huge amaterasu explosion ensues. Some of the shinobi even get burned. Madara and his susanoo go flying a considerable distance back. Ironically, they bump into Obito while flying backwards. This knocks Obito backwards just as the other shinobi were about to reach him. This does not really hurt Obito though, and therefore does not help the alliance. At this point in time, Obito is about 70% taken over.)
Naruto: Sasuke, don't attack our own troops! Dial it down!
Juubi: Roaaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!
(The ground starts shaking and rocks start rising. The barrier around the juubi starts faltering.)
Madara: Heh, just on time.
Kurama: (Thinking: This feeling, oh no!) Narutoooooooooo! The juubi is entering its final form!
Naruto: Crap!
(The shinobi start getting closer and closer to Obito, but then...)
Madara: Wood Style: Nativity of a world of trees!
Hashirama: He has my power!!!!
(Trees start growing out of the ground and stabbing many of the shinobi.)
Madara: And as for that little Uchiha brat, yasaka magatama!
(Madara throws about 20 magatama at Sasuke.)
Naruto: Sasuke!
(Naruto stretches out a big chakara arm to knock away the magatama. He knocks away 15 of them, but 5 of them hit Sasuke's susanoo. The magatama cause a massive explosion on contact. This damages Sasuke and destroys his susanoo and knocks Sasuke back even further. Sasuke coughs blood. At this point Obito is 80% overtaken. A tomoe gets added to the juubi's eye, so it now has 7 tomoe.)
Naruto: Madara, you'll pay for that!
(Naruto tries to punch Madara's susanoo in the face with a chakara arm, but 2 of Madara's susanoo arms grab Naruto's chakara arm, pull Naruto over to Madara's susanoo. The susanoo then punches Naruto in the face with one of its other free hands. This sends Naruto flying into Sasuke, thus hurting them both. Madara then has his susanoo grow legs in order to make his susanoo taller and have a better range with its sword swings. Madara chops up more shinobi.)
Hashirama: Darn! They're getting killed out there!
Naruto/Sasuke: Grrrrr! Gamakichi/Aoda (for Naruto and Sasuke respectively) lets go!
(Naruto, Sasuke and their summons charge at Madara with Naruto and Sasuke on top of their respective summons. Madara makes a wood clone clad in susanoo. One Madara slashes Gamakichi in the face and then kicks him away while Naruto jumps in the air and prepares a rasenshuriken. Meanwhile, the other Madara kicks Aoda in the chin and slices him in half while Sasuke jumps up and goes into susanoo. The Madaras then release susanoo so they can use rinnegan. Naruto throws his rasenshuriken and Sasuke throws enton yasaka magatama at the Madaras, but...)
Both Madaras: Shinra Tensei!!!!
(Naruto's and Sasuke's jutsus are dispersed and Naruto and Sasuke are repelled a far distance. They hit the ground with a hard thud. Obito is 90% overtaken at this point. The juubi gains an 8th tomoe.)
Kiba: Darn! Even Naruto and Sasuke are getting owned by this Madara. He's just too strong!
Shino: Shut up Kiba. Why you ask? Because you complain too much and are not even helping.
(Kiba is left speechless.)
Kurama: Naruto, I'm ready, but we must hurry!!
Naruto: Right. (Goes into bijuu mode) Everyone get away! I'll end this now! Bijuu-dama!!!!! (Thinking: Obito is almost completely covered. I can't let this go on any longer.)
(Naruto launches the bomb towards Obito as everyone else flees.)
Madara: Nice try, but...
(Madara and his clone jump in the way and absorb the bomb.)
Hashirama: Since when can he absorb chakara!!!!!!?
???: Since he awakened the rinnegan at the end of his life. He survived your battle grandpa!
Tobirama: That is...
(The current 5 kage as well as Orochimaru and the rest of Taka lands on the battlefield.)
Hashirama: Tsunade!!!!
Madara: (looks at Obito and then the juubi) So you kage are alive. Heh, no matter.
(Madara releases his wood clone and runs towards the juubi.)
Naruto: Where is he goi... (looks at Obito and sees that he is 100% overtaken) Noooooooooo! Quickly, everyone shoot your most powerful attacks at Madara!
Madara: Kuchiyose no jutsu! (The juubi disappears from the barrier and appears outside of it.)
Hashirama: What!
Kurama: This feeling.
Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Rinne Tensei no jutsu! (The king of Hell statue appears and launches the green light. Obito then falls and dies.)
(The army fires a barrage of jutsus and explosive kunai at Madara. Naruto even throws in continuous tailed beast bomb. This all results in a massive explosion that engulfs Madara. Even the edo hokages have to flee their positions. The smoke clears. Madara looks unfazed. His body no longer has cracks. The juubi is gone though.)
