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NarutAwesome Rap Battle Final Round: Halfmoonuzumaki v.s wridacule
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Yeah haha...Those only go down in Charles'(Narutawesome) themed royales.
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Nice. I like the rhymes but my ass cant keep up with music and stuff 
. Good rappers here.
. Good rappers here.
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beg-to call-me pops? that was ya mother's I-dea
on my chang-gang sh*t, it's the CHAMP RIGHT HERE!
hotter than bon-fires at a camp right here
any doubters-still left I'm a make it pretty clear...
wrida-copper-field, for-those who couldn't understand
why-my opponants standin here-as...HALF-of-a-man
I'll.... saw a b*tch in half, pull a "rabbit" out my hat,
shove-it UP-your-mother's *ss and have her comin-back-2-back
who's sonin who?! you don't fit the armor-of-a-sparda
I aint NEVER been a guppy, BORN-in-shark-infested-water
my rhyme-books-like the carter, I could serve the whole block
sem-tex on deck, I got bombs on stock
like-it's....nukes-in-my-boots as i kick it off tops
so if a nigga wanna clash it's the blitz-krieg-bop
yeah i spit that rap sh*t, but more often than not
I hit your moms -wit-heavy-metal as she rock-around-the-clock
tryna compare weed-game?! homey please stop!
cuz sativa's-been-my-diva since my pops been hot
as-far-as my style goes, I-think you-got-the-story-wrong
they might've made-it a hot-line, I MADE IT A HOT SONG
that's word to jigga, and to shady and kiss
barrowed inspiration from others and made it my own sh*t
call-ME suspect in a line then talk about my sore d*ck?!
a prime example how sh*t is always twisted in the streets
cuz which-of-us-JUST said he'd catch some sh*t up in his teeth?????
if-I-was-to over-dose it would've happened silly pion
I was born cold, b*tch, my heart pumps freon
hard to miss this silly f@ggot cuz his g-strings neon
any-d*ck around he tryna pick-it like deion
hall-of-fame c*cksucker, blowin-it on primetime
f*ckin-wit-me you-out-to-sea witout a damn life-line
you wanna mention nvg? well -now it's lunch-time
so run your milk money, before you're punch-drunk...I'M
more than willin to fill in as the bully
since your child size bars aint-quite developed fully
a mummy? A MUMMY?! fine I'm king tut
and bes' belive when the f*ckin coffin's sealed-up
NA will drop me down my belt cuz f*ck nigga guess-what
HALF of a moon just isn't nearly hot enough
to f*ck wit god's favorite SUN cuz a nigga's burnin up
you're-more two-hand-touch, me I'm full contact
outer space flow, yeah I'm talkin contact!
I!........give a b*tch a contac while sippin on some conyac
you! choakin nigga's c*m-back while makin EYE contact
but yo, real sh*t, I had a blast mercin-you
by-the-way-N-A, my belt size is '42....
beg-to call-me pops? that was ya mother's I-dea
on my chang-gang sh*t, it's the CHAMP RIGHT HERE!
hotter than bon-fires at a camp right here
any doubters-still left I'm a make it pretty clear...
wrida-copper-field, for-those who couldn't understand
why-my opponants standin here-as...HALF-of-a-man
I'll.... saw a b*tch in half, pull a "rabbit" out my hat,
shove-it UP-your-mother's *ss and have her comin-back-2-back
who's sonin who?! you don't fit the armor-of-a-sparda
I aint NEVER been a guppy, BORN-in-shark-infested-water
my rhyme-books-like the carter, I could serve the whole block
sem-tex on deck, I got bombs on stock
like-it's....nukes-in-my-boots as i kick it off tops
so if a nigga wanna clash it's the blitz-krieg-bop
yeah i spit that rap sh*t, but more often than not
I hit your moms -wit-heavy-metal as she rock-around-the-clock
tryna compare weed-game?! homey please stop!
cuz sativa's-been-my-diva since my pops been hot
as-far-as my style goes, I-think you-got-the-story-wrong
they might've made-it a hot-line, I MADE IT A HOT SONG
that's word to jigga, and to shady and kiss
barrowed inspiration from others and made it my own sh*t
call-ME suspect in a line then talk about my sore d*ck?!
a prime example how sh*t is always twisted in the streets
cuz which-of-us-JUST said he'd catch some sh*t up in his teeth?????
