[Predictions] Naruto 615: At the end of the world

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Obito: Didn't you say you wouldn't let me kill any of your friends?

Naruto: Shut up you filthy bastard...

Kakashi: Naruto, it's enough. We can just sto-

Naruto: Sensei, I'm not going with the plan. I'LL KILL YOU ASSH*LE

Kakashi moves to intercept Naruto but two bunshin grab him and force him to the ground, covering his Sharingan eye.

Shikamaru: Naruto enough already! We're going with my father's plan. We need him alive!
Naruto: The hell I am... screw the plan. Nobody else is dying. Sage mode + Nine tails mode activates.
Kurama: I'm ready..
Naruto: I'm going to rip the other eye out his socket! This guy's dead.

Obito (chuckles) Now that's more like it.
Madara: .... Obito, you're wasting too much time. Finish the child and take your friend's eye.
Obito: Stop ordering me around, you walking corpse. Do you think I didn't know?
Madara: ... interesting. (Smirk) He's becoming difficult... it's almost time (Madara glances down at the Juubi and smirks again.

Shikamaru: Shit. Go with the plan as best you can!
Ino & Choji: Roger!
Hinata: Naruto-kun... (still crying and holding Neji's corpse)

Kakashi: Naruto get back here
Guy: (looking down, crying) Enough, Kakashi. You're the one that's out of line. You're letting your emotions get in the way.
Kakashi: ?! Guy, he-... don't do it
Guy: He's gone, Kakashi. That man isn't Obito, he's an empty shell. He killed my precious student. I'm with Naruto. You guys follow the plan. 7th Gate, activate.

Shikamaru: God damn it...

Shikamaru begins to restrain the Juubi with shadow clone, his clan following suit. Ino prepares a mind transfer technique. Choji grows large and pins down one of the tails.

Madara: The girl, Obito. Madara points down with his nose.
Obito: ... (Raises a hand, a single large Mokuton goes speeding towards Ino

Guy charges off with Lee towards Madara. Naruto reaches Madara and Madara phases through the TBB. We see the other dimension, where Naruto has left a shadow clone. Obito is knocked in the gut and a hole is blown through his lower torso.

Madara: ! (Now's my chance...)
Guy: Not so fast. (Guy kicks Madara across the face and Madara doesn't move) Madara throws Guy with one arm towards Lee and both drop towards the ground.

Naruto continuously punches Obito again and again as Obito starts hacking up blood. Kakashi runs over to Obito.

Naruto: Now who's the trash?! Say it!
Obito: unh (keeps spitting up blood as Naruto slams him into the ground and does a shadow clone around him)

Shikamaru appears to have the Juubi locked down with Choji. Ino prepares to enter its mind and is blown into the ground by the Mokuton Obito fired. Before she dies Sakura pushes her out of the way. The jutsu fails.

Juubi kicks Choji back and overpowered Shikamaru.

Ino drops to the ground before anyone else.

Kakashi: Narut-!
Naruto: Stay back, or I'll rip his head clean off. (The Kyuubi appears to be in control)
Naruto: Kurama, why didnt you go with the plan?
Kurama: Because of that

Juubi is in a perfect state. Madara stands next to it and places his hand on it.

Kakashi: The kyuubi?!
Naruto/Kyuubi: I didn't give you that chakra to act so naive. Go deal with Madara.

Chidori senbon blows Madara's hand off, which immediately begins to regenerate. He looks over and sees Sasuke and Orochimaru standing far off.

Sasuke: ... Madara.
Orochimaru: It's been awhile. Defying Edo Tensei are we? Madara (Orochimaru licks his lips creepily)

Madara has no reaction.

Flash scene to Jugo and Suigetsu, both dead outside the Nara shrine. Most of Konoha in the background appears destroyed. The elders are nowhere to be seen.

Obito's eye begins to close while Kakashi is crying nearby
Obito: It's too late... fools....

Naruto: ?! Where is this? Genjutsu? Sasuke?!
Kurama: We were too late... Even I can't break Infinite Tsukuyomi (nobody else appears visible in this world)
Naruto: Damn...

