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626 - Light and darkness
(Madara ready to leave Konoha !)
(Madara glance madly at Hashirama with three tomoe sharingan in his eyes while malicious smile appear on his face. Hashirama stare confused at Madara and slowly snap out of it.)
Madara(with mad expression): I found another way to make our dream into reallity I have to head other path than you will be, Hashirama.
Hashirama(snap out): What ?!, Madara, what are you talking about ?
(Madara and Hashirama stand in silence for moment, then Madara rise his head and look at hole in cave, from where small sunbeam is getting through and fall for moment on Madara face. They are standing that for few seconds then Madara slowly turn his head back, so sunbeam now fall on Madara back, while Hashirama is iluminated by light comming from derivatives.)
Madara(cold and evil voice): I choose path which you can't head, Hashirama
Hashirama(look confused then try to say something): Madara, don't forget about your clan, about me and give people chance to see better man in you. I am sure they could change opinion about you along with time passing. Prove to them that they were wrong and enjoy showing your true self.
Madara(glance at Hashirama with sharingan, thinking about Hashirama propostion, then lower his head and continue speak): The clan, about you speak trust you more then me. Village and everyone want you as Hokage, but this is not all. The truth is almost noone in this village need me and I would be here unwelcomed in opposite to you.
( Madara slowly tak few steps as his hand is suddenly caught by Hashirama hand, Madara look around to face off Hashirama in confusion. Hashirama has serious expression which changes to small smile.)
Madara: Hashirama, why?, why did you come so far for me and still continue ?, almost everyone is against me except you...
Hashirama: because you are my best friend, if you can count just on me I promise that I will help you in changing everyone's opinions about you, even Tobirama's. Your clan will understand that you are great leader and that you care about them, just give me chance to help you, Madara .
Madara(look into Hashirama eyes, schock is slowly replace by small smile): ...
(Hashirama extend his hand in Madara direction, Madara slowly extend his hand in Hashirama direction to shake but suddenly stops then slowly pull hand back as confused Hashirama is looking at him. )
Madara: No..., I can't
Hashirama: Why ?!
Madara(recall memories of his all older Uchiha brothers): because you can't understand my pain..., I lost all of them...
(Madara's three tomoe sharingan is glowing reddish in his eyes, as he stare at Hashirama with anger and sadness.)
Madara(recall memories of his all family, mother and father and finally Izuna): My all family died in front of my own eyes.
(Madara three tomoe sharingan turns into mangenkyou sharingan, still glowing reddish. On Hashirama 's face appear sadness and powerlessness, while anger is even more visible on Madara’s face)
Madara: and now, I lost almost all members of Uchiha clan while I was trying to protect them and care about their safety. Even my wife and my son think that I lost my mind...
(Finally Madara’s ms pattern turns into EMS pattern still glowing reddish. Sadness slowly disappear from Madara’s face while being replaced with a so much hate.)
Madara: I lost almost everyone close to me...
(Suddenly anger is replaced by evil smirk appearing at Madara face, as he shows madness expression on his face while Hashirama look with sadness and powerlessnes.)
Madara: Yang and Ying, Senjuu and Uchiha, Light and darkness, you and me.
Hashirama(confused and worried): I don’t understand you, Madara
Madara: and you never will
(Madara take step forward while Hashirama tries to stop Madara. Suddenly black flames erupt in circular shape around Madara, as blood is shown dropping on ground from his right eye. Hashirama is almost hit by Amaterasu, then in last moment he is pushed back by Sussano arm forming along with ribcage around Madara body.)
Madara(in rage): you can't stop me, don't force me to harm you, Hashirama !
(Madara continue walking into completly darkness, Hashirama stay stunned in silence for few seconds. then suddenly he feel some familliar chakra as he turns his head around in searching for source of chakra.)
Hashirama: ?!, Tobi, Tobirama ?!
Madara(voice reflecting from walls): it seems your brother will be here soon. Take care of my wife and my son and if something happen to them I will destroy this village , farewell Hashirama...
Hashirama(snap out from his thougths): ?! wait, Madara ?!
Edo Hashirama: It was last time I saw Madara as he disappeared in darkness. Soon more clans came to join Konoha, so my duties are Hokage's were growing, so much paper work *sigh*
(All hokage's faces are shown with frown, as Orochimaru, Suigetsu are shown sweatdropping while Sasuke and Juugo just stare at them blankly.)
