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I regularly read the predictions here and they are really good and interesting so I thought I'd give it a try. It actually got quite long so I divided it into two chapters.
Chapter 636: I'm Sorry
*Kakashi and Obito are both grabbing each other while piercing through*
*Kakashi coughs out blood*
*Obito pulls out his Shuriken and Kakashi falls down to the ground and Obito remembers Rin falling to the ground after being pierced by Chidori*
Obito: I told you that trash like you couldn't beat me. If it was so easy I would've been dead 16 years ago. Now you shall die here where no one will ever visit your grave.
*Obito begins walking over to Kakashi as the hole in his chest starts closing up*
Kakashi *Thinking to himself while looking at Obito through blurred vision*" I couldn't protect sensei, I couldn't protect my comrades, I couldn't keep my promise to Obito or Naruto. I couldn't save my friend or my student from the darkness. Who would want to visit my grave? I let everyone down...I'm sorry everyone.."*vision blacks out*
*Back at the battlefield*
Sai: I know your smile is false better than anyone. What you say is not what you believe.
Sakura:...maybe you are right. But this can wait till this war ends.
Shikamaru: Not it cannot.
Sakura, Sai:!!
Shikamaru: In this battle the balance is already not in our favor. If we cannot trust our own then our defeat will be inevitable. We must deal with this now.
Sakura: ...Okay.
Shikamaru: Good. But before we do anything we must confirm what his real intentions are.
Naruto: Stop it Sasuke. Your method won't work. Listen to me. We have to save the other bijuu. That is the only way the Juubi can be defeated.
Sasuke: The bijuu are the problem. They must be exterminated for this world to prevent history repeating itself. I will not let this twisted shinobi system rule over us anymore. Have you forgotten Naruto? How you were treated by the village because of the bijuu inside you? Weren't you just a weapon for Konoha to use against other villages?
Minato & Sarutobi:...
Sasuke: This system brings nothing but misery! I will burn it down along with the Juubi. Amaterasu
*The Juubi catches fire once again*
Hashirama: !!...This isn't good. I misjudged his intentions
Madara: Kukuku! Looks like you underestimated the Uchihas hate. Naive as always Hashirama. And looks like things are about to get worse for you!
*Vortex appears on the battle field and obito comes out*
Chapter 637: Master and Student
Everyone:!!
Minato: That jutsu, it's the same as that masked man. That face...it looks like..but it can't be...Hasirama-sama! Please have one of your clones take my place!
Obito: *Surveys the battlefield and grabs the Juubi. It becomes intangible and the Amaterasu Flames go through* Looks like things are not going smoothly here. Even Sasuke seems to have betrayed me. But soon everythng will be-
Naruto: HEY YOU BASTARD! WHERE IS KAKASHI SENSEI!?
Obito: I warned you what would happen if you continued to oppose me. But don't worry Naruto, I put him out of his suffering. And I bought you a souvenir.
*Opens his hand to reveal Kakashi's Sharingan*
Sakura: That! That is Kakashi sensei's Sharingan eye.
Sasuke:...
Obito: He wasn't quite dead when I left him. But I made sure that he won't be coming back here. Too bad he didn't get to see Sensei again.
*Closes his fist and crushes the eye*
Naruto: I WILL KILL YOU YO-
*Feels a hand on his shoulder. Looks up to see Minato standing beside him*
Minato: Calm down Naruto. Your power is needed to fight the Juubi. I will take this guy. It is my responsibility.
Naruto: But Kakashi Sensei!
Minato: I know how you feel Naruto. I will save him. Trust me.
Naruto: ...Okay Dad! But be careful. He can use a jutsu to send his body parts to the other dimension. And ninjutsu doesn't work on him either.
*Minato warps close to Obito*
Obito: If you are looking for an apology or an explanation, you will be disappointed. You are not my Sensei. My sensei died a long time ago. You are just one of the imposters.
Minato: So it really is you Obito..I couldn't believe that the Obito i knew could do something like this...
Obito: Don't bother. Kakashi already tried to invoke feeling in me. And now he lays dying.
Minato: I see. So that's how it is, my student.
*Throws Kunai at Obito*
Obito: These old tricks won't work on me again, Shinra Tensei!
*Kunai is repelled. Minato Flashes to the kunai and sends it back at Obito*
Obito: Shit, I have to wait five seconds. But if I use kamui on it He may be able to transport to the other dimension.
*Dodges the kunai. Minato flashes to it and throws the kunai at him again but Obito dodges again*
Minato: Rasengan!
Obito: Hiraishin Level 2. Too predictable.
*Uses Rinnegan to absorb it*
Obito: Blast Wave Fire Dance!
Minato: Space Time Barrier!
*The Flames are absorbed and pop back behind Obito at the kunai he just dodged*
Obito: Good. But not enough. Rinnegan Absorption Technique!
*The flames get absorbed but suddenly Minato comes out of the space time barrier*
Obito: Shit! Shinra Tensei!
*Minato grabs him by the throat as he is pushed away and brings down a kunai to cut off his neck*
Obito: Shit he grabbed me! Shinra Tensei won't be enough.
*The Kunai comes down but begins to slip through Obito *
*Minato Dissappears*
Obito: Huh!? *Touches the back of his neck* Dammit! He must have tagged me when I absorbed his Rasengan! He wanted me to use kamui on a body part with his teleportation seal so he could teleport to the other dimension!
*In the other dimension, Kakashi opens his other eye and sees a silhouette standing over him*
Kakashi: Am I dead?
???: Long Time, huh, Kakashi.
Who is this mysterious figure? Did Minato make it in time or is this the afterlife? Is this the end for Kakashi?
