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Title: Hero of the Sharingan
(The chapter starts with Kakashi and Obito stabbing each other. They then pull away from each other. Kakashi's raikiri deactivates.)
Kakashi: (coughs blood) (Thinking: Ughh... I... Is this it-for me?) O-bi-to, it looks like this is the end for both of us.
Obito: Don't be so sure Kakashi. I can (coughs blood) regenerate. I'll kill you Kakashi. Katon: great fire destruction technique!
(Obito blows a Madara level fire style at Kakashi. A huge explosion occurs. Kakashi, having used the hiding like a mole jutsu, pops up from underground elsewhere on the block.)
Kakashi
panting) (Thinking: I don't have much chakara left, but...) (He thinks back to the time he met his dad in the afterlife.)
Sakumo: (In flashback) There's still something you have to do.
(Back to the present)
Obito: Well come on! Aren't you gonna fight, or are you ready to accept your role as the trash you are? Mokuton: rising spikes!
(Wooden spikes start growing up from below Kakashi, forcing Kakashi to continually jump backwards from block to block in order to dodge the spikes. Obito warps behind Kakashi. He then extends some branches from his arm to try and stab Kakashi,but Kakashi jumps away from Obito.[Remember that Obito does not always need to make a spiraling pattern in space-time to warp. When he fought teams 7 and 8 in the Itachi pursuit arc, he was able to just disappear from Yamato's wood and Shino's bugs.] Kakashi falls towards the spikes and almost gets impaled, but he grabs two sides of one of the spikes with his feet so that he is standing on the spike. It is similar to how Naruto and Menma were standing on the spikes at the training ground in Road to Ninja.)
Obito: Heh, you're quite elusive today Kakashi.
KakashiThinking: It's now or never. I have to finish this.) Kirigakure no jutsu! [That's Zabuza's hiding in the mist technique.]
Obito: Such a tactic is child's play. Fuuton: Kazekiri no jutsu.
(Obito blows a slash of wind with an intention of blowing away the mist. Out of the mist however, comes 2 Kakashis with that lightning chain jutsu. The Kakashi clones get destroyed because of the wind technique and the mist gets blown away, revealing 6 more Kakashis. 5 of the Kakashis charge at Obito. 3 of them then dissipate and release some water at Obito.)
Obito: Water clones!
(The other 2 Kakashis dissipate and release lightning. The lightning reacts to the water and creates larger sparks of lightning. This process electrocutes Obito.)
Obito: Arghh! I, I... I can't move. I'm paralyzed! Kakashi, you will pay for this!
Kakashi: (Thinking: Now is my chance!) (The last Kakashi, which is the real one, pulls out a kunai and starts charging at Obito.) Obito, this is the end!!
Obito: Don't underestimate me Kakashi! Shinra Tensei!
(Kakashi goes flying back towards the spikes, but he flips in midair and catches a spike with his feet like he did last time.)
Kakashi: Darn! Of all times, he chooses to use the rinnegan now!
Obito: Asura path!
(Obito grows a mechanical arm from his back. Kakashi throws a kunai straight up in the air. The mechanical arm shoots a laser at Kakashi. The laser hits Kakashi but it is revealed that Kakashi substituted with the kunai that he threw in the air. Kakashi then lands back in the same position that he had stood on the spike. Obito's finger twitches.)
Obito: I'm getting my ability to move my body back. It's over for you Kakashi! Chibaku Tensei!
(Obito throws the black orb up in the air. Chunks of the blocks as well as Kakashi and the wooden spikes start to gravitate towards the orb.)
Kakashi: I, I never saw Pain use this technique! I'll be crushed if I don't do something!
Obito: Being crushed isn't the only thing you have to worry about.
(Suddenly, the wooden spikes that are floating upward below Kakashi start floating up faster and faster due to their light weight. The spikes then start stabbing right through Kakashi from below. One of the spikes even cuts Kakashi's mask off. Kakashi coughs a lot of blood!)
Kakashi: Crap! I forgot about the rising spikes.
Obito: Between the crushing and the spikes, you're doomed Kakashi!
KakashiThinking: It looks like I am going to have to use that forbidden jutsu that I studied about, but it will take up the last of my chakara. This is the end for me, but there's still one thing I can do before I go.)
(Kakashi gets crushed by the chibaku tensei.)
Obito: It's finally over. I guess I better get back to the battlefield.
(Obito's kamui starts to swirl around his eye when Kakashi appears out of nowhere in midair dashing towards Obito with Sakumo's white light sabre in hand. The panel shows a close-up of Kakashi's sharingan closing.)
Kakashi: Obitoooooooooo!!!!!!!!
Obito: Whaaaaaaat!!? How are you ali...
(Just as Obito's whole body is about to go through the kamui portal, Kakashi slices Obito's sharingan! Blood goes flying. Obito's body still manages to get back to the other world.)
(On the battlefield) Obito: My eye! My eye! Kakashiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!
(In kamui's dimension) Kakashi: I may not have been able to kill him, but he won't be able to phase or warp now. Naruto, the rest is up to you. Obito, I'm sorry.
(Kakashi then dies from blood loss and chakara exhaustion.)
Kakashi Hatake! The man that gave it his all to end the darkness of a friend!