Edo Hashirama: First clan to join us was Uzumaki clan..., our blood relatives. It was much easier as since my late childhood, early teenagerhood I met Mito Uzumaki. We liked each other from just first meeting, since then we met more and more often, so we became boyfriend and girlfriend and soon we got engaged. We really wanted to join our clan together as we loved each other so much, so soon I married Uzumaki Mito, even despite my personal feelings it was great step to join our clans.
(Hashirama and Uzumaki clan leader are shown smilling while shaking their hands with their memebers of clan standing behind their leaders. Uzumaki clan wore red Kimono while Senjuu clan wore white Kimono.)
(Hashirama and Mito are shown standing in front of each other, both were blushing at sight of each other.)
Edo Hashirama: Soon Sarutobi clan brought three smaller clans: Yamanaka, Akamichi and Nara, so they could live peacefully in Konoha. Meanwhile many clans decided to follows our steps, so soon all five great villages were formed, few more clans joined Konoha and with Hyuuga clan joining as last. Hyuuga clan was really stubborn to accept my offer, so it took a lot of our time and efforts to convince them.
Edo Tobirama: I remember that. I wondered that if it could do something with Hyuuga and Uchiha clan being connected via blood.
Sasuke: What ?!, Hyuuga clan and Uchiha were connected ?
Edo Tobirama: exactly, brat. Uchiha and Hyuuga clan are blood relatives.
Sasuke: I didn’t know that
Edo Hashirama(send glare to Tobirama): Tobirama !
Edo Tobirama: Ok, continue your speech to him.
Edo Hashirama: So where was I ?* pause *, ah After these all clans joined Konoha. Everyone could finally lives here in peace, however I couldn't stop thinking about what Madara was doing.
(Hashirama and Mito along with Tobirama and unknown some woman are shown sitting on grass while having picnic.
They are talking a little then silence occur as they look at clouds while laying on ground. )
Mito: That is so nice day, don't you think Hashirama ?
Hashirama: Umm, yeah.
Mito: This is village is wonderfull, even name of this village is unique. You were really creative, Hashirama.
(Suddenly Hashirama is shown as hit by something, as silence occur between of them. Mito noticed strange Hashirama expression and change in attitude but didn't show her suprise to him, so they continue staring at moving clouds.)
Mito: Umm..., Hashirama. Does something bother you ?
Hashirama(show a little saddnes and pity of his face): I didn't create name for Konoha, it was my friend idea's
Mito: Friend ?
(While Hashirama were talking to Mito, near them Tobirama with his lover are laying. Tobirama hearing that something bother Hashirama, stand up and help his lover to stand up as they approach Hashirama and Mito.)
Tobirama: Why can't you forget about him, Hashirama ?
Hashirama: ...
Mito: who is 'him' and your friend ?
Hashirama(glance at Mito then low voice): Uchiha Madara, my lost friend and my another 'brother'
Tobirama: Damn it, get over with him. He left our village and he didn't care about you and village, that why ?!
Hashirama(interrupt): You are wrong Tobi, he cared about people and this village but people and you gave him reason to leave.
Tobirama: So now you are gonna to blame me for that, Hashirama ?
Hashirama(keep staring at clouds): ...
Tobirama: I told you, Uchiha are unstable when they lost their loved ones and then began to behave strange and are out of control. Loss of love cause damage to Uchiha brain so they become mindl ?!
Hashirama(shout out as he glare at Tobirama ): Enough, Tobirama !
Tobirama: this the truth, and ?!
Hashirama(raise his chakra level): I said enough !
Tobirama: *shit, so strong*, ok, you are too much stubborn to admit that.
(Hashirama and Tobirama continue staring at each other in silence which is interrupted by their both women. Mito and Tobirama' lover say them to calm down and then pull them apart.)
(Tobirama along with his lover walk away while Hashirama continue laying down on ground as Mito hug him while laying and put her head on Hashirama's shoulder.)
Hashirama(thinking): *I wonder, what are you doing now my friend ?*
(Hashirama recall his memories into his head. Meeting madara as child, a lot of fights through their teenagerhood, creating Konoha together and finally Madara leaving. Hashirama rise his pupils and lock them at moving clouds above them, while Mito is laying next to him, with her head put on his shoulder and hand on his chest.)
