ZachC2
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597:'Identity' 598:'A Face' 599:'Them'
Tobi: "Kakashi knows too much if I kill him now I still have a chance of capturing the jinchuriki"
Naruto: Heh' You don't look so tough after taking that rasengan.
Tobi: I won't fall for the same trick twice.
Kakashi: Naruto, Gai.. Now that we have figured out Tobi's jutsu chances are he won't risk using it again.. He has the rinnegan and just used a jutsu we've never encountered when we have met him.. I think its safe to say he has all of the rinnegan powers.
Naruto: Kakashi-Sensei I have a plan but its alot more risky and I don't know if we can pull it off..
-Naruto nods back so they all jump near Bee & Hachibi and jump behind him to cover themselves whilst hachibi keeps lookout
-tobi looks up Gedo-
Tobi:"Everything I've worked for.. years of planning all are under risk from this child... He's just a child"
Tobi: Its time to end this.. The infinite Tsukuyomi will end all of this!.
-Naruto jumps out from hachibi to a few metres away from Tobi-
Naruto: Tobi before we continue this I have a question..
-Tobi watches Naruto intently-
Tobi: Considering you are about to die I suppose letting you have one last request would be acceptable..
Naruto: If you succeed in your plan what will you do after.. your 'purpose' will have been met.
-Tobi's eyes narrow-
Tobi:..... I ....
-Suddenly Kakashi appears underground beneath tobi and drags him down into the earth whilst attempting to impale him with a kunai..-
Tobi: Shinra Tensei!!....
Kakashi intentionally attaches a paper bomb and throws it whilst activating kamui and sending it to the alternate dimension-
-Kakashi is sent flying back and is catched by one of naruto's chakra arms-
Tobi: Kakashi that was just a waste of chakra
Gai:"If this doesn't work we're gonna have to retreat"
-Suddenly Naruto appears from the sky yielding a planetary rasengan-
Tobi:" When did he do tha-"
-tobi remembers using shinra tensei and only focusing on Kakashi's actions-
Kakashi:"Naruto used a perfect moment to launch a counter attack"
Tobi:"Shit If I phase out I'll get hit by those paper bombs .. its a risk I will have to take"
-Tobi teleports away as Naruto deactivates his planetary rasengan and hastily lands where tobi was standing-
-Naruto turns to Kakashi, Gai & Bee who are talking then jumps back to them-
[End Of 597]
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[598]
-Suddenly a fist emerge's and Naruto is sent hurtling away at jaw dropping speed-
-Tobi teleports back to where he was standing.. His mask is covered in cracks-
Naruto: Wow you don't look so good..
-Tobi's clothes are in rags with half of them singed & burnt completely-
Kakashi: Naruto are you ok?
Naruto: Yeah just taken by surprise..
-Naruto gets up and uses his speed to get to the others-
Gai: He did exactly what we thought he would..
Kakashi: Yes, although I expect the next part of the plan to be even more difficult.
Naruto: We can do it.. we've gotten this far for a reason!.
-Kakashi slams his hand down to the floor..
Earth Style: Earth protection dome-
-A huge layer of earth rises about naruto & co-
Kakashi: I've never done an entire person so we should use a clone
-naruto nods, uses kage bunshin to create and clone-
Naruto: Now just one more thing.
Kakashi: If this works I'll buy you some ramen Naruto.
Naruto: Well now Ramens on the line I'm definitely gonna win!.
-Naruto's clone stays behind with bee-
-Kakashi creates an opening at the top of the dome so he, Guy & Naruto can jump out-
Naruto:We're back!
Tobi: Heh' Where is Hachibi?
Naruto: He decided to take 5 but said to give you something..
Tobi: Oh..
-Bee's fires a bijuu dama point blank at Tobi from inside the dome causing the dome to burst open sending chunks of earth all around the area.
-naruto's clone makes with this distraction then signals Kakashi-
Kakashi:"Theres a chance this won't work but we're low on options & I'm low on chakra.. this might be my last one"
-Kakashi Activates kamui making the hole bigger then usual to allow the clone to jump through-
-Naruto's clone jumps in seemingly unscathed-
-The bijuu dama is hurtling towards Tobi he teleports away avoiding damage-
Kakashi:"Please let this work"
Tobi:That was too close.
Naruto: RASENGAN!
Tobi:!!!!
-Tobi is about to teleport when SM Naruto Hurls a rasengan at him landing a hit on his mask causing it to shatter
A panel is shown of Tobi glaring at the clone His face has prominent age lines & bags under his eyes..