if-I-was-to over-dose it would've happened silly pion
I was born cold, b*tch, my heart pumps freon
hard to miss this silly f@ggot cuz his g-strings neon
any-d*ck around he tryna pick-it like deion
hall-of-fame c*cksucker, blowin-it on primetime
f*ckin-wit-me you-out-to-sea witout a damn life-line
you wanna mention nvg? well -now it's lunch-time
so run your milk money, before you're punch-drunk...I'M
more than willin to fill in as the bully
since your child size bars aint-quite developed fully
a mummy? A MUMMY?! fine I'm king tut
and bes' belive when the f*ckin coffin's sealed-up
NA will drop me down my belt cuz f*ck nigga guess-what
HALF of a moon just isn't nearly hot enough
to f*ck wit god's favorite SUN cuz a nigga's burnin up
you're-more two-hand-touch, me I'm full contact
outer space flow, yeah I'm talkin contact!
I!........give a b*tch a contac while sippin on some conyac
you! choakin nigga's c*m-back while makin EYE contact
but yo, real sh*t, I had a blast mercin-you
by-the-way-N-A, my belt size is '42....
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Lmaooo keep it up NvG, everybody here has already seen you bitch out when asked if you were gonna battle me, dont act like youre hot shit if you arent gonna back it up.
My face at every failed shot youve taken ;D
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Haha thanks man, i cant wait to see what you think man
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Your belt size 42???
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yeah...like the title belt..
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xD Neverending, you're thinking Pants belt, hes talking about title belt sizes.
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Bumping for the poll
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The judges will start judging today
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Round 1
Halfmoonuzumaki
The thought of Wrida beating Half is straight f*ckin wrid-iculous,
Sorry for the wait boys, but now half's here to wrid us of this,
I liked this bar here but the thing is, it’s a very overused line against wridacule, I used it, nvg used it, and several others, even though it’s good in a sense of a rap battle, it’s not as effective since a lot of people use it......so it hits him but not as hard as you probably thought while writing him
Crack snackin, fudge packin, skill lackin hippie,
I could be spittin from a tee and you still could never hit me,
A peep at your page tells me you're a wrestlin fan,
Well son i run this shit, call me Vincent Mcmahon,
building up the momentum here, I like this part, but we all know wridacule do drugs, lol, so the first two lines were obvious, and nvg basically stated that throughout his entire battle, maybe you should have tried a different approach,
then you came back around with “dirt”, more like information really, and hit him with that, better than the previous lines before it
The Brahma Bull of Rap, Hit you with a Lyrical Elbow,
You think you can Beat The Streak? You Punk Nigga, Hell No!
Im here to take the Gold on this Grandest Stage of 'Em All,
And like Foley off that cage, You in for a helluva fall.
Aint nothin gonna Shield you from my white-hot wrath, Fella.
Imma make a f*ckin fool of you,#Santino Marella.
this entire part was full of wrestling and fighting reference, I think you should have went with the word play or better metaphor approach here, it seems too rushed to me, by that I mean you forced wrestling in this part, you put too many names when only 1 or 2 wrestling references were really needed, maybe it’s just my pov, but all in all, good way to start off the first round, I just hope as I continue reading this you don’t do it throughout the rap
But i digress, lets not stress time to see what else your page says bout you,
It would appear to me you've got yourself a little Waifu,
You told us you had a lady, what's the name of that ***** again?
It wouldnt by any chance, happen to be Morr-i-gan?
Wrida's head over heels for this Bat Wing B*tch's nipples,
Those tits are not real..you're f*ckin fawnin over pixels!
hmmmmmmmm......maybe it’s me, but you said let’s not see what your page says about you, which to me sounds like you’re moving on to a different topic, but you keep on digging, I understand you not reading his hobbies and you started looking through his profile, but it’s sounds wierd, and it’s not dirt even, it’s regular stuff that’s not effective, this is similar to what you did in round 1 with elementalist, you told a story when this is a rap battle. You tried adding insults but they didn’t hit home, why?....because the dirt you “pulled” up wasn’t as effective as you thought it would be, and again, it may be just me
But Wrid, I'll give you props, you defeated the Hype, man,
But rest assured that n*gga dont bring the heat like i can,
You in for a real challenge, none of that Cold War weak shit,
Cause when im makin bombs im guar-un-damn-tee-ing that they hit.
