[Predictions] Naruto 632 : The true power of the Sage

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Naruto : Alright we can do this!
Sasuke : .....
Sakura : exactly!

Hashirama : Hokage's keep your position i will send Schadow clones to replace
you.

Hiruzen : No Hashirama-sama i will do that you will be needed two fight Madara.

The clones replaced Minato, Hiruzen and Tobirama.

Minato : Naruto this is not your fight, you did well so far but this is someone
from the past. so let shinobi from the past finish this.

Hashirama : exactly
Tobirama : Madara now i will show no mercy

Madara : HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...... tobirama i have no
interest in you it's Hashirama i must fight.

Hashirama : Why did you do this i don't get how could you change so much.

Madara : Hatred........ but when you reach a level a hatred that is
unbearable then you don't care anymore. that's why.

Tobirama : It's always hatred with you Uchiha, but you will be the last one.

Madara : First i should even the number MOKUTON : TAJUU BUNSHIN NO JUSTU
Madara made 30 clones

Hashirama : Mokuton ?
Hiruzen : Impossible!

Minato : Lord Second , Third we must take 5 clones each and let the First
face Madara

Tobirama : and the remaining?

Naruto Sage mode : We will take them .......
Tobirama : ( Sage mode....... like my brother )
Minato : he's my son he is strong.
Hiruzen : Naruto you have grown.
Hashirama : You got a strong will kid keep it

Madara : Enough it's time for you to go back to the
other world .

Sasuke : don't be so confident Uchiha Madara.
Naruto : your one to talk..... ( tried to kill me Kakashi-sensei and Sakura and
now he wants to be Hokage -_- )

Sakura : 15 Madara's are coming after us!

Naruto : Sasuke take those five on the right and ....

Shikamaru : Naruto don't be a fool we are here too
Ino : yeah
Kiba : Do you think im worth nothing or something!!
Hinata ......
Choji : YEAH!
Shino Because we are your comrades

Naruto : Fine let's go!!!

The Rookie nine vs Madara Bunshins


Minato : this five mmmm
Madara bunshins : Yasaka magatama!

Madara Bunshin : Where did he go?
Minato : Hiraishin level 3 ( with the kyuubi chakra
i can use hiraishin even better )

Minato made 5 kagebunshins

Minato bunshins : Tailed beast Rasengan
the Madara bunshins where destroyed instantly.

Tobirama : Clones ? you must be insulting me Madara.
Tobirama : SUITON : Multple Water Dragons!

Tobirama did not destroy the clones but the dragons carried
the clones a considerable distance from the Battlefield

Hiruzen : Summoning justu : Monkey King ENMA!!!!
Enma : Hiruzen? MADARA ??

Madara Bunshin : Mokuton : deep forest emergence!
Hiruzen : Doton : Earth wall

Hiruzen and enma climmed the wall to dodge the attack

Hiruzen used fire style to attack madara from above the wall
Tobirama : Hiruzen I will help you.

Hashirama Sage mode : Mokuton : Boedha Palm!
Madara : Susanoo blade!

Madara : It's been long since we had a battle
Hashirama : Indeed but why are you so unreasonable!

Madara : Enjoy the fight Hashirama.....

the rookie nine defeated the Madara clones namely
because of Naruto , Sasuke and Lee.

Naruto : First Hokage i will help you
Hashirama : No this is something i must do.

Naruto : No i made a vow to protect my friends and i will
keep it no matter what the reason.

Hashirama : you remind me of myself kid fine.....

Sasuke : !!!!!!!!!!!

Madara :The tails is complete! that barrier won't hold now
Hashirama : i must tightin the seal...... SAGE ART MOKUTON : STRANGLE
OF THE DRAGON GOD!

A gigantic wooden dragon appeard

Juubi: At last i am free ......BIJUU DAMA!

The wood dragon and barrier where destroyed

Hashirama : No way my most powerfull sealing jutsu destroyed just like that
Madara you have no idea what you have unleashed.

Sasuke : ( Impossible how can these guys be so strong and how can Naruto
keep up with me so easily and i still have a feeling he is holding back )

Madara : you don't understand with these eyes that power is all mine
and when i have that power you will be nothing

Naruto : ( Kurama are you almost finished )
Kurama : almost .....but we must stop Madara from sealing that creature
he cant now though he has to be alive.

Naruto : Then we have no problem right?
Kurama : Madara has a some plan we can't take any chance... use all my chakra
next time to destroy him it is the only way

Naruto : Yeah

Juubi : Boy how dare you have that many parts of me in you

Naruto : !!!! he talked to me??
Kurama : This is bad he is really at full power.

Minato stands on the juubi head
Minato : your finished Juubi
Juubi : !!!

Minato : space time barrier!

Juubi : it won't work

Minato : No way Hiraishin!
Minato returned to the other Kage's

Hashirama : What must we do stop the juubi or Madara?
Minato : Both Lord first and lord second you 2 must deal with Madara
The other Hokages with Naruto and his friends will stop the Juubi

Hashirama : I am probably the strongest Kage so you will need me
Minato : Even you cant stop the tailed beast bomb we will
need my barriers to stop those

Obito : Smart as ever Minato sensei
Minato : Obito how are ...... Kakashi why is he down?
Naruto : Kakashi sensei
Kakashi : Naruto ... i couldnt convince....obito

Sasuke : Tobi?
Obito : Sasuke you betrayed me as wel huh? i won't give you
any reason Minato sensei.
RINE TENSEI NO JUSTU!

Madara : Alive at last....... hahahahaha!

Madara: Juubi you are mine RINE SEALING JUTSU!!

Sasuke : what has he done?
Tobirama : He sealed the juubi....

Madara rinnegan turned red with sharingan tomoe over his Rinnegan.
Tobirama was trembling......

Hashirama : What is it?
Tobirama : This chakra i can't measure it........ it like a ocean with
no end or beginning......

Minato : Obito ..... why.
Obito : I ......am............alive..........why?

Minato : I don't know what happend Obito but i still think there is time too change

Madara : These eyes are different.time to try something
KATON : GREAT FIRE DEVASTION!

Red Rinnegan : Elemental change! Inferno!

A gigantic blast of Amasterasu was going toward the army

Tobirama ( Sage mode ) : Suiton : Water wall of the divine dragon!
Madara : Not bad ........

Sasuke : ( He changed the elemental nature of the attack impossible that's
unheard of )

Hashirama : We must combine our powers Tobirama or else we are finished

Madara : With this power ..... i can do everything.
a snake bit Madara.

Madara : Impossible
Orochimaru : Yes this is the power i was searching for hahahahahahaha

Orochimaru : your body is mine Uchiha Madara.
 
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I liked it. I loved how you put Hinata:...because in the past few chapters, she says nothing hardly. That's pretty accurate.
 

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Automatically a great theory because the Juubi talked. XD

At first I thought too much was crammed in there, but considering last chapter and Kishi's new pacing this is pretty plausible.
 

The7thHokage

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Nice one. I liked that it has a ton of action and that Kakshi is dead.
 

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Nope. Just awful. Bad dialogue, and even worse premise. WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY too much shit happening in a very short amount of time. This chapter would be the size of a book.
 

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Amazing...too much though but still amazing ..good job men
 

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O_O Good Job man

That one had me going

Plus I like the twist at the end :)

*****
 

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I liked it , well done =D
 

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Nice,but a bit too long and a bit of unnecessary info,but overall a excellent attempt!
 
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