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Open on Kakashi panting hard..... Exhausted...
Tobi: You have been sending many things here, to my world..... You will never understand this place, I have dwelled amongst this nothingness since that day....
Cut to the moment of Rin's death, Kakashi's hand thrust through her chest.
Back to the other dimension.
Tobi: That's right I saw what happened to our comrad... You may have felt my presence as I felt yours.
Kakashi looking at Obito with a questioned look.
Kakashi: What do you mean?!?
Obito: YOU killed her! Rin! Your Chidori took from me the only person I truly loved!
Kakashi: Never! I protected her best I could....
Obito: LIES! Don't deny it I seen it! I was on my way to assist you two when...
Kakashi: Stop! You had been gone for a long time...
Flashback to the day of Rin's death***
Enemy shinobi surrounding them...
Rin: Kakashi, you have to leave me... I'll just slow you down
Kakashi: I made vow to always protect you
Thought bubble above Kakashi: I only have enough chakra for one good thrust but who?
Kakashi prepares his Chidori to take out the leader of the other shinobi, thinking they may retreat if he connects.
As he prepares his thrust Rin jumps in front of it and says: Run....
Voice over by Kakashi: She gave her life so that I could escape, but I was not able to think of a way to get out of there with her blood on my hands. I froze. Me, the son of the White Fang. The genius of our class. The ultimate pupil. Frozen in fear, in pain..... Our rivals pulled even closer, but I could not move.
Picture: Young Kakashi holding Rin, tears welling in his eyes, as the rival ninja begin to pummel him. Protecting her from any rampant blows.
Kakashi: I took a beating as I have never had before that day... The ninja took me back to their outpost to get any information I might be able to give them...
Showing the Kakashi battered and beaten. above his head in a thought bubble: Rin...
Kakashi: I was of no use to them. Even after all the torture and the mental assaults I was unable to think of anything other than the fact that I had broken the promise I held most dear and lost the only person that understood my plight... In one fell swoop I was broken.
Showing Kakashi facing Obito tears forming in his non-sharingan eye.
Kakashi: On that day I found out more about this eye than I ever knew... The attackers... they all disappeared one by one the more I thought of what had happened to her the more deadly it became.... Those where the first things that I sent to YOUR world....
Showing Obito with an astonished look on his face.
Kakashi: That outpost was cleared that day.... It was another 2 before I had the strength to carry Rin back to the Leaf.
Showing the young ninja with Rin's lifeless body draped upon his back.
Kakashi: When I arrived I was treated like a hero..... Never had I felt so overrated. I couldn't save her.... I couldn't keep my Promise.... And that is the TRUTH.
Tobi: You have been sending many things here, to my world..... You will never understand this place, I have dwelled amongst this nothingness since that day....
Cut to the moment of Rin's death, Kakashi's hand thrust through her chest.
Back to the other dimension.
Tobi: That's right I saw what happened to our comrad... You may have felt my presence as I felt yours.
Kakashi looking at Obito with a questioned look.
Kakashi: What do you mean?!?
Obito: YOU killed her! Rin! Your Chidori took from me the only person I truly loved!
Kakashi: Never! I protected her best I could....
Obito: LIES! Don't deny it I seen it! I was on my way to assist you two when...
Kakashi: Stop! You had been gone for a long time...
Flashback to the day of Rin's death***
Enemy shinobi surrounding them...
Rin: Kakashi, you have to leave me... I'll just slow you down
Kakashi: I made vow to always protect you
Thought bubble above Kakashi: I only have enough chakra for one good thrust but who?
Kakashi prepares his Chidori to take out the leader of the other shinobi, thinking they may retreat if he connects.
As he prepares his thrust Rin jumps in front of it and says: Run....
Voice over by Kakashi: She gave her life so that I could escape, but I was not able to think of a way to get out of there with her blood on my hands. I froze. Me, the son of the White Fang. The genius of our class. The ultimate pupil. Frozen in fear, in pain..... Our rivals pulled even closer, but I could not move.
Picture: Young Kakashi holding Rin, tears welling in his eyes, as the rival ninja begin to pummel him. Protecting her from any rampant blows.
Kakashi: I took a beating as I have never had before that day... The ninja took me back to their outpost to get any information I might be able to give them...
Showing the Kakashi battered and beaten. above his head in a thought bubble: Rin...
Kakashi: I was of no use to them. Even after all the torture and the mental assaults I was unable to think of anything other than the fact that I had broken the promise I held most dear and lost the only person that understood my plight... In one fell swoop I was broken.
Showing Kakashi facing Obito tears forming in his non-sharingan eye.
Kakashi: On that day I found out more about this eye than I ever knew... The attackers... they all disappeared one by one the more I thought of what had happened to her the more deadly it became.... Those where the first things that I sent to YOUR world....
Showing Obito with an astonished look on his face.
Kakashi: That outpost was cleared that day.... It was another 2 before I had the strength to carry Rin back to the Leaf.
Showing the young ninja with Rin's lifeless body draped upon his back.
Kakashi: When I arrived I was treated like a hero..... Never had I felt so overrated. I couldn't save her.... I couldn't keep my Promise.... And that is the TRUTH.
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