this part seemed to be aimed at NvG than wridacule, if you have beef with nvg don’t use it in wrida battle, its a waste of time, effort, and space, now......you tried to insult wrida while insult nvg but the hype man was still good for him, if someone beat the hype then it’s still good, the cold war and bringing the heat line was also aimed at nvg, and again, it’s didn’t affect wrida, but the last line was effective but it was still about nvg, wrida said nothing about cold war and dropping bombs.....so....yeah
According to some, this aint even the real finals fight,
Maybe if these haters had won, i might consider 'em being right,
nice, this was more of a shot a everyone but mainly wrida, basically saying “I’m here cause I’m real”
So Wrida you can think youre the better rapper and ill just front like im above it,
But try to tell that i suck and imma nut up and rebut it, like f*ck it,
in the first line you insulted yourself, i don’t know why you would say I’ll front when you should have said it with certainty, the second line was more on rhyme scheme, which was good, still so hardcore hitter, wridacure will have a lot to flip since you didn’t watch for how you said things
That some weak ass smut shit, thats the every day run of the mill rut shit,
So im dominate this game, my flow is hole-in-one Tiger Woods hits,
nice reference and comparison, basically saying he aint on shit and you are the shit
But no matter who wins or loses, none of that sourpuss bullshit,
No moanin and groanin, and no whinin or bitchin,
If you aint prepped for the heat, stay the f*ck out this kitchen,
Cause now im f*ckin ready and ive made your end my f*ckin mission,
not really any heavy hitters here, I mean it sound good but a lot, and I mean a lot, of people use the kitchen line, I would have found another way to use the kitchen line with stating it how others state it, the rest was mainly about rhyme scheme, I honestly think you’re in a 1 on 1 real life battle mindset right now, cause what you’re saying won’t do it in a online battle rap
Set to spit pure fire with each and every emission,
You rappin the verbal technician,lyrical rap magician,
The Linguistical Physician is in and he's dealin out rap prescriptions,
To silence all the doubt that i lack intuition,
Cause you can never expect my flow, shits like the spanish inquisition,
And imma win like i entered, without an ounce of competition.
this was better than before, i liked this part, great ending, and to me, the better part of the entire rap, you basically kept the reader waiting for shit to happen, great rhyme scheme though and loved the word play and metaphors
Halfmoonuzumaki
The thought of Wrida beating Half is straight f*ckin wrid-iculous,
Sorry for the wait boys, but now half's here to wrid us of this,
I liked this bar here but the thing is, it’s a very overused line against wridacule, I used it, nvg used it, and several others, even though it’s good in a sense of a rap battle, it’s not as effective since a lot of people use it......so it hits him but not as hard as you probably thought while writing him
Crack snackin, fudge packin, skill lackin hippie,
I could be spittin from a tee and you still could never hit me,
A peep at your page tells me you're a wrestlin fan,
Well son i run this shit, call me Vincent Mcmahon,
building up the momentum here, I like this part, but we all know wridacule do drugs, lol, so the first two lines were obvious, and nvg basically stated that throughout his entire battle, maybe you should have tried a different approach,
then you came back around with “dirt”, more like information really, and hit him with that, better than the previous lines before it
The Brahma Bull of Rap, Hit you with a Lyrical Elbow,
You think you can Beat The Streak? You Punk Nigga, Hell No!
Im here to take the Gold on this Grandest Stage of 'Em All,
And like Foley off that cage, You in for a helluva fall.
Aint nothin gonna Shield you from my white-hot wrath, Fella.
Imma make a f*ckin fool of you,#Santino Marella.
this entire part was full of wrestling and fighting reference, I think you should have went with the word play or better metaphor approach here, it seems too rushed to me, by that I mean you forced wrestling in this part, you put too many names when only 1 or 2 wrestling references were really needed, maybe it’s just my pov, but all in all, good way to start off the first round, I just hope as I continue reading this you don’t do it throughout the rap
But i digress, lets not stress time to see what else your page says bout you,
It would appear to me you've got yourself a little Waifu,
You told us you had a lady, what's the name of that ***** again?
It wouldnt by any chance, happen to be Morr-i-gan?