(Hashirama and other leaders of clans are shown shaking hands on one halves of picture, while at another half, Madara and other leaders of clan are shown having argument.)
(Hashirama is shown spending his time with Mito along with Tobirama spending his time with his lover on one halves of picture, while at another half, Madara is shown training hard while sweating in some dark place, being completly alone.)
(Hashirama is shown smilling and happy, while laughing or smilling at first half of picture, while Madara is shown sad, furious expression as he travels alone.)
(Peacefull live of Hashirama is shown in Konoha at first half of picture, while Madara constant fighting against another shinobi is shown at another half o picture.)
(Time skip to Hashirama sitting in Hokage office, Tobirama is standing next to him.)
Hashirama: let's send them reply, that I agree to share tailed beasts with Mizukage, Raikage, Kazekage and Tsuchikage if it is needed for them to trust me and agree to our truce.
Tobirama: What ?!, no way think about it for moment, brother. If you give them tailed beasts, what they could do first ?
Hashirama: I know it could bring some risk, but every action bring some risk with it.
Tobirama: I mean, they could use them against us, kill us and then rule world. You can't be that naive to believe that giving someone power lead us to peace, won't you ?
(Hashirama slowly stand up and walk at window. Hashirama is looking through window at village, as Tobirama just stare at Hashirama in waiting for response.)
Hashirama: you still lack ability to trust other people, Tobirama. It was one of reason why Madara left village.
Tobirama: *sight* whatever, but mindless believing that giving someone power lead to peace, without considering possibilty of them using tailed beasts against us, is in soft words, totally foolish and stupid.
Hashirama(smiles): It is funny ,in some ways you and Madara are more alike than you would want.
Tobirama: Brother, stop jooking !
Hashirama(become serious): Every decision bring some risk with itself, but if this risk give slight chance to make my dream into reality, chance of peace to occur, then I am more then ready to do that.
Tobirama: sometimes I can't understand your foolish logic, brother.
Hashirama(continue watching through window at village): *I have strange feelling, something bad happens soon, could it be ...*
(Hashirama walk back and sit in seat as he prepares message to other kages. Hashirama and Tobirama seem talking about something, when suddenly random shinobi run into office with fear on face.)
Hashirama(confused): ?!
Tobirama(confused): ?!
Hashirama(worried): What did happen ?!
Random shinobi: Hashirama-sama, Tobirama-sama, Madara's wife was found dead along with Madara's and her child
Hashirama: What !
Tobirama: Shit, was it assassination ?!
Random Shinobi: Hashirama-sama, Tobirama-sama, it was probably assasination but we have to check their bodies to ?!
(Suddenly powerfull explosion occur in village. Imadieatly Hashirama and Tobirama move their eyes through window at smoke comming from one of four gates of village comming. Few seconds later, another shinobi run into office, followed by many more shinobi.)
Hashirama, Tobirama(narrows his eyes at new comer): What the ?!
Random Shinobi: Uchiha Madara showed himself in our village !
Random Shinobi 2: Uchiha Madara attacked our villages and shinobi !
Random Shinobi 3: we lost around one hundred people !
Random shinobi 4: West gate is completly destroyed. Many buildings are destroyed or broken in west area.
Tobirama: *Damn it, Madara. I know it could happen that why i should kill him when I had chance *, Hashirama, let's go and deal with him imadieatly. There is no time to waste !
Hashirama(recover fast from shock of news): NO !
Everyone except Hashirama: ?!
(Silence occur for few seconds as confused Tobirama along with rest shinobi look at Hashirama, expecting what he say. Hashirama close his eyes for few seconds then open them, as he has serious face expression. Hashirama narrows his eyes at Shinobi as he speaks.)
Hashirama: I will deal with Madara, myself. Noone is allowed to interfere, Understood ?!
Shinobi: As you wish, Hokage-sama !
(Shinobi left Hokage office, as Hashirama sigh then look through window at smoke still comming from destruction while he has deadly serious expression.)
Hashirama: I will stop you, Madara !
END
627 - Clash of Titans - comming soon ...
Sorry for any grammar, typing mistakes ;/. I hope you enjoyed reading it.
