[Predictions] NARUTO --- 624: The Beginning

Lichy21

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This prediction suggests that Hashi knew all along that Madara was an Uchiha. That's not true, although he had suspicions, he didn't know for sure. But other than that it was an okay prediction!
 

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ggggggg8 prediction...madara just needed any reason to get aggravated so be it this way..
 

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This guys has it right. The strength of their friendship is more like to grow in this chapter rather then disappear...its too early in the story line for that.

I was thinking that too. But good prediction! I can definitely see this happening!
 

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nice ...you might actually be able to replace kishi..ahahah.
 

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Nice prediction, but knowing Kishimoto, it most likely won't take a turn as this quite quickly. Something different would happen.
 

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nice prediction!! but i think madara and hashirama will prevent them from fighting.
 
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With no manga to read this week.... I enjoyed this immensely! Even if it doesn't happen it was a good read! Thanks for taking the time to ask your magical gypsy crystal ball thingy (or ya know, your brain) what was going to happen.

Im still wondering how Madara ends up with Izuna's eyes tho....hmmmmm What if Tajima forces Madara to take Izuna's eyes by killing him to become stronger? Idk yet.
 

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Hey, I made a lot of changes to this prediction before finally settling on this one! The lengthy feel of this chapter is because it's just coming off of break and Kishimoto decided to treat us. Please treat it as so!!!

An unexpected encounter between the two likeliest of foes --- Tajima Uchiha and Izuna versus ... Butsuma Senju and Tobirama!

Butsuma Senju: Oi! Tajima, the "Lion" of Uchiha, eh? And that pipsqueak, Izuna, the one who've faced repeatedly in battle, huh, Tobirama!

Tajima Uchiha: Heh, well, well, well. Isn't this a surprise? Senju's head here of all places. I guess great minds do think alike.

Tobirama Senju: [GLARE --- Spins his sword around] Today will be the last you breath, Izuna. Don't think some other person will jump in to save you this time!

Izuna Uchiha: [SNEER --- Rest his sword on his shoulders] Is that how you remember it? I thought it was you who cowered in fear at my clans mightiness!

Hashirama Senju: (This isn't good! If these guys go all out, they'll kill each other! I have to stop this! Especially Tobirama!)

Madara Uchiha: (Oh, no! I never expected this! Shit --- what do I do?!?!)

Tajima Uchiha: Madara.

Madara Uchiha: ?!

Tajima Uchiha: You where trying to warn him ... right?

Madara Uchiha; [LOOKS DOWN]

Tajima Uchiha: I'll forgive your transgression this time since you obviously are taken back by this situation. Get over here and stand by your kin.

Madara Uchiha: (What should I do? Hashirama!)

Tajima Uchiha: I see ... you'd rather show love for you worse enemy rather than protect your family ... but what if I told you ... that the Senju were responsible for the murder of your four brothers?

Madara Uchiha: [CONFUSED LOOK] . . . . What?!

Tajima Uchiha: Mm-hmm. Didn't even offer a decent fight, instead they ambushed them in the forest after they were returning from a mission, completely and totally annihilating them using rookie tactics. It was truly a tragic affair ... one you should not forgive so easily, either.

New page shows seven ninja landing around four Uchiha. The Uchiha have a surprised look on their face. Suddenly, the seven ninja rush them and all that can be seen is blood flying into the air along with terrible screams.

Madara Uchiha: [CLENCHED FIST, HEAD DOWN]

Izuna Uchiha: (Brother ... )

Madara Uchiha: Is that true ... Hashirama?

Hashirama Senju: .... I'm sorry I neglected to inform you earlier, but still, your four brothers killed mine --- Itama. That was the reason why my clan made the executive decision to go after yours. I'm so sorry, Madara ...

Butsuma Senju: Heh, don't sugar-coat it, boy. You may think that Uchiha brat is your friend, but us real Senju refer to him as "enemy". [POINTS] You Uchiha killed my son! So, we slaughtered those reckless ninja, relishing their hopeless pleas for help. And guess what; I was there leading the attack!

Hashirama Senju: Father! Stop it!

Butsuma Senju: No! He needs to here how I beat and killed every last one of his pathetic ... little --- !!

Madara Uchiha: [SHARINGAN AWAKENS]

Instantly, Madara is next to Butsuma, his foot inches from the man's face that is frozen in shock.

Butsuma Senju: (So fast!)

Tobirama Senju: Father!

Hashirama Senju: (Shit!) [FORMS SEALS]

A giant tree erupts from the ground into the sky, taking Madara along with it. It reaches several meters into the air. Hashirama begins to quickly ascend it.

Tajima Uchiha: (That's the sacred Senju Wood Style! How could a boy be able to use such a Chakra-Consuming technique?!)