Wrida's head over heels for this Bat Wing B*tch's nipples,
Those tits are not real..you're f*ckin fawnin over pixels!
hmmmmmmmm......maybe it’s me, but you said let’s not see what your page says about you, which to me sounds like you’re moving on to a different topic, but you keep on digging, I understand you not reading his hobbies and you started looking through his profile, but it’s sounds wierd, and it’s not dirt even, it’s regular stuff that’s not effective, this is similar to what you did in round 1 with elementalist, you told a story when this is a rap battle. You tried adding insults but they didn’t hit home, why?....because the dirt you “pulled” up wasn’t as effective as you thought it would be, and again, it may be just me
But Wrid, I'll give you props, you defeated the Hype, man,
But rest assured that n*gga dont bring the heat like i can,
You in for a real challenge, none of that Cold War weak shit,
Cause when im makin bombs im guar-un-damn-tee-ing that they hit.
this part seemed to be aimed at NvG than wridacule, if you have beef with nvg don’t use it in wrida battle, its a waste of time, effort, and space, now......you tried to insult wrida while insult nvg but the hype man was still good for him, if someone beat the hype then it’s still good, the cold war and bringing the heat line was also aimed at nvg, and again, it’s didn’t affect wrida, but the last line was effective but it was still about nvg, wrida said nothing about cold war and dropping bombs.....so....yeah
According to some, this aint even the real finals fight,
Maybe if these haters had won, i might consider 'em being right,
nice, this was more of a shot a everyone but mainly wrida, basically saying “I’m here cause I’m real”
So Wrida you can think youre the better rapper and ill just front like im above it,
But try to tell that i suck and imma nut up and rebut it, like f*ck it,
in the first line you insulted yourself, i don’t know why you would say I’ll front when you should have said it with certainty, the second line was more on rhyme scheme, which was good, still so hardcore hitter, wridacure will have a lot to flip since you didn’t watch for how you said things
That some weak ass smut shit, thats the every day run of the mill rut shit,
So im dominate this game, my flow is hole-in-one Tiger Woods hits,
nice reference and comparison, basically saying he aint on shit and you are the shit
But no matter who wins or loses, none of that sourpuss bullshit,
No moanin and groanin, and no whinin or bitchin,
If you aint prepped for the heat, stay the f*ck out this kitchen,
Cause now im f*ckin ready and ive made your end my f*ckin mission,
not really any heavy hitters here, I mean it sound good but a lot, and I mean a lot, of people use the kitchen line, I would have found another way to use the kitchen line with stating it how others state it, the rest was mainly about rhyme scheme, I honestly think you’re in a 1 on 1 real life battle mindset right now, cause what you’re saying won’t do it in a online battle rap
Set to spit pure fire with each and every emission,
You rappin the verbal technician,lyrical rap magician,
The Linguistical Physician is in and he's dealin out rap prescriptions,
To silence all the doubt that i lack intuition,
Cause you can never expect my flow, shits like the spanish inquisition,
And imma win like i entered, without an ounce of competition.
this was better than before, i liked this part, great ending, and to me, the better part of the entire rap, you basically kept the reader waiting for shit to happen, great rhyme scheme though and loved the word play and metaphors
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ROUND 1- Half: You started off plain killing it referencing his name, and jumped to his interests and made some good references to WWE. I like how you know what you're talking about when you reference the stuff too (Undertaker > Punk was a nice touch in ya line), and you compared this battle to Wrestlemania, which is a good comparison. Also like how you mentioned Santino. You followed up kind of slower until you hit the pixels line, and then you referenced the Semi Finals and used it to your advantage. I loved when you hit this line:
"No moanin and groanin, and no whinin or bitchin,
If you aint prepped for the heat, stay the f*ck out this kitchen,"
And you followed up with more good raps, but I think this one stood out the most until you hit that damn solid ending.
Wrida: I was surprised at how well you executed your opening. You instantly called out his lines and told him to keep focus on who he was battling. I liked how you followed up by referencing the WWE lines, and pulled out some Sargent Slaughter references while you were at it. Your Kratos line stood out to me. You were calling out how you predicted he'd try to counter your Zeus lines, then you followed it in with some lines on his flow. After that I think you started dropping until you hit that CSI line. Then you put him in the b*tch category and continued with some killer lines. I especially liked this one:
"POP! thas the end of...HALF an uzumaki
or better yet the end of a failed wrida copy".
I like how you referenced his name as well and called him your copy, then you started looking down on him like you were his lyrical daddy, then countered the Brahma Bull reference by saying he was castrated. I like how you were acting as the verbal beast in the cage and said "this is what the f*ck you get when the beast shakes off his muzzle". Very well played line followed by you basically ending the match early and telling NA to get your belt, I liked the way you put it out there too.
