Uzumaki Menma
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Obito and Kakashi have both dealt each other fatal wounds! As their battle continues to wage, the battlefield in the outside world is growing even more chaotic!
Obito: Geh!
Kakashi: Hrm!
Both ninja kick off of each other, skidding to a halt amongst the uneven rectangles the world is made of.
Obito: That was your last Rakiri wasn't it? Heh. You've emptied your bag of tricks, Kakashi. As for this --- [Points at hole in his stomach] this will heal like a scar, overtime. But you, hmm, you're not looking quite as well.
Kakashi: [Heavy Breathing, peers at his wound tiredly]
Obito: You'll bleeding profusely. Don't worry, I won't hasten your suffering. I'll only leave you to your own devices, but first thing's first; I need back my Sharingan. [Begins walking]
Kakashi: Is this the end. Even with all my techniques and powers, I was no match for him?
Obito is stadily walking towards Kakashi, his Rinnegan covered by a shadow while his Sharingan glows red, hiding the tomoe in its bloody haze.
[video=youtube;OqKD5WOivpQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqKD5WOivpQ[/video]
Kakashi: When did he become so... strong?
*Flashback: Montage
Obito is grinning at Rin and Minato, his arm pumping in the air. Kakashi is in back of him, his eyes closed, seemingly scolding him. Next, they're performing the survival excercise with Minato and Obito is on his but, rubbing the knob on his head while Minato whirls his Kunai around his finger, smiling. Finally, Rin is rubbing ointment on Obito's and Kakashi's wound after their first mission. Both are looking away stubbornly as Rin smiles. A smaller panel is shown, just of Rin's smile, but it slowly burns away by a black flame replaced by Obito's grimacing expression right in front of Kakashi.
Sakumo Hatake: It seems like there's something you still most do, son. Go on, we can wait. [Behind him is Rin... and... Obito, both smiling]
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Kakashi: That's right! What made Tobi's identity being Obito so hard to believe was that I saw his soul in the afterlife! This Obito here --- is nothing but an IMPOSTER! [Eyes narrow]
Obito: [Stunned] What? [Eyes squinted]
Kakashi: The real Obito is dead. His will ended when those rocks crushed him! You're nothing but a fake, an imposter, a devil imitating his form and speech! And you MUST. BE. PUT. DOWN. Like the broken dog you are!
Ox. Hair. Monkey... Rakiri
Obito: [Remembering his speech about Rin and Kakashi being an imposter] Tch. So, you still have a little fight in you afterall.
Kakashi: [Remembering what he told Sasuke in part one about forcing a Chidori] You're chakra will have bottomed out meaning in short; you die. Huwaaaa!
Obito: [Creates a wooden spear] This time I'll take his head off! [Lunges]
As the spear plummets towards Kakashi's head, he activates his Mangekyo. Obito sensing him trying to escape does the same to counter it. Small whirlpools sorround their heads. The lance barely scrapes Kakashi's face, slicing the area where his mask hooks around and cutting it off, revealing his true face. It continues downward through Kakashi's shoulder and strikes his heart.
Kakashi uses his free hand to grasp Obito's face and jabs his thumb into the Rinnegan. As Obito screams in pain, he thrust his Rakiri towards his Sharingan, striking his bruised face and effectively destroying his eyeball.
As Obito falls in anguish, Kakashi's Mangekyo Sharingan which is still activated slowly dissappears by collapsing into itself. Kakashi falls as well.
Obito: Agh! Agh! [Clutching at his empty eye sockets]
Kakashi: Huff, huff, huff. You see, I activated Kamui in order for you to do the same to halt your ability to escape. After that, I destroyed your Rinnegan so you couldn't absorb my Rakiri. I struck your eye so you can't escape from this dimension. And I destroyed mine so you can't take it when i'm dead.
Obito: Gaah! Kakashi! I'll kill you BASTARD. Kakashi!!!
Kakashi: Heh. Sorry, Tobi. Looks like this dream world of yours won't be happening. And even if it does, you won't be able to see your precious Rin ever again. Sayonara....
Kakashi risks his own life in order to defeat Obito. What will happen next in this shocking conclusion to this fated battle?!
