Naruto 628 Prediction

shurikenn

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the end is ok,but the begining-wtf?they were all beat up,he grabed Naruto's neck.wtf are those sentences?they(the alliance) were just owning obito and madara,all powered up by Kyuubi's powerful chakra.and sasuke saving Naruto.again-WTF?It's ok them(naruto and sasuke) doing teamwork and beating them up,being friends again and winning the war,but naruto getting caught and letting obito raise him up in the air,while holding his neck and then having Sasuke saving him.oh noo.not gonna happen.:nuts::stfu::dafq::what:
 

roncato

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I don't like it. The difference between your creation and Kishi's is too big.
 

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nice prediction but it would be cool if madara gets full of himself he will be like ....... hashirama u guys are flies to me now feel me new power
 

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Was probably faster pace than Kishi will come up with, but seems they are likely things to come. Good post.
 

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Nice job. Keep doing that and ignore the haters=D
 

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Obito: Impossible...Kabuto said they couldn't be brought back...this must be a trick..
Hashirama see's Madara
Hashirama: HEY MADARA!
Madara: Nope...it's real.

I laughed so hard for this. I can practically see this happening already. XD A good prediction, it got better and better towards the end. Liked it a lot, thank you.
 
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dirklyn

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I think you should write your own manga.. cuz this is cool
 

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Two flaws : 1) They arent trying to kill Naruto lol they need to strip the kyuubi from him, and he needs to be alive for that. 2) Genjutsu doesnt work on Bee, since the eight tails can just awaken him, so idk how he collapsed lol. Other than that i liked it overall as in they are getting beaten, then they show up at the last minute, then a bigger problem pops up so it makes it more even. Good job.
 
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Nice..but i hate it when naruto (or any hero) has to get saved all the time.....i mean...it was naruto's big momient for some big move and sasuke just had to come in and bust his bubble...........
 

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well you could say its realy awesome but how the hokages came was lame.
 

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Dont normally read/like predictions but this one was good, plus rep
 
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