(Adding the other 2 rounds later on guys)
"No moanin and groanin, and no whinin or bitchin,
If you aint prepped for the heat, stay the f*ck out this kitchen,"
And you followed up with more good raps, but I think this one stood out the most until you hit that damn solid ending.
Wrida: I was surprised at how well you executed your opening. You instantly called out his lines and told him to keep focus on who he was battling. I liked how you followed up by referencing the WWE lines, and pulled out some Sargent Slaughter references while you were at it. Your Kratos line stood out to me. You were calling out how you predicted he'd try to counter your Zeus lines, then you followed it in with some lines on his flow. After that I think you started dropping until you hit that CSI line. Then you put him in the b*tch category and continued with some killer lines. I especially liked this one:
"POP! thas the end of...HALF an uzumaki
or better yet the end of a failed wrida copy".
I like how you referenced his name as well and called him your copy, then you started looking down on him like you were his lyrical daddy, then countered the Brahma Bull reference by saying he was castrated. I like how you were acting as the verbal beast in the cage and said "this is what the f*ck you get when the beast shakes off his muzzle". Very well played line followed by you basically ending the match early and telling NA to get your belt, I liked the way you put it out there too.
(Adding the other 2 rounds later on guys)
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Wridacule
hol'-up, f*ck nigga get your story straight
are you battlin me or askin nvg upon a blind date?!
same thing I said, wrida is using halfmoon words against him, halfmoon basically mentioned nvg through his entire rap, not really but you get the point, and that’s why wrida said the blind date thing, great start
focus on the task at hand cuz it's-2-tall of-an-order
yeah I'ma wrestlin fan and like seargant slaughter
again, he’s making halfmoon words look like dirt, he’s not flipping but he’s making it look foolish, like halfmoon can't handle his talent
I cobra clutch this microphone and command the troops
what's a man-made bomb when you're battlin ZUES?!!
one thing wrida, u should use word check before u post, just to catch all your mistakes, lol, but anyway, the zeus line had me laughing, wridacule is just making your lines look childish again
and before you make a boast "like kratos I blah blah blah"
I sin cara flip this shit #huri-can-ran-ahhhh!
damn, the kratos line as okay, you tried to use what he’ll probably say against him before he said it, that’s fine
I can't speak on a "waifu" was it? thas boston slang???
well I ron-do wit-this-flow as I do my thang
I didn’t understand his waifu line either.......showing common confusion is good to use, it’s like a “wtf are u talking about line”
it makes the opponent look stupid
the more I think about it, that role could use your touch
cuz his game and your game are both in need of a crutch
BUT! I'll rip more than your a c l
you seein wrida?! nigga do pray tell...
do I really need to go and post the wanka meme
I electrify shit..! like I'm wearin blanka's jeans
I was lmao, that last line killed it, damn, just damn, not much to say here
turn this to a murder scene, no c s i
morrigans on my homepage that offends you why?
again, making halfmoon point seem pointless here
aint room on this site for-two b*tches that suck?
or is that the REAL title that you covet so much?
I'm be-yond clutch! ray allen with 3 tics on the clock
even wit a hand in my face I'm STILL hittin the shot
POP! thas the end of...HALF an uzumaki
or better yet the end of a failed wrida copy
building up momentum, nic metaphors too, not many heavy hitters besides half an uzumaki line
member when you first came and tried to be-me so-bad
I feel like a proud dad..."they grow up so fast..."
pump the breaks be-fore you think to surpass
oh! you're a brahma bull? well did that bull get cas-
trated.......? yo bars aint got no nuts
you're exactly like a mounds! it's all adding up
little candy bars full of coconut fluff
with highlited punch-lines that are the oposite of tough
not much wrong here, you had a couple heavy hitters and great use of metaphors, you’re using the lines halfmoon said against him which is the advantage of going first
you wont get no competition, cuz this sh*t wont be a struggle!
this is what the f*ck you-get when the beast shakes off his muzzle
damn, the muzzle part was raw,
you get balled the f*ck up and left inside a puddle
cuz I'm p-manning when I bomb, I can do-it-wit no huddle
n oh let me guess? that makes you tom brady?
without spy-gate thoughts of you winning the ring is crazy
so get back to the side-lines and accept the hand that's dealt
and narutawesome please go and GET MY BELT!!!!!!
