Willowbee
Member
- Joined
- Apr 9, 2013
- Messages
- 14
- Reaction score
- 4
I hope I put this in the right category! xD
()= actions (way too many of these, lol.)
[]=thoughts
~ = Battle scene switch
Hey everyone
This is my first prediction…so I put a lot of effort into it, and it’s not the best. That’s all you really need to know.
I figure there are a few problems, but I couldn’t quite work everything out perfectly xD
Naruto Chapter 629 prediction:
The Final Showdowns Begin!
(Scene shows the battlefield. Shinobi are looking to the sky and panicking)
Kiba: What the hell… is this…?!
Naruto: [Kakashi-sensei…]
(Lightning, extremely heavy winds begin to batter the alliance, Naruto is still struggling to control the chakra to help them dodge)
Naruto: (Falls to one knee) Damn…I don’t have enough of Kurama's chakra left to control the cloaks much longer…
Shikamaru: (shielding his face from the wind) Naruto, this isn’t good! We need to execute the plan as soon as possible, but in conditions like these…!
(Juubi roars, making Shikamaru and the others stumble, some sort of transformation starts taking place)
Shikamaru: This isn’t good! [Dad….I don’t think even you could have predicted this level of power…what do I do…?] (pained expression, struggling to come up with something)
(Cuts to Madara on the Juubi)
Madara: [Tch…Obito, all that talk and you’re taken away from the battlefield by one man…] Besides that… With him coming to the battlefield, you all seem even more like specks of dust. (Vicious grin)
Naruto: (looks up at madara) What are you talking about? Who?
(In Naruto’s mind)
Kurama: This chakra… the hokage…and…?! (eyes widen)
Naruto: (Shock) What... did you say?!
(Exit naruto’s mind. A flash fades, and a hand is seen on Naruto’s shoulder.)
(Wide shot of the four hokage and Taka standing, an exhausted Naruto kneeling in front, looking back at Minato.)
Naruto: DAD?!
(Shows reaction of other Konoha shinobi)
Minato: (Smiles down at Naruto) You seem to be having some trouble, Naruto.
Naruto: (Silent for a moment, then speaks) How… (looks behind minato to the others) The four…hokage…
Third: It’s been a while, hasn’t it, naruto?
Naruto: Old man! How are you all edo tensei?!(makes eye contact with Sasuke and Orochimaru.)
Naruto: Sasuke and Orochimaru…? (stares in shock, then looks angry) Are you here to help Madara?
Sasuke: (stares back solemnly)[Naruto…]
Orochimaru: (grins slyly) No… interestingly enough, this time… we fight on the same side.
Naruto: (glares) [I don’t trust Orochimaru…]
(Sudden blast of wind hits them)
Naruto: I guess we have no other choice… (looks to the juubi and madara along with the others)
~Cuts to Kakashi and Obito~
(They land on their feet in the alternate dimension)
Kakashi: Looks like you don’t have Madara and the Juubi to back you up. This time…I won’t show any mercy! (pulls a kunai in sync with obito, they clash face-to face)
*Caption: Kakashi vs Obito! The Final Showdown Begins!*
/END
What do you think? Cut me a little slack since it’s my first time writing a prediction. I think it’s a bit long, but I tried to fit in as much as possible. I think I had too many actions, haha! xD
()= actions (way too many of these, lol.)
[]=thoughts
~ = Battle scene switch
Hey everyone
This is my first prediction…so I put a lot of effort into it, and it’s not the best. That’s all you really need to know. I figure there are a few problems, but I couldn’t quite work everything out perfectly xD
Naruto Chapter 629 prediction:
The Final Showdowns Begin!
(Scene shows the battlefield. Shinobi are looking to the sky and panicking)
Kiba: What the hell… is this…?!
Naruto: [Kakashi-sensei…]
(Lightning, extremely heavy winds begin to batter the alliance, Naruto is still struggling to control the chakra to help them dodge)
Naruto: (Falls to one knee) Damn…I don’t have enough of Kurama's chakra left to control the cloaks much longer…
Shikamaru: (shielding his face from the wind) Naruto, this isn’t good! We need to execute the plan as soon as possible, but in conditions like these…!
(Juubi roars, making Shikamaru and the others stumble, some sort of transformation starts taking place)
Shikamaru: This isn’t good! [Dad….I don’t think even you could have predicted this level of power…what do I do…?] (pained expression, struggling to come up with something)
(Cuts to Madara on the Juubi)
Madara: [Tch…Obito, all that talk and you’re taken away from the battlefield by one man…] Besides that… With him coming to the battlefield, you all seem even more like specks of dust. (Vicious grin)
Naruto: (looks up at madara) What are you talking about? Who?
(In Naruto’s mind)
Kurama: This chakra… the hokage…and…?! (eyes widen)
Naruto: (Shock) What... did you say?!
(Exit naruto’s mind. A flash fades, and a hand is seen on Naruto’s shoulder.)
(Wide shot of the four hokage and Taka standing, an exhausted Naruto kneeling in front, looking back at Minato.)
Naruto: DAD?!
(Shows reaction of other Konoha shinobi)
Minato: (Smiles down at Naruto) You seem to be having some trouble, Naruto.
Naruto: (Silent for a moment, then speaks) How… (looks behind minato to the others) The four…hokage…
Third: It’s been a while, hasn’t it, naruto?
Naruto: Old man! How are you all edo tensei?!(makes eye contact with Sasuke and Orochimaru.)
Naruto: Sasuke and Orochimaru…? (stares in shock, then looks angry) Are you here to help Madara?
Sasuke: (stares back solemnly)[Naruto…]
Orochimaru: (grins slyly) No… interestingly enough, this time… we fight on the same side.
Naruto: (glares) [I don’t trust Orochimaru…]
(Sudden blast of wind hits them)
Naruto: I guess we have no other choice… (looks to the juubi and madara along with the others)
~Cuts to Kakashi and Obito~
(They land on their feet in the alternate dimension)
Kakashi: Looks like you don’t have Madara and the Juubi to back you up. This time…I won’t show any mercy! (pulls a kunai in sync with obito, they clash face-to face)
*Caption: Kakashi vs Obito! The Final Showdown Begins!*
/END
What do you think? Cut me a little slack since it’s my first time writing a prediction. I think it’s a bit long, but I tried to fit in as much as possible. I think I had too many actions, haha! xD
Last edited:
