[Predictions] Naruto 616: A village

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Outside Konoha, 20 jonins are dead. We see snakes retreating, implying Oro killed them.

Sasuke: ... Let's get this over with.

Suigetsu: We'll wait with you Sasuke, I don't want to be around this pedo-snake!
Jugo: ...

Orochimaru: We're here, Sasuke-kun. Are you sure you want to go in?
Sasuke activates EMS and looks up The elders are coming this way... (memories from Itachi's flashback flood his own memories)

Sasuke's expression becomes angry and he closes his eyes. Opens eyes with EMS.

Sasuke: I'm going to say this once, come out of the bushes.

The elders walk out and seem unphased to see Sasuke

Granny elder: Orochimaru! You're supposed to be dead. How dare you return here?
Grandpa elder: Sasuke-kun... look at how far you've fallen. (shakes head) Itachi really did die for nothing.

Orochimaru steps forward but Sasuke commands him to stay back. He tells Jugo and Suigetsu to keep an eye on them and go retrieve what they're after.

Suigetsu: But I don't wanna go with this guy!
Jugo: Let's go, Suigetsu.
Orochimaru: I'm hurt you don't trust me more, but in time you will see the truths of this world, Sasuke-kun.. He licks his lips in that creepy way of his.

From the bushes we see Konohomaru and his twerpy little buddies hiding. He's shaking when he sees Orochimaru's eye.

Sasuke activates Tsukuyomi and traps the elders in genjutsu. and pierces the grandma elder. Itachi's voice is heard talking about sacrifice and the village. Sasuke shows them Itachi's painful memories and the elders seem shocked at what Danzo did.

Grandpa Elder: Sasuke that's enough! Can you really not understand your brother's feelings?

The images continue to flash by and suddenly the elders are in Tsukuyomi-land being repeatedly tortured and questioned about the village.

The grandpa elder comes to and has a bloody kunai in his hand. Sasuke made him kill the old woman. He demands answers from the old man and tells him he can make him talk with Edo Tensei if he wishes.

Orochimaru finds the remains of the Naka shrine and enters, alone, to retrieve the tablet. After they talk about the tablet, Suigetsu and Jugo are bound by Orochimaru snakes.

Orochimaru returns to Sasuke with them bound

Suigetsu: Sasuke make this creep let us go
Jugo: .... (He struggles but cant get free)

The grandpa elder is on the ground, clearly his brain has been fried by genjutsu and he has a twisted expression on his face.

Sasuke: I trapped him in a genjutsu where Itachi is torturing him. He'll wake up soon.
Orochimaru: <thinking to himself> I'll need to wait... he's become far stronger than I anticipated

Sasuke: Do it now, Orochimaru.

Orochimaru snaps the grandpa elders neck as Konohomaru stands from the bushes. Orochimaru performs the seals for Edo Tensei and reanimates the elders. Jugo and Suigetsu are both sacrificed.

Konohomaru: Stop right there! Rasengan!

Sasuke is hit but turns into a clone log. He flips around in the air and with chidori nagashi takes Konohomaru out in one hit, turning his blade to the blunt end while back-flipping into the air. He's laying on the ground bleeding and unconscious. The Edo Elders round up his friends, who are knocked out and overcome easily Moegi and Udon (yes, I looked up the name lol).

Orochimaru: Oh, touching. You're sparing their little lives.
Sasuke: They're more useful as hostages... Naruto likes this kid if he taught him Rasengan. That's useful. Did you get it?

Orochimaru motions a snake to puke out the tablet, which Sasuke immediately opens and begins scanning with EMS. Sasuke reads the tablet and doesn't comment on it. This is bad. Clearly it's been modified here at the end by someone. I was meant to read this.... Madara... you bastardThen he looks up and asks the Elders

Sasuke: Why were the Uchiha planning the coup? Who planned the massacre? What really happened after Madara lost at the valley of the end? Tell me everything!

We see side panels indicating the Uchiha ancestor leaving the Sage's bedside. Years of warfare, Madara and his brother training again. Hashirama found Konoha. The Uchiha exiling Madara for his extremism. We see Madara with an angry expression standing over his brother's deathbed. Uchiha clan ancestor glaring at his brother. Madara watching Hashirama being inaugurated, clearly buttmad. Madara writing the tablet, Madara's exile and his visit to Izuna's grave. Later his death at valley of the end. Hashirama sealing the 9 tails in Uzumaki ancestors. The attack. Uchiha being forced into the corner of the village. Sasuke's father and a young Itachi, the father is arguing with the elders about rights. The elders don't listen. The massacre. Itachi leaving, threatening the Third. The elders saying that Itachi is a true hero.