This is short version of my orginal prediction:
so If you have time and will, I encourage you, guys to read it original version
please comment and give me feedback
() - Actions
**- thoughts
626 - Light and darkness
(Madara ready to leave Konoha !)
(Madara glance madly at Hashirama with three tomoe sharingan in his eyes while malicious smile appear on his face. Hashirama stare confused at Madara and slowly snap out of it.)
Madara(with mad expression): I found another way to make our dream into reallity I have to head other path than you will be, Hashirama.
Hashirama(snap out): What ?!, Madara, what are you talking about ?
(Madara and Hashirama stand in silence for moment, then Madara rise his head and look at hole in cave, from where small sunbeam is getting through and fall for moment on Madara face. They are standing that for few seconds then Madara slowly turn his head back, so sunbeam now fall on Madara back, while Hashirama is iluminated by light comming from derivatives.)
Madara(cold and evil voice): I choose path which you can't head, Hashirama
Hashirama(look confused then try to say something): Madara, don't forget about your clan, about me and give people chance to see better man in you. I am sure they could change opinion about you along with time passing. Prove to them that they were wrong and enjoy showing your true self.
Madara(glance at Hashirama with sharingan, thinking about Hashirama propostion, then lower his head and continue speak): The clan, about you speak trust you more then me. Village and everyone want you as Hokage, but this is not all. The truth is almost noone in this village need me and I would be here unwelcomed in opposite to you.
( Madara slowly tak few steps as his hand is suddenly caught by Hashirama hand, Madara look around to face off Hashirama in confusion. Hashirama has serious expression which changes to small smile.)
Madara: Hashirama, why?, why did you come so far for me and still continue ?, almost everyone is against me except you...
Hashirama: because you are my best friend, if you can count just on me I promise that I will help you in changing everyone's opinions about you, even Tobirama's. Your clan will understand that you are great leader and that you care about them, just give me chance to help you, Madara .
Madara(look into Hashirama eyes, schock is slowly replace by small smile): ...
(Hashirama extend his hand in Madara direction, Madara slowly extend his hand in Hashirama direction to shake but suddenly stops then slowly pull hand back as confused Hashirama is looking at him. )
Madara: No..., I can't
Hashirama: Why ?!
Madara(recall memories of his all older Uchiha brothers): because you can't understand my pain..., I lost all of them...
(Madara's three tomoe sharingan is glowing reddish in his eyes, as he stare at Hashirama with anger and sadness.)
Madara(recall memories of his all family, mother and father and finally Izuna): My all family died in front of my own eyes.
(Madara three tomoe sharingan turns into mangenkyou sharingan, still glowing reddish. On Hashirama 's face appear sadness and powerlessness, while anger is even more visible on Madara’s face)
Madara: and now, I lost almost all members of Uchiha clan while I was trying to protect them and care about their safety. Even my wife and my son think that I lost my mind...
(Finally Madara’s ms pattern turns into EMS pattern still glowing reddish. Sadness slowly disappear from Madara’s face while being replaced with a so much hate.)
Madara: I lost almost everyone close to me...
(Suddenly anger is replaced by evil smirk appearing at Madara face, as he shows madness expression on his face while Hashirama look with sadness and powerlessnes.)
Madara: Yang and Ying, Senjuu and Uchiha, Light and darkness, you and me.
Hashirama(confused and worried): I don’t understand you, Madara
Madara: and you never will
(Madara take step forward while Hashirama tries to stop Madara. Suddenly black flames erupt in circular shape around Madara, as blood is shown dropping on ground from his right eye. Hashirama is almost hit by Amaterasu, then in last moment he is pushed back by Sussano arm forming along with ribcage around Madara body.)
Madara(in rage): you can't stop me, don't force me to harm you, Hashirama !
(Madara continue walking into completly darkness, Hashirama stay stunned in silence for few seconds. then suddenly he feel some familliar chakra as he turns his head around in searching for source of chakra.)
Hashirama: ?!, Tobi, Tobirama ?!
Madara(voice reflecting from walls): it seems your brother will be here soon. Take care of my wife and my son and if something happen to them I will destroy this village , farewell Hashirama...
Hashirama(snap out from his thougths): ?! wait, Madara ?!
Edo Hashirama: It was last time I saw Madara as he disappeared in darkness. Soon more clans came to join Konoha, so my duties are Hokage's were growing, so much paper work *sigh*
(All hokage's faces are shown with frown, as Orochimaru, Suigetsu are shown sweatdropping while Sasuke and Juugo just stare at them blankly.)