Kurama: We're done for.
Hashirama: Where is the juubi?
Madara: Heh heh heh. Why don't I show you where the juubi is instead?
(Suddenly, a dark menacing super sayian like aura explodes around Madara.[When picturing this aura just think about an ssj aura except make it black, large and put lightning around it.] The earth shakes and crumbles. Countries all over the world are suddenly reduced to rubble just due to the effects of the aura alone Some of the random shinobi just suddenly die due to simply being near Madara! Ten tails emerge from Madara's back.)
Madara: Tremble before the power of the new sage of the 6 paths!!!!! (He says as he turns completely into a now final form juubi with nine tomoe and the appearance it had when it was silhouetted.)
The Ultimate Nightmare Begins!
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(Chapter starts with Obito being taken over and forced to make the hand sign.)
Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!
Naruto: What's going on? Where's Kakashi Sensei?
(Kakashi warps out to the real world.)
Sakura: Sensei! (She runs over to Kakashi and starts healing him.)
Kakashi
sees Minato and Sasuke) Sensei and... Sasuke?Sakura: Don't worry. They are on our side.
Kakashi: Wow.
Minato: Obito? Is that you?!
Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Sen-sei?
Minato: Obito!!! (Minato remembers how the masked man 16 years ago used the same swirling space time jutsu.) (To himself: Could that possibly have been Obito?)
Hashirama: Who is this person 4th?
Minato: He was my student long ago, but he supposedly died in a war. I don't know how he stands before us now.
Naruto: Dad, he's no longer the person you once knew. Obito is on Madara's side!
Minato: What!!!!!!!!? (Thinking: So that was Obito 16 years ago. But, why?)
Hashirama: If he's on Madara's side then...(looks at Madara) Madara what are you doing to him?
Madara: (shouts) I will live again Hashirama!!!!! Obito was and is simply my pawn! I only have one use for him now, and that is to have him resurrect me! In a few moments, I will come back to life! Obito will then die.
Minato: !!!!!!!!
Hashirama: Madara, how could you do such a thing to your partner!!!?
Madara: You're too soft Hashirama!
Random ninjas:Come back to life? How is that possible?
Naruto: (Remembers the conversation that Madara and Obito had when Madara first got to this battlefield. He remembers how they stated that Nagato was supposed to use rinne tensei to revive Madara.) Crap!! Everyone, we have to kill Obito before he gets completely taken over by that black stuff! If we don't, he'll revive Madara with the power of the rinnegan! Charrrrrrrrge!!!!!!!
(All the shinobi charge at Obito who is about 60% taken over.)
Madara: Not on my watch!
(Madara jumps down in front of Obito, forms his normal susanoo, swings a susanoo sword and chops up a lot of ninjas.)
Sasuke: Naruto, I'll handle Madara!
(Sasuke goes into his full susanoo and charges at Madara with an amaterasu sword in one hand, his normal sword in another hand, the shield that can function as a bow in another hand, and the orb of black flames in the last hand. The 2 susanoos clash with their swords continuously. One of Madara's susanoo's empty hands then tries to punch Sasuke's susanoo in the stomach, but Sasuke blocks the punch with his shield. This action however, left the head of Sasuke's susanoo unguarded. With Madara's susanoo's other empty hand, it punched Sasuke's susanoo in the face. This sent Sasuke and his susanoo flying backwards.)
Naruto and Sakura: Sasuke!
Sasuke: I'm not done yet! Blaze release: Kagutschi susanoo!
(Sasuke fires 2 amaterasu arrows at Madara. Madara blocks them with his 2 susanoo swords, but both swords break and a huge amaterasu explosion ensues. Some of the shinobi even get burned. Madara and his susanoo go flying a considerable distance back. Ironically, they bump into Obito while flying backwards. This knocks Obito backwards just as the other shinobi were about to reach him. This does not really hurt Obito though, and therefore does not help the alliance. At this point in time, Obito is about 70% taken over.)
Naruto: Sasuke, don't attack our own troops! Dial it down!
Juubi: Roaaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!
(The ground starts shaking and rocks start rising. The barrier around the juubi starts faltering.)
Madara: Heh, just on time.
Kurama: (Thinking: This feeling, oh no!) Narutoooooooooo! The juubi is entering its final form!
Naruto: Crap!
(The shinobi start getting closer and closer to Obito, but then...)
Madara: Wood Style: Nativity of a world of trees!
Hashirama: He has my power!!!!