Sasuke seems very angry by the end of it. Orochimaru looks pleased. Suigetsu's sword is nearby, eerily reminding us of the price Sasuke paid for answers.

<Flash to Karin>

In the hastily constructed emergency shelter, she sits along with crying women and children. The guards warn them to not go outside because its just too dangerous. The kids continue crying.

Karin: Sasuke-kun... he's so confused. Suigetsu and Jugo's chakra vanished all at once. And that other chakra is... Orochimaru?!

She escapes undetected and follows Sasuke and Orochimaru into the woods. Edo Elders are carrying the brats. Konohomaru is unharmed.

Sasuke: Let's go, we're going to deal with this Uchiha Madara directly.
Orochimaru: <he's walking in back, smiling the "keikaku douri" smile>

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I actually enjoyed it, though I doubt they would sacrifice juugo and Suigetsu, he would probably attempt to sacrifice konohamaru and then a bm mode naruto kage bunshin would pop in and save him( Just the way a thing like that would happen.)
 

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Outside Konoha, 20 jonins are dead. We see snakes retreating, implying Oro killed them.

Sasuke: ... Let's get this over with.

Suigetsu: We'll wait with you Sasuke, I don't want to be around this pedo-snake!
Jugo: ...

Orochimaru: We're here, Sasuke-kun. Are you sure you want to go in?
Sasuke activates EMS and looks up The elders are coming this way... (memories from Itachi's flashback flood his own memories)

Sasuke's expression becomes angry and he closes his eyes. Opens eyes with EMS.

Sasuke: I'm going to say this once, come out of the bushes.

The elders walk out and seem unphased to see Sasuke

Granny elder: Orochimaru! You're supposed to be dead. How dare you return here?
Grandpa elder: Sasuke-kun... look at how far you've fallen. (shakes head) Itachi really did die for nothing.

Orochimaru steps forward but Sasuke commands him to stay back. He tells Jugo and Suigetsu to keep an eye on them and go retrieve what they're after.

Suigetsu: But I don't wanna go with this guy!
Jugo: Let's go, Suigetsu.
Orochimaru: I'm hurt you don't trust me more, but in time you will see the truths of this world, Sasuke-kun.. He licks his lips in that creepy way of his.

From the bushes we see Konohomaru and his twerpy little buddies hiding. He's shaking when he sees Orochimaru's eye.

Sasuke activates Tsukuyomi and traps the elders in genjutsu. and pierces the grandma elder. Itachi's voice is heard talking about sacrifice and the village. Sasuke shows them Itachi's painful memories and the elders seem shocked at what Danzo did.

Grandpa Elder: Sasuke that's enough! Can you really not understand your brother's feelings?

The images continue to flash by and suddenly the elders are in Tsukuyomi-land being repeatedly tortured and questioned about the village.

The grandpa elder comes to and has a bloody kunai in his hand. Sasuke made him kill the old woman. He demands answers from the old man and tells him he can make him talk with Edo Tensei if he wishes.

Orochimaru finds the remains of the Naka shrine and enters, alone, to retrieve the tablet. After they talk about the tablet, Suigetsu and Jugo are bound by Orochimaru snakes.

Orochimaru returns to Sasuke with them bound

Suigetsu: Sasuke make this creep let us go
Jugo: .... (He struggles but cant get free)

The grandpa elder is on the ground, clearly his brain has been fried by genjutsu and he has a twisted expression on his face.

Sasuke: I trapped him in a genjutsu where Itachi is torturing him. He'll wake up soon.
Orochimaru: <thinking to himself> I'll need to wait... he's become far stronger than I anticipated

Sasuke: Do it now, Orochimaru.

Orochimaru snaps the grandpa elders neck as Konohomaru stands from the bushes. Orochimaru performs the seals for Edo Tensei and reanimates the elders. Jugo and Suigetsu are both sacrificed. Why didn't 2 of the 20 JOUNINS GET SACRIFICED?

Konohomaru: Stop right there! Rasengan!

Sasuke is hit but turns into a clone log. He flips around in the air and with chidori nagashi takes Konohomaru out in one hit, turning his blade to the blunt end while back-flipping into the air. He's laying on the ground bleeding and unconscious. The Edo Elders round up his friends, who are knocked out and overcome easily Moegi and Udon (yes, I looked up the name lol).

Orochimaru: Oh, touching. You're sparing their little lives.
Sasuke: They're more useful as hostages... Naruto likes this kid if he taught him Rasengan. That's useful. Did you get it?