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Title: Hero of the Sharingan
(The chapter starts with Kakashi and Obito stabbing each other. They then pull away from each other. Kakashi's raikiri deactivates.)
Kakashi: (coughs blood) (Thinking: Ughh... I... Is this it-for me?) O-bi-to, it looks like this is the end for both of us.
Obito: Don't be so sure Kakashi. I can (coughs blood) regenerate. I'll kill you Kakashi. Katon: great fire destruction technique!
(Obito blows a Madara level fire style at Kakashi. A huge explosion occurs. Kakashi, having used the hiding like a mole jutsu, pops up from underground elsewhere on the block.)
Kakashi
panting) (Thinking: I don't have much chakara left, but...) (He thinks back to the time he met his dad in the afterlife.)Sakumo: (In flashback) There's still something you have to do.
(Back to the present)
Obito: Well come on! Aren't you gonna fight, or are you ready to accept your role as the trash you are? Mokuton: rising spikes!
(Wooden spikes start growing up from below Kakashi, forcing Kakashi to continually jump backwards from block to block in order to dodge the spikes. Obito warps behind Kakashi. He then extends some branches from his arm to try and stab Kakashi,but Kakashi jumps away from Obito.[Remember that Obito does not always need to make a spiraling pattern in space-time to warp. When he fought teams 7 and 8 in the Itachi pursuit arc, he was able to just disappear from Yamato's wood and Shino's bugs.] Kakashi falls towards the spikes and almost gets impaled, but he grabs two sides of one of the spikes with his feet so that he is standing on the spike. It is similar to how Naruto and Menma were standing on the spikes at the training ground in Road to Ninja.)
Obito: Heh, you're quite elusive today Kakashi.
Kakashi
Thinking: It's now or never. I have to finish this.) Kirigakure no jutsu! [That's Zabuza's hiding in the mist technique.]Obito: Such a tactic is child's play. Fuuton: Kazekiri no jutsu.
(Obito blows a slash of wind with an intention of blowing away the mist. Out of the mist however, comes 2 Kakashis with that lightning chain jutsu. The Kakashi clones get destroyed because of the wind technique and the mist gets blown away, revealing 6 more Kakashis. 5 of the Kakashis charge at Obito. 3 of them then dissipate and release some water at Obito.)
Obito: Water clones!
(The other 2 Kakashis dissipate and release lightning. The lightning reacts to the water and creates larger sparks of lightning. This process electrocutes Obito.)
Obito: Arghh! I, I... I can't move. I'm paralyzed! Kakashi, you will pay for this!
Kakashi: (Thinking: Now is my chance!) (The last Kakashi, which is the real one, pulls out a kunai and starts charging at Obito.) Obito, this is the end!!
Obito: Don't underestimate me Kakashi! Shinra Tensei!
(Kakashi goes flying back towards the spikes, but he flips in midair and catches a spike with his feet like he did last time.)
Kakashi: Darn! Of all times, he chooses to use the rinnegan now!
Obito: Asura path!
(Obito grows a mechanical arm from his back. Kakashi throws a kunai straight up in the air. The mechanical arm shoots a laser at Kakashi. The laser hits Kakashi but it is revealed that Kakashi substituted with the kunai that he threw in the air. Kakashi then lands back in the same position that he had stood on the spike. Obito's finger twitches.)
Obito: I'm getting my ability to move my body back. It's over for you Kakashi! Chibaku Tensei!
(Obito throws the black orb up in the air. Chunks of the blocks as well as Kakashi and the wooden spikes start to gravitate towards the orb.)
Kakashi: I, I never saw Pain use this technique! I'll be crushed if I don't do something!
Obito: Being crushed isn't the only thing you have to worry about.
(Suddenly, the wooden spikes that are floating upward below Kakashi start floating up faster and faster due to their light weight. The spikes then start stabbing right through Kakashi from below. One of the spikes even cuts Kakashi's mask off. Kakashi coughs a lot of blood!)
Kakashi: Crap! I forgot about the rising spikes.
Obito: Between the crushing and the spikes, you're doomed Kakashi!
Kakashi
Thinking: It looks like I am going to have to use that forbidden jutsu that I studied about, but it will take up the last of my chakara. This is the end for me, but there's still one thing I can do before I go.)(Kakashi gets crushed by the chibaku tensei.)
Obito: It's finally over. I guess I better get back to the battlefield.
(Obito's kamui starts to swirl around his eye when Kakashi appears out of nowhere in midair dashing towards Obito with Sakumo's white light sabre in hand. The panel shows a close-up of Kakashi's sharingan closing.)
Kakashi: Obitoooooooooo!!!!!!!!
Obito: Whaaaaaaat!!? How are you ali...
(Just as Obito's whole body is about to go through the kamui portal, Kakashi slices Obito's sharingan! Blood goes flying. Obito's body still manages to get back to the other world.)
(On the battlefield) Obito: My eye! My eye! Kakashiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!
(In kamui's dimension) Kakashi: I may not have been able to kill him, but he won't be able to phase or warp now. Naruto, the rest is up to you. Obito, I'm sorry.
(Kakashi then dies from blood loss and chakara exhaustion.)
Kakashi Hatake! The man that gave it his all to end the darkness of a friend!
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