Regular words are spoken dialogue
Bold is summary of events occuring in panels
Obito and Kakashi have both dealt each other fatal wounds! As their battle continues to wage, the battlefield in the outside world is growing even more chaotic!
Obito: Geh!
Kakashi: Hrm!
Both ninja kick off of each other, skidding to a halt amongst the uneven rectangles the world is made of.
Obito: That was your last Rakiri wasn't it? Heh. You've emptied your bag of tricks, Kakashi. As for this --- [Points at hole in his stomach] this will heal like a scar, overtime. But you, hmm, you're not looking quite as well.
Kakashi: [Heavy Breathing, peers at his wound tiredly]
Obito: You'll bleeding profusely. Don't worry, I won't hasten your suffering. I'll only leave you to your own devices, but first thing's first; I need back my Sharingan. [Begins walking]
Kakashi: Is this the end. Even with all my techniques and powers, I was no match for him?
Obito is stadily walking towards Kakashi, his Rinnegan covered by a shadow while his Sharingan glows red, hiding the tomoe in its bloody haze.
[video=youtube;OqKD5WOivpQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqKD5WOivpQ[/video]
Kakashi: When did he become so... strong?
*Flashback: Montage
Obito is grinning at Rin and Minato, his arm pumping in the air. Kakashi is in back of him, his eyes closed, seemingly scolding him. Next, they're performing the survival excercise with Minato and Obito is on his but, rubbing the knob on his head while Minato whirls his Kunai around his finger, smiling. Finally, Rin is rubbing ointment on Obito's and Kakashi's wound after their first mission. Both are looking away stubbornly as Rin smiles. A smaller panel is shown, just of Rin's smile, but it slowly burns away by a black flame replaced by Obito's grimacing expression right in front of Kakashi.
Sakumo Hatake: It seems like there's something you still most do, son. Go on, we can wait. [Behind him is Rin... and... Obito, both smiling]
/
Kakashi: That's right! What made Tobi's identity being Obito so hard to believe was that I saw his soul in the afterlife! This Obito here --- is nothing but an IMPOSTER! [Eyes narrow]
Obito: [Stunned] What? [Eyes squinted]
Kakashi: The real Obito is dead. His will ended when those rocks crushed him! You're nothing but a fake, an imposter, a devil imitating his form and speech! And you MUST. BE. PUT. DOWN. Like the broken dog you are!
Ox. Hair. Monkey... Rakiri
Obito: [Remembering his speech about Rin and Kakashi being an imposter] Tch. So, you still have a little fight in you afterall.
Kakashi: [Remembering what he told Sasuke in part one about forcing a Chidori] You're chakra will have bottomed out meaning in short; you die. Huwaaaa!
Obito: [Creates a wooden spear] This time I'll take his head off! [Lunges]
As the spear plummets towards Kakashi's head, he activates his Mangekyo. Obito sensing him trying to escape does the same to counter it. Small whirlpools sorround their heads. The lance barely scrapes Kakashi's face, slicing the area where his mask hooks around and cutting it off, revealing his true face. It continues downward through Kakashi's shoulder and strikes his heart.
Kakashi uses his free hand to grasp Obito's face and jabs his thumb into the Rinnegan. As Obito screams in pain, he thrust his Rakiri towards his Sharingan, striking his bruised face and effectively destroying his eyeball.
As Obito falls in anguish, Kakashi's Mangekyo Sharingan which is still activated slowly dissappears by collapsing into itself. Kakashi falls as well.
Obito: Agh! Agh! [Clutching at his empty eye sockets]
Kakashi: Huff, huff, huff. You see, I activated Kamui in order for you to do the same to halt your ability to escape. After that, I destroyed your Rinnegan so you couldn't absorb my Rakiri. I struck your eye so you can't escape from this dimension. And I destroyed mine so you can't take it when i'm dead.
Obito: Gaah! Kakashi! I'll kill you BASTARD. Kakashi!!!
Kakashi: Heh. Sorry, Tobi. Looks like this dream world of yours won't be happening. And even if it does, you won't be able to see your precious Rin ever again. Sayonara....
Kakashi risks his own life in order to defeat Obito. What will happen next in this shocking conclusion to this fated battle?!
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