Orochimaru motions a snake to puke out the tablet, which Sasuke immediately opens and begins scanning with EMS. Sasuke reads the tablet and doesn't comment on it. This is bad. Clearly it's been modified here at the end by someone. I was meant to read this.... Madara... you bastardThen he looks up and asks the Elders

Sasuke: Why were the Uchiha planning the coup? Who planned the massacre? What really happened after Madara lost at the valley of the end? Tell me everything!

We see side panels indicating the Uchiha ancestor leaving the Sage's bedside. Years of warfare, Madara and his brother training again. Hashirama found Konoha. The Uchiha exiling Madara for his extremism. We see Madara with an angry expression standing over his brother's deathbed. Uchiha clan ancestor glaring at his brother. Madara watching Hashirama being inaugurated, clearly buttmad. Madara writing the tablet, Madara's exile and his visit to Izuna's grave. Later his death at valley of the end. Hashirama sealing the 9 tails in Uzumaki ancestors. The attack. Uchiha being forced into the corner of the village. Sasuke's father and a young Itachi, the father is arguing with the elders about rights. The elders don't listen. The massacre. Itachi leaving, threatening the Third. The elders saying that Itachi is a true hero.

Sasuke seems very angry by the end of it. Orochimaru looks pleased. Suigetsu's sword is nearby, eerily reminding us of the price Sasuke paid for answers.

<Flash to Karin>

In the hastily constructed emergency shelter, she sits along with crying women and children. The guards warn them to not go outside because its just too dangerous. The kids continue crying.

Karin: Sasuke-kun... he's so confused. Suigetsu and Jugo's chakra vanished all at once. And that other chakra is... Orochimaru?!

She escapes undetected and follows Sasuke and Orochimaru into the woods. Edo Elders are carrying the brats. Konohomaru is Killed for being a worthless character.. that nobody would miss.

Sasuke: Let's go, we're going to deal with this Uchiha Madara directly.
Orochimaru: <he's walking in back, smiling the "keikaku douri" smile>

END
Everything is alright except Juugo and suigetsu can't die and Konohamaru should definitely get the chidori to his chest.
 

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I actually enjoyed it, though I doubt they would sacrifice juugo and Suigetsu, he would probably attempt to sacrifice konohamaru and then a bm mode naruto kage bunshin would pop in and save him( Just the way a thing like that would happen.)
Can't say I see BM clone being there. There's already one hanging out in Obito-land probably knowing Naruto. Once they wait for him to phase again, Obito's dead. Assuming Madara doesn't genjutsu him, force him to use Rinne Tensei and then mock him as he died telling him his entire life has been a joke controlled by him.

Gotta say Obito's character is fully ruined at this point. He's a whiny little emo prick
 

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Everything is alright except Juugo and suigetsu can't die and Konohamaru should definitely get the chidori to his chest.
Yes they can dawg. Sasuke told Obito he doesn't give a crap about them. They're tools to accomplish his vengeance. He doesn't care about Karin either. Or anyone else thats alive. He's willing to kill Sakura and Kakashi and laugh about it. Sasuke's off the deep end at this point.
 
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this sounded like a real chapter, congrats!
The only part that was BS, is: "Hashi sealing the nine tails in the uzumaki ancestors"??? that was retarded. He sealed it inside mito uzumaki, not uzumaki ancestors. WTF.
 

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That is technically an Uzumaki ancestor, since Mito was Naruto's ancestor lols... We've seen her before in a Hashi flashback. I doubt that we'll see Sasuke not go to Konoha, cause where else do he and Oro both know? They'd have no business at an Orochimaru hideout. If they're summoning Madara through Edo Tensei, then they need only do it there.

In fact, that'd be an epic way for Madara to go out. He's about to kill Naruto and Kakashi and Oro summons him. Surprise biatch.
 

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I think it's for Edo Tensei and whatever's in the scroll (obviously not Edo Tensei). Maybe he's taking Oro along as someone that can rewrite Madara's seal or counter the Edo Tensei on Madara? I don't think Sasuke has ever trusted Obito/Tobi/Madara.
 

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Yes they can dawg. Sasuke told Obito he doesn't give a crap about them. They're tools to accomplish his vengeance. He doesn't care about Karin either. Or anyone else thats alive. He's willing to kill Sakura and Kakashi and laugh about it. Sasuke's off the deep end at this point.
Yes im not denying that they can't die because im some sort of fanboy but. They surely can't die that way..But i agree the guy lost all reason long ago apparently he momentarily got some when he saw itachi again but has lost it once more.
 
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