Edo Hashirama: First clan to join us was Uzumaki clan..., our blood relatives. It was much easier as since my late childhood, early teenagerhood I met Mito Uzumaki. We liked each other from just first meeting, since then we met more and more often, so we became boyfriend and girlfriend and soon we got engaged. We really wanted to join our clan together as we loved each other so much, so soon I married Uzumaki Mito, even despite my personal feelings it was great step to join our clans.
(Hashirama and Uzumaki clan leader are shown smilling while shaking their hands with their memebers of clan standing behind their leaders. Uzumaki clan wore red Kimono while Senjuu clan wore white Kimono.)
(Hashirama and Mito are shown standing in front of each other, both were blushing at sight of each other.)
Edo Hashirama: Soon Sarutobi clan brought three smaller clans: Yamanaka, Akamichi and Nara, so they could live peacefully in Konoha. Meanwhile many clans decided to follows our steps, so soon all five great villages were formed, few more clans joined Konoha and with Hyuuga clan joining as last. Hyuuga clan was really stubborn to accept my offer, so it took a lot of our time and efforts to convince them.
Edo Tobirama: I remember that. I wondered that if it could do something with Hyuuga and Uchiha clan being connected via blood.
Sasuke: What ?!, Hyuuga clan and Uchiha were connected ?
Edo Tobirama: exactly, brat. Uchiha and Hyuuga clan are blood relatives.
Sasuke: I didn’t know that
Edo Hashirama(send glare to Tobirama): Tobirama !
Edo Tobirama: Ok, continue your speech to him.
Edo Hashirama: So where was I ?* pause *, ah After these all clans joined Konoha. Everyone could finally lives here in peace, however I couldn't stop thinking about what Madara was doing.
(Hashirama and Mito along with Tobirama and unknown some woman are shown sitting on grass while having picnic.
They are talking a little then silence occur as they look at clouds while laying on ground. )
Mito: That is so nice day, don't you think Hashirama ?
Hashirama: Umm, yeah.
Mito: This is village is wonderfull, even name of this village is unique. You were really creative, Hashirama.
(Suddenly Hashirama is shown as hit by something, as silence occur between of them. Mito noticed strange Hashirama expression and change in attitude but didn't show her suprise to him, so they continue staring at moving clouds.)
Mito: Umm..., Hashirama. Does something bother you ?
Hashirama(show a little saddnes and pity of his face): I didn't create name for Konoha, it was my friend idea's
Mito: Friend ?
(While Hashirama were talking to Mito, near them Tobirama with his lover are laying. Tobirama hearing that something bother Hashirama, stand up and help his lover to stand up as they approach Hashirama and Mito.)
Tobirama: Why can't you forget about him, Hashirama ?
Hashirama: ...
Mito: who is 'him' and your friend ?
Hashirama(glance at Mito then low voice): Uchiha Madara, my lost friend and my another 'brother'
Tobirama: Damn it, get over with him. He left our village and he didn't care about you and village, that why ?!
Hashirama(interrupt): You are wrong Tobi, he cared about people and this village but people and you gave him reason to leave.
Tobirama: So now you are gonna to blame me for that, Hashirama ?
Hashirama(keep staring at clouds): ...
Tobirama: I told you, Uchiha are unstable when they lost their loved ones and then began to behave strange and are out of control. Loss of love cause damage to Uchiha brain so they become mindl ?!
Hashirama(shout out as he glare at Tobirama ): Enough, Tobirama !
Tobirama: this the truth, and ?!
Hashirama(raise his chakra level): I said enough !
Tobirama: *shit, so strong*, ok, you are too much stubborn to admit that.
(Hashirama and Tobirama continue staring at each other in silence which is interrupted by their both women. Mito and Tobirama' lover say them to calm down and then pull them apart.)
(Tobirama along with his lover walk away while Hashirama continue laying down on ground as Mito hug him while laying and put her head on Hashirama's shoulder.)
Hashirama(thinking): *I wonder, what are you doing now my friend ?*
(Hashirama recall his memories into his head. Meeting madara as child, a lot of fights through their teenagerhood, creating Konoha together and finally Madara leaving. Hashirama rise his pupils and lock them at moving clouds above them, while Mito is laying next to him, with her head put on his shoulder and hand on his chest.)
