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Okay, here is some constructive criticism. Before I start, I like your work, and keep it up; you are good!

1. Finished art on graph paper. ( usually in the art world this is something rarely done, do your sketches on graph and finish on clear paper)

2. Hinata's hair in top left corner, I dont think her hair has been short since part one, I could be wrong though.

3. Body proportions of the center piece are a bit off, hinata is too small and feeble looking, and naruto is a bit hulking.

Other than these three things, keep it up, coloring was great, you have talent!
 
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Okay, here is some constructive criticism. Before I start, I like your work, and keep it up; you are good!

1. Finished art on graph paper. ( usually in the art world this is something rarely done, do your sketches on graph and finish on clear paper)

2. Hinata's hair in top left corner, I dont think her hair has been short since part one, I could be wrong though.

3. Body proportions of the center piece are a bit off, hinata is too small and feeble looking, and naruto is a bit hulking.

Other than these three things, keep it up, coloring was great, you have talent!
Nice! but I agree with Senju.
But still nice!
Thanks, I admit proportions are my greatest weakness. I will look into that.
About the graph paper, hahah I randomly sketched/copied a naruhina fanart then I got busy and thought of adding a couple of things and voila!!
 

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Okay, here is some constructive criticism. Before I start, I like your work, and keep it up; you are good!

1. Finished art on graph paper. ( usually in the art world this is something rarely done, do your sketches on graph and finish on clear paper)

2. Hinata's hair in top left corner, I dont think her hair has been short since part one, I could be wrong though.

3. Body proportions of the center piece are a bit off, hinata is too small and feeble looking, and naruto is a bit hulking.

Other than these three things, keep it up, coloring was great, you have talent!
Her hair was short in The Last's after credit scene as seen here

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Great job on the Art HyuugaHeir :)
 
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