Naruto is in a blank world. Outside we see Madara glancing around. The shinobi in the alliance fall, one by one, to the ground. Obito's dead and staring up blankly at the moon. We don't see Sasuke and Orochimaru.

Madara: Now... you.... Izuna?

END

NEXT CHAPTER: TOO LATE?! What happened to Konoha? Is the world over?
 

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No...Konoha isn't going to be destroyed personally it was good till Sasuke showed up you made it seem like Sasuke would be able to come and defeat Madara instantly but I like the idea of Gai shouting at Kakashi...but as I've said I don't think Sasuke is going to get involved and I don't think Konoha is going to be destroyed but I do think the elders are going to die.
 

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I actually liked this, but the ending doesn't really do it for me.
 

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No...Konoha isn't going to be destroyed personally it was good till Sasuke showed up you made it seem like Sasuke would be able to come and defeat Madara instantly but I like the idea of Gai shouting at Kakashi...but as I've said I don't think Sasuke is going to get involved and I don't think Konoha is going to be destroyed but I do think the elders are going to die.

Sasuke wouldn't destroy Konoha per se, but the village would take heavy damage from him killing the old dudes. Kakashi is clearly letting his emotions take charge. Naruto not following the plan, well that's his personality. Naruto taking orders from a chump like Shikamaru? Don't see it happening.

EDIT: To be clear, I'm not saying Sasuke isn't caught in the Tsukuyomi. Just that Madara sees something reminding him of Izuna, arguably the one person he ever cared for.
 

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I enjoyed reading this. Don't care if its whats going to happen or not, nice post.
 

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Sasuke wouldn't destroy Konoha per se, but the village would take heavy damage from him killing the old dudes. Kakashi is clearly letting his emotions take charge. Naruto not following the plan, well that's his personality. Naruto taking orders from a chump like Shikamaru? Don't see it happening.

EDIT: To be clear, I'm not saying Sasuke isn't caught in the Tsukuyomi. Just that Madara sees something reminding him of Izuna, arguably the one person he ever cared for.

I wasn't arguing over Naruto rushing ahead actually I can see that happening same with Gai shouting at Kakashi but I don't see Sasuke just coming in and helping Naruto or being able to just easily wound Madara.

But Naruto knows Shikamaru is smarter than him and he also knows he's the key to the plan so I think Naruto is going to follow through with the plan.
 

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If he were in his right mind he would. In this story, I'm implying Kurama switches in and takes out Obito. Kurama knows the plan hasn't accounted for how OP perfect Juubs is. Naruto will be overcome with anger at Obito mocking Neji's sacrifice. Of course, Obito's doing that on purpose to mind raep Naruto.

Shikaku's plan stopping Juubi is absurd IMO. Took a guy on the level of a God to seal it last time. More likely the plan involves isolating or sealing it, possibly will partially succeed but not fully stop Juubs
 

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Naruto may be a little reckless but he's not a moron like your portraying him to be.
 

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Madara throws 7th gate Guy with one arm....
 

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Well, it is just Guy. Madara's pretty beast with taijutsu too. He can probably take down 8 gates Guy too, as HAX as he is.
 

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Well, it is just Guy. Madara's pretty beast with taijutsu too. He can probably take down 8 gates Guy too, as HAX as he is.

Did you miss Guy knock Madara out of the chapter a few Chapters ago, not to mention he was half dead when he did it.
 

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Did you miss Guy knock Madara out of the chapter a few Chapters ago, not to mention he was half dead when he did it.

There is no point in arguing with him, he is not gonn accept that he is wrong sometimes (more than sometimes)
 

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this was accually very cool to read. One of the better predzz if you ask me. One thing though; what happened towards the end, Kishi would smear that out over several chapters. We all know that he has a hand of stretching out things...

Also I agree that no shadow binding would be enough to restrain the Juubi....

but that apart, good writings!
 

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Obito: Didn't you say you wouldn't let me kill any of your friends?

Naruto: Shut up you filthy bastard...

Kakashi: Naruto, it's enough. We can just sto-

Naruto: Sensei, I'm not going with the plan. I'LL KILL YOU ASSH*LE

Kakashi moves to intercept Naruto but two bunshin grab him and force him to the ground, covering his Sharingan eye.