(Hashirama and other leaders of clans are shown shaking hands on one halves of picture, while at another half, Madara and other leaders of clan are shown having argument.)
(Hashirama is shown spending his time with Mito along with Tobirama spending his time with his lover on one halves of picture, while at another half, Madara is shown training hard while sweating in some dark place, being completly alone.)
(Hashirama is shown smilling and happy, while laughing or smilling at first half of picture, while Madara is shown sad, furious expression as he travels alone.)
(Peacefull live of Hashirama is shown in Konoha at first half of picture, while Madara constant fighting against another shinobi is shown at another half o picture.)
(Time skip to Hashirama sitting in Hokage office, Tobirama is standing next to him.)
Hashirama: let's send them reply, that I agree to share tailed beasts with Mizukage, Raikage, Kazekage and Tsuchikage if it is needed for them to trust me and agree to our truce.
Tobirama: What ?!, no way think about it for moment, brother. If you give them tailed beasts, what they could do first ?
Hashirama: I know it could bring some risk, but every action bring some risk with it.
Tobirama: I mean, they could use them against us, kill us and then rule world. You can't be that naive to believe that giving someone power lead us to peace, won't you ?
(Hashirama slowly stand up and walk at window. Hashirama is looking through window at village, as Tobirama just stare at Hashirama in waiting for response.)
Hashirama: you still lack ability to trust other people, Tobirama. It was one of reason why Madara left village.
Tobirama: *sight* whatever, but mindless believing that giving someone power lead to peace, without considering possibilty of them using tailed beasts against us, is in soft words, totally foolish and stupid.
Hashirama(smiles): It is funny ,in some ways you and Madara are more alike than you would want.
Tobirama: Brother, stop jooking !
Hashirama(become serious): Every decision bring some risk with itself, but if this risk give slight chance to make my dream into reality, chance of peace to occur, then I am more then ready to do that.
Tobirama: sometimes I can't understand your foolish logic, brother.
Hashirama(continue watching through window at village): *I have strange feelling, something bad happens soon, could it be ...*
(Hashirama walk back and sit in seat as he prepares message to other kages. Hashirama and Tobirama seem talking about something, when suddenly random shinobi run into office with fear on face.)
Hashirama(confused): ?!
Tobirama(confused): ?!
Hashirama(worried): What did happen ?!
Random shinobi: Hashirama-sama, Tobirama-sama, Madara's wife was found dead along with Madara's and her child
Hashirama: What !
Tobirama: Shit, was it assassination ?!
Random Shinobi: Hashirama-sama, Tobirama-sama, it was probably assasination but we have to check their bodies to ?!
(Suddenly powerfull explosion occur in village. Imadieatly Hashirama and Tobirama move their eyes through window at smoke comming from one of four gates of village comming. Few seconds later, another shinobi run into office, followed by many more shinobi.)
Hashirama, Tobirama(narrows his eyes at new comer): What the ?!
Random Shinobi: Uchiha Madara showed himself in our village !
Random Shinobi 2: Uchiha Madara attacked our villages and shinobi !
Random Shinobi 3: we lost around one hundred people !
Random shinobi 4: West gate is completly destroyed. Many buildings are destroyed or broken in west area.
Tobirama: *Damn it, Madara. I know it could happen that why i should kill him when I had chance *, Hashirama, let's go and deal with him imadieatly. There is no time to waste !
Hashirama(recover fast from shock of news): NO !
Everyone except Hashirama: ?!
(Silence occur for few seconds as confused Tobirama along with rest shinobi look at Hashirama, expecting what he say. Hashirama close his eyes for few seconds then open them, as he has serious face expression. Hashirama narrows his eyes at Shinobi as he speaks.)
Hashirama: I will deal with Madara, myself. Noone is allowed to interfere, Understood ?!
Shinobi: As you wish, Hokage-sama !
(Shinobi left Hokage office, as Hashirama sigh then look through window at smoke still comming from destruction while he has deadly serious expression.)
Hashirama: I will stop you, Madara !
END
627 - Clash of Titans - comming soon ...
Sorry for any grammar, typing mistakes ;/. I hope you enjoyed reading it.
This is short version of my orginal prediction:
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