Izuna Uchiha: Brother! Father, i'm going to back him up. Please, be careful here! [JUMPS ON TREE]

Tobirama Senju: Yeah, right! Like hell i'll let you interfere! [JUMPS TOO]

Tajima Uchiha: Looks like it's just me ... and you!

Butsuma Senju: Right ... let's get to it!

Both men lunge towards each other with Kunai, catching each other's armed hands with their own unarmed hands, and struggling to push one-another back. Butsuma tries to kick low, but Tajima reads the attack with his Sharingan, springing into the air and landing on the other's leg with a sickening crunch. Tajima then kicks Butsuma in the chin, sending him flying backward, instantly, Tajima is next to him, a Kunai poised for the final kill, but Butsuma uses a Earth technique, causing the ground Tajima stands on to sink a little. Taking advantage of this trick, Butsuma streaks his hand into the ground to slow himself and charges Tajima, knocking him in the stomach with his elbow! The two men stare each other down and breath hard.

Izuna is sprinting up the tree. Tobirama attacks from a curve at blinding speed, Izuna just barely blocking the strike with his sword. This occurs repeatedly and eventually, the sword's tip breaks! Rounding around for one more attack, Tobirama attempts to finish things off, but Izuna ducks it and does a hand-stand, kicking Tobirama in his stomach and sending him flying away from the tree.

Izuna Uchiha: That'll teach 'ya!

Hashirama Senju: [STARING AT MADARA] Please ... hear me out.

Madara Uchiha: ... Why should I trust you? If you knew my brother's were responsible for your brother's death, you obviously knew I was an Uchiha. Were you merely pretending to be my friend in order to gain information?! Huh?! Tell ME!!!

Hashirama Senju: ... No, I was always your friend, and I will continue to be no matter what my clan says or yours because ... I look as you as another brother Madara, and I don't want you to be a casualty of war!

Madara Uchiha: ?!

Izuna appears behind Hashirama in a poof of smoke. Three Kunai are held in-between his fingers, ready to be thrown into his unsuspecting back.

Madara Uchiha: NO!!!

He throws Shuriken to counter the Kunai and Tobirama appears behind Izuna, kicking him and sending him flying to Madara's side.

Izuna Uchiha: What was that for?! I almost had him!

Madara Uchiha: ... [STARING INTENTLY AT HASHIRAMA]

Tobirama Senju: You okay, Hashirama? Ready to end this?

Hashirama Senju: No, Tobirama, wait. Perhaps ... perhaps we can work this out.

Tobirama Senju: Work this out? How is that possible?

Hashirama Senju: Remember what you, Itama, and I talked about [FLASHBACK]. We can end this cycle of hatred here. All of us can walk away! No, better yet ... soon, me and Madara are meant to become the head of our clans! By establishing this link now, we can work hard to join our two groups in the future! What do you say?!

Madara Uchiha: ....

Izuna Uchiha: That's cra ---

Madara Uchiha: I'm in.

Izuna Uchiha: But ... brother!

Madara Uchiha: Look, if we end this now, we can focus on the future. Please, just trust me Izuna.

Izuna Uchiha: ... Fine, but if this back fires ... it's your fault!

Hashirama Senju: Good! How about you Tobi?

Tobirama Senju: [LOOKS AT MADARA, LOOKS AT HASHIRAMA --- SIGHS] Fine ... i'm in.

Hashirama Senju: [JUMPING] Yeah! Let's hurry back down and see our dads!

The Quartet journey back down, but what awaits them is a grizzly sight; both Clan Leaders are laying on the ground, opposite of each other, in a pool of their own blood!

I like it, but then it goes against Madara and Hashirama fighting later in their lives.
 

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marvelous it could possibly be what we will see in this upcoming chapter .
 

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You people have a hard on for the cliche, and overly dramatic. It makes your writing sound incredibly forced, as if you were merely trying to copy somebody else's style. I know this is a prediction, but you don't have to try so hard to be Kishimoto. You could become talented using your own words, and style, instead of forcing so hard to be somebody else.

Just a thought, from a published author. You also need to proof check a little better. There are no major, glaring errors as far as spelling, and grammar, but there are a couple. "A earth style" being one of them. Clean it up a bit, try harder to be you and not Kishimoto, and I'd say you have some real talent and potential.
 

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nope i dont agree with few things , actually madara and hashirama both warned eachother , but according to ur description its like only madara warned hashirama. anyway this is a good one but im expecting better from kishi :p:p
 

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DAMN YOU GUYS....I loved it but what if kishi's version was to be like this one,he might change it beause you've predicted his next move...,.sooo yea i liked it
 
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