Naruto: I told you I'd get that mask off Wrinkles!.
-Naruto's clone smiles and poofs away due to exhausting itself of chakra-
Naruto:"Kakashi & Gai might know who he is"
-Tobi can be seen teleporting back to them.. his arm bloody and he looks to Naruto & Co-
Kakashi: !!!!
Gai: !!!!
[End Of 598]
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[599]
-Sasuke & Co are making their way to those who know everything!-
Orochimaru: Sasuke.. We could kill the villagers on our way.
Sasuke:"He has a point but I made a promise to him -Remembering his meet with Naruto at the bridge-"
Suigetsu & Jugo: '....'
Sasuke: No.. I made a promise to someone that before I wipe the leaf out.. I would fight them and kill them.
Suigetsu: Why do I get the impression it was that guy who tried to stop us when you were tailing Itachi.
-Sasuke turns to Suigetsu with his Sharingan activated-
-Suigetsu looks at Sasuke and slows down out of fear-
Suigetsu:"He still has that temper"
Orochimaru: The kyuubi brat I presume?
Sasuke: Hmm, So Orochimaru Who exactly is 'Tobi'
Orochimaru: I have a few people who I think he could be.. One thing I do know is that he is the one who orchestrated the attack on the leaf by the ninetails all those years ago.
-Sasuke's eyes widen then turn to Orochimaru who turns to him looking at him blankly-
Sasuke:"He told me the kyuubi attack was a natural disaster!, I wonder what else he has lied about"
Orochimaru:"I see Tobi has been only telling Sasuke half the story"
Orochimaru: We'll be there soon, then you will get the answers you want Sasuke-kun.
Suigetsu: What do you intend to do after you've taken Sasuke there.
-turns to Suigetsu narrowing his eyes-
Orochimaru: Like I said back in the cave I have no interest in this war so I will probably go back to my hideout and continue my research.
-Sasuke turns to Orochimaru looking at him intently-
Jugo: We're here.
Sasuke: Jugo & Suigetsu stay here and keep guard.. if anyone trys to get in incapacitate them.. I will be the one to kill the villagers when the time comes.
-Scene ends showing Sasuke & Oro walking into the shrine-
[end]
(decided to leave 600 because I think it will be the chapter that gives us Tobi's identity & some of his backstory.
- = action/sequence
597:'Identity' 598:'A Face' 599:'Them'
Tobi: "Kakashi knows too much if I kill him now I still have a chance of capturing the jinchuriki"
Naruto: Heh' You don't look so tough after taking that rasengan.
Tobi: I won't fall for the same trick twice.
Kakashi: Naruto, Gai.. Now that we have figured out Tobi's jutsu chances are he won't risk using it again.. He has the rinnegan and just used a jutsu we've never encountered when we have met him.. I think its safe to say he has all of the rinnegan powers.
Naruto: Kakashi-Sensei I have a plan but its alot more risky and I don't know if we can pull it off..
-Naruto nods back so they all jump near Bee & Hachibi and jump behind him to cover themselves whilst hachibi keeps lookout
-tobi looks up Gedo-
Tobi:"Everything I've worked for.. years of planning all are under risk from this child... He's just a child"
Tobi: Its time to end this.. The infinite Tsukuyomi will end all of this!.
-Naruto jumps out from hachibi to a few metres away from Tobi-
Naruto: Tobi before we continue this I have a question..
-Tobi watches Naruto intently-
Tobi: Considering you are about to die I suppose letting you have one last request would be acceptable..
Naruto: If you succeed in your plan what will you do after.. your 'purpose' will have been met.
-Tobi's eyes narrow-
Tobi:..... I ....
-Suddenly Kakashi appears underground beneath tobi and drags him down into the earth whilst attempting to impale him with a kunai..-
Tobi: Shinra Tensei!!....
Kakashi intentionally attaches a paper bomb and throws it whilst activating kamui and sending it to the alternate dimension-
-Kakashi is sent flying back and is catched by one of naruto's chakra arms-
Tobi: Kakashi that was just a waste of chakra
Gai:"If this doesn't work we're gonna have to retreat"
-Suddenly Naruto appears from the sky yielding a planetary rasengan-
Tobi:" When did he do tha-"
-tobi remembers using shinra tensei and only focusing on Kakashi's actions-
Kakashi:"Naruto used a perfect moment to launch a counter attack"
Tobi:"Shit If I phase out I'll get hit by those paper bombs .. its a risk I will have to take"
-Tobi teleports away as Naruto deactivates his planetary rasengan and hastily lands where tobi was standing-
-Naruto turns to Kakashi, Gai & Bee who are talking then jumps back to them-
[End Of 597]
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[598]
-Suddenly a fist emerge's and Naruto is sent hurtling away at jaw dropping speed-
-Tobi teleports back to where he was standing.. His mask is covered in cracks-
Naruto: Wow you don't look so good..