So that's it. Please comment and give me advice to make it better in the future. Thank you for reading.
Chapter 636: I'm Sorry
*Kakashi and Obito are both grabbing each other while piercing through*
*Kakashi coughs out blood*
*Obito pulls out his Shuriken and Kakashi falls down to the ground and Obito remembers Rin falling to the ground after being pierced by Chidori*
Obito: I told you that trash like you couldn't beat me. If it was so easy I would've been dead 16 years ago. Now you shall die here where no one will ever visit your grave.
*Obito begins walking over to Kakashi as the hole in his chest starts closing up*
Kakashi *Thinking to himself while looking at Obito through blurred vision*" I couldn't protect sensei, I couldn't protect my comrades, I couldn't keep my promise to Obito or Naruto. I couldn't save my friend or my student from the darkness. Who would want to visit my grave? I let everyone down...I'm sorry everyone.."*vision blacks out*
*Back at the battlefield*
Sai: I know your smile is false better than anyone. What you say is not what you believe.
Sakura:...maybe you are right. But this can wait till this war ends.
Shikamaru: Not it cannot.
Sakura, Sai:!!
Shikamaru: In this battle the balance is already not in our favor. If we cannot trust our own then our defeat will be inevitable. We must deal with this now.
Sakura: ...Okay.
Shikamaru: Good. But before we do anything we must confirm what his real intentions are.
Naruto: Stop it Sasuke. Your method won't work. Listen to me. We have to save the other bijuu. That is the only way the Juubi can be defeated.
Sasuke: The bijuu are the problem. They must be exterminated for this world to prevent history repeating itself. I will not let this twisted shinobi system rule over us anymore. Have you forgotten Naruto? How you were treated by the village because of the bijuu inside you? Weren't you just a weapon for Konoha to use against other villages?
Minato & Sarutobi:...
Sasuke: This system brings nothing but misery! I will burn it down along with the Juubi. Amaterasu
*The Juubi catches fire once again*
Hashirama: !!...This isn't good. I misjudged his intentions
Madara: Kukuku! Looks like you underestimated the Uchihas hate. Naive as always Hashirama. And looks like things are about to get worse for you!
*Vortex appears on the battle field and obito comes out*
Chapter 637: Master and Student
Everyone:!!
Minato: That jutsu, it's the same as that masked man. That face...it looks like..but it can't be...Hasirama-sama! Please have one of your clones take my place!
Obito: *Surveys the battlefield and grabs the Juubi. It becomes intangible and the Amaterasu Flames go through* Looks like things are not going smoothly here. Even Sasuke seems to have betrayed me. But soon everythng will be-
Naruto: HEY YOU BASTARD! WHERE IS KAKASHI SENSEI!?
Obito: I warned you what would happen if you continued to oppose me. But don't worry Naruto, I put him out of his suffering. And I bought you a souvenir.
*Opens his hand to reveal Kakashi's Sharingan*
Sakura: That! That is Kakashi sensei's Sharingan eye.
Sasuke:...
Obito: He wasn't quite dead when I left him. But I made sure that he won't be coming back here. Too bad he didn't get to see Sensei again.
*Closes his fist and crushes the eye*
Naruto: I WILL KILL YOU YO-
*Feels a hand on his shoulder. Looks up to see Minato standing beside him*
Minato: Calm down Naruto. Your power is needed to fight the Juubi. I will take this guy. It is my responsibility.
Naruto: But Kakashi Sensei!
Minato: I know how you feel Naruto. I will save him. Trust me.
Naruto: ...Okay Dad! But be careful. He can use a jutsu to send his body parts to the other dimension. And ninjutsu doesn't work on him either.
*Minato warps close to Obito*
Obito: If you are looking for an apology or an explanation, you will be disappointed. You are not my Sensei. My sensei died a long time ago. You are just one of the imposters.
Minato: So it really is you Obito..I couldn't believe that the Obito i knew could do something like this...
Obito: Don't bother. Kakashi already tried to invoke feeling in me. And now he lays dying.
Minato: I see. So that's how it is, my student.
*Throws Kunai at Obito*
Obito: These old tricks won't work on me again, Shinra Tensei!
*Kunai is repelled. Minato Flashes to the kunai and sends it back at Obito*
Obito: Shit, I have to wait five seconds. But if I use kamui on it He may be able to transport to the other dimension.
*Dodges the kunai. Minato flashes to it and throws the kunai at him again but Obito dodges again*
Minato: Rasengan!
Obito: Hiraishin Level 2. Too predictable.
*Uses Rinnegan to absorb it*
Obito: Blast Wave Fire Dance!
Minato: Space Time Barrier!
*The Flames are absorbed and pop back behind Obito at the kunai he just dodged*
Obito: Good. But not enough. Rinnegan Absorption Technique!
*The flames get absorbed but suddenly Minato comes out of the space time barrier*
Obito: Shit! Shinra Tensei!
*Minato grabs him by the throat as he is pushed away and brings down a kunai to cut off his neck*
Obito: Shit he grabbed me! Shinra Tensei won't be enough.
*The Kunai comes down but begins to slip through Obito *
*Minato Dissappears*
Obito: Huh!? *Touches the back of his neck* Dammit! He must have tagged me when I absorbed his Rasengan! He wanted me to use kamui on a body part with his teleportation seal so he could teleport to the other dimension!
*In the other dimension, Kakashi opens his other eye and sees a silhouette standing over him*
Kakashi: Am I dead?
???: Long Time, huh, Kakashi.
Who is this mysterious figure? Did Minato make it in time or is this the afterlife? Is this the end for Kakashi?
So that's it. Please comment and give me advice to make it better in the future. Thank you for reading.