I line the belt ending, it makes it certain that you think you’ll win
hol'-up, f*ck nigga get your story straight
are you battlin me or askin nvg upon a blind date?!
same thing I said, wrida is using halfmoon words against him, halfmoon basically mentioned nvg through his entire rap, not really but you get the point, and that’s why wrida said the blind date thing, great start
focus on the task at hand cuz it's-2-tall of-an-order
yeah I'ma wrestlin fan and like seargant slaughter
again, he’s making halfmoon words look like dirt, he’s not flipping but he’s making it look foolish, like halfmoon can't handle his talent
I cobra clutch this microphone and command the troops
what's a man-made bomb when you're battlin ZUES?!!
one thing wrida, u should use word check before u post, just to catch all your mistakes, lol, but anyway, the zeus line had me laughing, wridacule is just making your lines look childish again
and before you make a boast "like kratos I blah blah blah"
I sin cara flip this shit #huri-can-ran-ahhhh!
damn, the kratos line as okay, you tried to use what he’ll probably say against him before he said it, that’s fine
I can't speak on a "waifu" was it? thas boston slang???
well I ron-do wit-this-flow as I do my thang
I didn’t understand his waifu line either.......showing common confusion is good to use, it’s like a “wtf are u talking about line”
it makes the opponent look stupid
the more I think about it, that role could use your touch
cuz his game and your game are both in need of a crutch
BUT! I'll rip more than your a c l
you seein wrida?! nigga do pray tell...
do I really need to go and post the wanka meme
I electrify shit..! like I'm wearin blanka's jeans
I was lmao, that last line killed it, damn, just damn, not much to say here
turn this to a murder scene, no c s i
morrigans on my homepage that offends you why?
again, making halfmoon point seem pointless here
aint room on this site for-two b*tches that suck?
or is that the REAL title that you covet so much?
I'm be-yond clutch! ray allen with 3 tics on the clock
even wit a hand in my face I'm STILL hittin the shot
POP! thas the end of...HALF an uzumaki
or better yet the end of a failed wrida copy
building up momentum, nic metaphors too, not many heavy hitters besides half an uzumaki line
member when you first came and tried to be-me so-bad
I feel like a proud dad..."they grow up so fast..."
pump the breaks be-fore you think to surpass
oh! you're a brahma bull? well did that bull get cas-
trated.......? yo bars aint got no nuts
you're exactly like a mounds! it's all adding up
little candy bars full of coconut fluff
with highlited punch-lines that are the oposite of tough
not much wrong here, you had a couple heavy hitters and great use of metaphors, you’re using the lines halfmoon said against him which is the advantage of going first
you wont get no competition, cuz this sh*t wont be a struggle!
this is what the f*ck you-get when the beast shakes off his muzzle
damn, the muzzle part was raw,
you get balled the f*ck up and left inside a puddle
cuz I'm p-manning when I bomb, I can do-it-wit no huddle
n oh let me guess? that makes you tom brady?
without spy-gate thoughts of you winning the ring is crazy
so get back to the side-lines and accept the hand that's dealt
and narutawesome please go and GET MY BELT!!!!!!
I line the belt ending, it makes it certain that you think you’ll win
NarutAwesome
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Now guys, I'm judging harder than normal and if I read lines that is obviously from some else or is over used in general I'll say it, that was halfmoon problem, to the newer judges they don't know about those line beginning used again....and there is nothing wrong with using a line again but you have to use it to your advantage and in your own words
or in other words, if I read a line or a part that is overused, it takes away that sting because I heard it several times before
now that this was said
Round 1: Goes to wridacule, mainly because he had the advantage of going second, but he made halfmoon rap look pointless, and some of halfmoon lines either refered to nvg, who isn't in this battle.....also wridacule had more heavy hitters than halfmoon and halfmoon should have spent more time with actually word play, metaphors, and flow than with digging up stuff in wridacule profile
halfmoon did way better in round 2 though, I'll speak on that later
or in other words, if I read a line or a part that is overused, it takes away that sting because I heard it several times before
now that this was said
Round 1: Goes to wridacule, mainly because he had the advantage of going second, but he made halfmoon rap look pointless, and some of halfmoon lines either refered to nvg, who isn't in this battle.....also wridacule had more heavy hitters than halfmoon and halfmoon should have spent more time with actually word play, metaphors, and flow than with digging up stuff in wridacule profile
halfmoon did way better in round 2 though, I'll speak on that later
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I don't watch WWE sorry.......cuase I was like DAAAAYYYUUUMMM YOU A BIG BOI