(Trees start growing out of the ground and stabbing many of the shinobi.)
Madara: And as for that little Uchiha brat, yasaka magatama!
(Madara throws about 20 magatama at Sasuke.)
Naruto: Sasuke!
(Naruto stretches out a big chakara arm to knock away the magatama. He knocks away 15 of them, but 5 of them hit Sasuke's susanoo. The magatama cause a massive explosion on contact. This damages Sasuke and destroys his susanoo and knocks Sasuke back even further. Sasuke coughs blood. At this point Obito is 80% overtaken. A tomoe gets added to the juubi's eye, so it now has 7 tomoe.)
Naruto: Madara, you'll pay for that!
(Naruto tries to punch Madara's susanoo in the face with a chakara arm, but 2 of Madara's susanoo arms grab Naruto's chakara arm, pull Naruto over to Madara's susanoo. The susanoo then punches Naruto in the face with one of its other free hands. This sends Naruto flying into Sasuke, thus hurting them both. Madara then has his susanoo grow legs in order to make his susanoo taller and have a better range with its sword swings. Madara chops up more shinobi.)
Hashirama: Darn! They're getting killed out there!
Naruto/Sasuke: Grrrrr! Gamakichi/Aoda (for Naruto and Sasuke respectively) lets go!
(Naruto, Sasuke and their summons charge at Madara with Naruto and Sasuke on top of their respective summons. Madara makes a wood clone clad in susanoo. One Madara slashes Gamakichi in the face and then kicks him away while Naruto jumps in the air and prepares a rasenshuriken. Meanwhile, the other Madara kicks Aoda in the chin and slices him in half while Sasuke jumps up and goes into susanoo. The Madaras then release susanoo so they can use rinnegan. Naruto throws his rasenshuriken and Sasuke throws enton yasaka magatama at the Madaras, but...)
Both Madaras: Shinra Tensei!!!!
(Naruto's and Sasuke's jutsus are dispersed and Naruto and Sasuke are repelled a far distance. They hit the ground with a hard thud. Obito is 90% overtaken at this point. The juubi gains an 8th tomoe.)
Kiba: Darn! Even Naruto and Sasuke are getting owned by this Madara. He's just too strong!
Shino: Shut up Kiba. Why you ask? Because you complain too much and are not even helping.
(Kiba is left speechless.)
Kurama: Naruto, I'm ready, but we must hurry!!
Naruto: Right. (Goes into bijuu mode) Everyone get away! I'll end this now! Bijuu-dama!!!!! (Thinking: Obito is almost completely covered. I can't let this go on any longer.)
(Naruto launches the bomb towards Obito as everyone else flees.)
Madara: Nice try, but...
(Madara and his clone jump in the way and absorb the bomb.)
Hashirama: Since when can he absorb chakara!!!!!!?
???: Since he awakened the rinnegan at the end of his life. He survived your battle grandpa!
Tobirama: That is...
(The current 5 kage as well as Orochimaru and the rest of Taka lands on the battlefield.)
Hashirama: Tsunade!!!!
Madara: (looks at Obito and then the juubi) So you kage are alive. Heh, no matter.
(Madara releases his wood clone and runs towards the juubi.)
Naruto: Where is he goi... (looks at Obito and sees that he is 100% overtaken) Noooooooooo! Quickly, everyone shoot your most powerful attacks at Madara!
Madara: Kuchiyose no jutsu! (The juubi disappears from the barrier and appears outside of it.)
Hashirama: What!
Kurama: This feeling.
Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Rinne Tensei no jutsu! (The king of Hell statue appears and launches the green light. Obito then falls and dies.)
(The army fires a barrage of jutsus and explosive kunai at Madara. Naruto even throws in continuous tailed beast bomb. This all results in a massive explosion that engulfs Madara. Even the edo hokages have to flee their positions. The smoke clears. Madara looks unfazed. His body no longer has cracks. The juubi is gone though.)
Kurama: We're done for.
Hashirama: Where is the juubi?
Madara: Heh heh heh. Why don't I show you where the juubi is instead?
(Suddenly, a dark menacing super sayian like aura explodes around Madara.[When picturing this aura just think about an ssj aura except make it black, large and put lightning around it.] The earth shakes and crumbles. Countries all over the world are suddenly reduced to rubble just due to the effects of the aura alone Some of the random shinobi just suddenly die due to simply being near Madara! Ten tails emerge from Madara's back.)
Madara: Tremble before the power of the new sage of the 6 paths!!!!! (He says as he turns completely into a now final form juubi with nine tomoe and the appearance it had when it was silhouetted.)
The Ultimate Nightmare Begins!
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