[Predictions] naruto 599 prediction "Dejavu"

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the scene starts with naruto in tobi dimension making tobi go flying to the ground by his rasengan he finally gets up and it seems he has no damage his mask is shatterd all over the ground but his face is shown in the dark
Tobi: i applaud you that you were able to break the mask it seems as though i have underestimated you kyuubi boy
Tobi thinking:i will have to finish off this clone before leaving it would just put me at risk of being hit again.
Naruto: hey noone show me your face so i can see who i will defeat
Tobi:Theres no way a mere clone can defeat me this is my dimension
tobi disapears
kurama: naruto be on guard remember that tobi can absorb you if you lose focus for one minute you will be defeated
Naruto: got it kurama
naruto smirks and begins to form a rasenshuriken throwing it somewhere into the darkness you can here the sound of it as it disperses a piece of tobi clothing floats down to naruto
tobi is shocked
Tobi: how could he....
naruto: like the weaker mode of this i can sense negative emotions but now while in this mode the intent is stronger and i can also hear your thoughts
Tobi:shinra....
Naruto flashes up to tobi but before he can hit him tobi finishes the jutsu
tobi:tensei
naruto is blown back on the ground
tobi:doesn't matter what jutsu you have you will never defeat me
tobi is walking closer to naruto his face is finally revealed but the reader can not see it
naruto is shocked: i.. know who you are
tobi finally makes the clone disperse
back to kakashi gai and naruto
kakashi:that is not obito
gai:?!
naruto: he is someone from the past
kakashi: what do you mean
naruto: its no time to talk
naruto gives a smirk
naruto: i know his weakness
they only show tobi eyes though his mask off and they seemed to be shocked
 
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It's too short. Tobi and Kyuubi comments (dialogue) are out of character and somethings don't add up such as the Tobi dimension scene. It's probably more, but it's good enough. Nice effort.
 
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It's too short. Tobi comments and Kyuubi comments are out of character and somethings don't add up such as the Tobi dimension scene and. It's probably more, but it's good enough. Nice effort.
thanks for you opinions sorry about the comments with tobi and kyuubi i thought
it didn't add up myself i didn't put much effort because i'm so lazyU_U
 
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