Shikamaru: Naruto enough already! We're going with my father's plan. We need him alive!
Naruto: The hell I am... screw the plan. Nobody else is dying. Sage mode + Nine tails mode activates.
Kurama: I'm ready..
Naruto: I'm going to rip the other eye out his socket! This guy's dead.

Obito (chuckles) Now that's more like it.
Madara: .... Obito, you're wasting too much time. Finish the child and take your friend's eye.
Obito: Stop ordering me around, you walking corpse. Do you think I didn't know?
Madara: ... interesting. (Smirk) He's becoming difficult... it's almost time (Madara glances down at the Juubi and smirks again.

Shikamaru: Shit. Go with the plan as best you can!
Ino & Choji: Roger!
Hinata: Naruto-kun... (still crying and holding Neji's corpse)

Kakashi: Naruto get back here
Guy: (looking down, crying) Enough, Kakashi. You're the one that's out of line. You're letting your emotions get in the way.
Kakashi: ?! Guy, he-... don't do it
Guy: He's gone, Kakashi. That man isn't Obito, he's an empty shell. He killed my precious student. I'm with Naruto. You guys follow the plan. 7th Gate, activate.

Shikamaru: God damn it...

Shikamaru begins to restrain the Juubi with shadow clone, his clan following suit. Ino prepares a mind transfer technique. Choji grows large and pins down one of the tails.

Madara: The girl, Obito. Madara points down with his nose.
Obito: ... (Raises a hand, a single large Mokuton goes speeding towards Ino

Guy charges off with Lee towards Madara. Naruto reaches Madara and Madara phases through the TBB. We see the other dimension, where Naruto has left a shadow clone. Obito is knocked in the gut and a hole is blown through his lower torso.

Madara: ! (Now's my chance...)
Guy: Not so fast. (Guy kicks Madara across the face and Madara doesn't move) Madara throws Guy with one arm towards Lee and both drop towards the ground.

Naruto continuously punches Obito again and again as Obito starts hacking up blood. Kakashi runs over to Obito.

Naruto: Now who's the trash?! Say it!
Obito: unh (keeps spitting up blood as Naruto slams him into the ground and does a shadow clone around him)

Shikamaru appears to have the Juubi locked down with Choji. Ino prepares to enter its mind and is blown into the ground by the Mokuton Obito fired. Before she dies Sakura pushes her out of the way. The jutsu fails.

Juubi kicks Choji back and overpowered Shikamaru.

Ino drops to the ground before anyone else.

Kakashi: Narut-!
Naruto: Stay back, or I'll rip his head clean off. (The Kyuubi appears to be in control)
Naruto: Kurama, why didnt you go with the plan?
Kurama: Because of that

Juubi is in a perfect state. Madara stands next to it and places his hand on it.

Kakashi: The kyuubi?!
Naruto/Kyuubi: I didn't give you that chakra to act so naive. Go deal with Madara.

Chidori senbon blows Madara's hand off, which immediately begins to regenerate. He looks over and sees Sasuke and Orochimaru standing far off.

Sasuke: ... Madara.
Orochimaru: It's been awhile. Defying Edo Tensei are we? Madara (Orochimaru licks his lips creepily)

Madara has no reaction.

Flash scene to Jugo and Suigetsu, both dead outside the Nara shrine. Most of Konoha in the background appears destroyed. The elders are nowhere to be seen.

Obito's eye begins to close while Kakashi is crying nearby
Obito: It's too late... fools....

Naruto: ?! Where is this? Genjutsu? Sasuke?!
Kurama: We were too late... Even I can't break Infinite Tsukuyomi (nobody else appears visible in this world)
Naruto: Damn...

Naruto is in a blank world. Outside we see Madara glancing around. The shinobi in the alliance fall, one by one, to the ground. Obito's dead and staring up blankly at the moon. We don't see Sasuke and Orochimaru.

Madara: Now... you.... Izuna?

END

NEXT CHAPTER: TOO LATE?! What happened to Konoha? Is the world over?
xd Really? Orochimaru Licking his lips..Although i do see that happening since Madara is the ultimate Uchiha..He will probably have an Erection.
 
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