This is chapter 2 and with some of the problems getting worse for Katon ....well read and find out
As Kurosuki escaped the village he found a nut a one he has not seen before next to it was a leaf he picked up the leaf and put it in a bag and continued to Pein's secret hideout. It was close by but hidden carefully.
Katon looked around and saw his special medical healing potion he made at the acadamy he fed it to his mum and began to breath properly she was fine she got took to the medical hospital. The medical staff thanked me and my mum explained what happend. She said that my brother was angry and came home with a long sword he slashed it at her and everyone eles in the house except for father and little cousins. Katon faced a problem he had to go and find his brother and find out what happend buthe didn't know where he was going that was a problem. Katon packed everything he needed and walked out the village spotting people at every corner wondering where he was going. Katon went out the village and saw what seemed to be his brother's cloak. Katon rushed over but his brother dissapeared into the air and dissapeared nowhere in sight.
Kurosuki spotted Katon at the back of his eye he knew he had to escape so he dissapeared spotting the confusion in his brother's eyes. He was in the air Katon soon saw him so he disspeared and he was nowhere in sight.
Naruto woke up to a fresh morning going out for a little walk he spotted Katon standing in the middle of the forest he asked the boy where he was going and Katon answered to find his brother who killed some of his family for a reason. Naruto knew he and the boy had to find the boy's brother so Naruto asked the boy for his name. The boy answered I'm Katon and my brother's name is Kurosuki. Katon ran up ahead Naruto following. He was led to a huge hideout and Katon saw his brother because of the whispering to him that the person entering the hideout was his brother Kurosuki.
----Now Both Roleplayed-----
Naruto and Katon rushed over and entered the hideout spotting Pein and Kurosuki. Naruto knows that Pein was evil after being told by the toad sage. Naruto told Katon about Pein and Katon knew that Kurosuki and Pein was part of the story of Kurosuki killing a bit of the family. Kurosuki spotted Naruto and Katon but pretended not to notice. Katon launched a fireball at Pein but Pein saw it and just deflected it at Naruto and Katon making very huge problems.
So what you think about second chapter...I didn't put anything fror sasuke
Chapter 2 - Facing A Few Problems
As Kurosuki escaped the village he found a nut a one he has not seen before next to it was a leaf he picked up the leaf and put it in a bag and continued to Pein's secret hideout. It was close by but hidden carefully.
-----Katon's problem------
Katon looked around and saw his special medical healing potion he made at the acadamy he fed it to his mum and began to breath properly she was fine she got took to the medical hospital. The medical staff thanked me and my mum explained what happend. She said that my brother was angry and came home with a long sword he slashed it at her and everyone eles in the house except for father and little cousins. Katon faced a problem he had to go and find his brother and find out what happend buthe didn't know where he was going that was a problem. Katon packed everything he needed and walked out the village spotting people at every corner wondering where he was going. Katon went out the village and saw what seemed to be his brother's cloak. Katon rushed over but his brother dissapeared into the air and dissapeared nowhere in sight.
------Kurosuki's View Of Katon's rushing--------
Kurosuki spotted Katon at the back of his eye he knew he had to escape so he dissapeared spotting the confusion in his brother's eyes. He was in the air Katon soon saw him so he disspeared and he was nowhere in sight.
---Meanwhile For Naruto---
Naruto woke up to a fresh morning going out for a little walk he spotted Katon standing in the middle of the forest he asked the boy where he was going and Katon answered to find his brother who killed some of his family for a reason. Naruto knew he and the boy had to find the boy's brother so Naruto asked the boy for his name. The boy answered I'm Katon and my brother's name is Kurosuki. Katon ran up ahead Naruto following. He was led to a huge hideout and Katon saw his brother because of the whispering to him that the person entering the hideout was his brother Kurosuki.
----Now Both Roleplayed-----
Naruto and Katon rushed over and entered the hideout spotting Pein and Kurosuki. Naruto knows that Pein was evil after being told by the toad sage. Naruto told Katon about Pein and Katon knew that Kurosuki and Pein was part of the story of Kurosuki killing a bit of the family. Kurosuki spotted Naruto and Katon but pretended not to notice. Katon launched a fireball at Pein but Pein saw it and just deflected it at Naruto and Katon making very huge problems.
So what you think about second chapter...I didn't put anything fror sasuke