-Tobi's clothes are in rags with half of them singed & burnt completely-
Kakashi: Naruto are you ok?
Naruto: Yeah just taken by surprise..
-Naruto gets up and uses his speed to get to the others-
Gai: He did exactly what we thought he would..
Kakashi: Yes, although I expect the next part of the plan to be even more difficult.
Naruto: We can do it.. we've gotten this far for a reason!.
-Kakashi slams his hand down to the floor..
Earth Style: Earth protection dome-
-A huge layer of earth rises about naruto & co-
Kakashi: I've never done an entire person so we should use a clone
-naruto nods, uses kage bunshin to create and clone-
Naruto: Now just one more thing.
Kakashi: If this works I'll buy you some ramen Naruto.
Naruto: Well now Ramens on the line I'm definitely gonna win!.
-Naruto's clone stays behind with bee-
-Kakashi creates an opening at the top of the dome so he, Guy & Naruto can jump out-
Naruto:We're back!
Tobi: Heh' Where is Hachibi?
Naruto: He decided to take 5 but said to give you something..
Tobi: Oh..
-Bee's fires a bijuu dama point blank at Tobi from inside the dome causing the dome to burst open sending chunks of earth all around the area.
-naruto's clone makes with this distraction then signals Kakashi-
Kakashi:"Theres a chance this won't work but we're low on options & I'm low on chakra.. this might be my last one"
-Kakashi Activates kamui making the hole bigger then usual to allow the clone to jump through-
-Naruto's clone jumps in seemingly unscathed-
-The bijuu dama is hurtling towards Tobi he teleports away avoiding damage-
Kakashi:"Please let this work"
Tobi:That was too close.
Naruto: RASENGAN!
Tobi:!!!!
-Tobi is about to teleport when SM Naruto Hurls a rasengan at him landing a hit on his mask causing it to shatter
A panel is shown of Tobi glaring at the clone His face has prominent age lines & bags under his eyes..
Naruto: I told you I'd get that mask off Wrinkles!.
-Naruto's clone smiles and poofs away due to exhausting itself of chakra-
Naruto:"Kakashi & Gai might know who he is"
-Tobi can be seen teleporting back to them.. his arm bloody and he looks to Naruto & Co-
Kakashi: !!!!
Gai: !!!!
[End Of 598]
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[599]
-Sasuke & Co are making their way to those who know everything!-
Orochimaru: Sasuke.. We could kill the villagers on our way.
Sasuke:"He has a point but I made a promise to him -Remembering his meet with Naruto at the bridge-"
Suigetsu & Jugo: '....'
Sasuke: No.. I made a promise to someone that before I wipe the leaf out.. I would fight them and kill them.
Suigetsu: Why do I get the impression it was that guy who tried to stop us when you were tailing Itachi.
-Sasuke turns to Suigetsu with his Sharingan activated-
-Suigetsu looks at Sasuke and slows down out of fear-
Suigetsu:"He still has that temper"
Orochimaru: The kyuubi brat I presume?
Sasuke: Hmm, So Orochimaru Who exactly is 'Tobi'
Orochimaru: I have a few people who I think he could be.. One thing I do know is that he is the one who orchestrated the attack on the leaf by the ninetails all those years ago.
-Sasuke's eyes widen then turn to Orochimaru who turns to him looking at him blankly-
Sasuke:"He told me the kyuubi attack was a natural disaster!, I wonder what else he has lied about"
Orochimaru:"I see Tobi has been only telling Sasuke half the story"
Orochimaru: We'll be there soon, then you will get the answers you want Sasuke-kun.
Suigetsu: What do you intend to do after you've taken Sasuke there.
-turns to Suigetsu narrowing his eyes-
Orochimaru: Like I said back in the cave I have no interest in this war so I will probably go back to my hideout and continue my research.
-Sasuke turns to Orochimaru looking at him intently-
Jugo: We're here.
Sasuke: Jugo & Suigetsu stay here and keep guard.. if anyone trys to get in incapacitate them.. I will be the one to kill the villagers when the time comes.
-Scene ends showing Sasuke & Oro walking into the shrine-
[end]
(decided to leave 600 because I think it will be the chapter that gives us Tobi's identity & some of his backstory.
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