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sleeps within a grassy plain dreaming of strawberries and sweet things.

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Although deep within his dreams, L is able to maintain his senses in reality. He can feel the blades of grass brush his face as a slight breeze causes them to flicker in a rhythmic dance back and forth. The sky is a clear blue, only a few small clouds are dotted across it, the sun radiating down upon L warmly embracing him. L is overcome with a sense of peace, he is calm and relaxed. However, this all changes when he smells something.

Eyes snapping open L jumps from his lying down position to his usual crouch.

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L sees the source of the smell. In the distance he can see a very familiar man calmly approaching him. L recognizes him as clan member, Shikamaru Nara. This was going to be trouble. L had been disowned by a number of Nara Clan members after his move to Sunagakure. He had made his move while Konoha had been at war, and it appeared to them that L had left the village out of cowardice (which wasn't the case). L had heard rumours that members of the clan had been searching for him to punish him for his supposed cowardice and humiliation he brought to the clan. Shikamaru had been one of the Clan members L had heard about, so L was high on alert.

It took a moment but eventually Shikamaru came to a stop mid range range from him. The two eyed each other in silence , Shikamaru's gaze concerned , L's suspicious.

L wasn't one to take chances after hearing these rumours. He went right on the attack.




L draws from his pouch two chakra blades which he infuses with his shadow chakra and then throws in the direction of Shikamaru but not directly at him, making it appear as though he had badly misaimed. One flies to Shikamaru's right where his shadow is cast, the other to shikamaru's left.

Tied to the ends of the blades are ninja wire which L had a tight grip on between each hand upon throwing the blades. (The wire is long enough that when they reach their target (which is mid range) , the wires still have a fair amount of slack remaining)

The blade thrown towards Shikamaru's right lands bang in the middle of Shikamaru's shadow. Using his shadow chakra within the blade, he paralyzes Shikamaru's shadow in place, and in turn Shikamaru himself. The other blade simply lands in the ground to Shikamaru's left in no shadow at all.

With Shikamaru unable to move, L pulls at the wire's that were tied to the blades, releasing them from the blades and causing them to wrap around Shikamaru's torso area (ties his arms flat against his sides as well) . As they intertwine around him, L places the ends of the wires in his mouth and performs the following hand seals,

Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger

He then breathes fire from his mouth causing flames to rush forward along the wire's wrapped around Shikamaru to him and igniting him.
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Techniques used

(Kage Mane Shuriken) - Shadow Imitation Shuriken
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Traps the enemy buy throwing and hitting there shadow special blades infused with shadow chakra.

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.





Number of Nara techniques used so far: 1

Do I have to keep track of my chakra use ? o_O And sorry for the sh^tty excuse as to why we were fighting ahaha I couldn't think of anything !
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It was a pretty normal day.Shikamaru had just been playing Shogi,but got bored.He took a random stroll,looking at the clouds as he always does.He walked with his hands in his pockets,a boring day indeed.

Suddenly,Shikamaru came across L.He was a member of the Nara clan,and had brought shame to the clan.Shikamaru remembers that the Nara clan superiors had spoken about L.He should be punished.
"L...what a drag.Guess we have to fight."

L looks at Shikamaru concerned,then he suddenly pulls out a few kunai.Shikamaru,knowing he is from the Nara clan,starts to blow away the kunai.Shikamaru forms the Tiger → Ox → Dog → Rabbit → Snake handseals,creating a sudden gust that blows back L and the kunai.

(Fūton: Daitoppa) - Wind Release: Great Break Through
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that
when the user performs the following hand seals Tiger
→ Ox → Dog → Rabbit → Snake they create a sudden
gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on
the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough
destructive power to knock down a large tree.

"Hasty aren't we?"
The gust blows L back into Long Range.Shikamaru then forms the Rat handseal and sends his shadow towards L.As the shadow reaches L,Shikamaru manipulates the shadow to form into needle-like parts which impales L.

(Kage Nui) - Shadow Sewing
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20(+5 if used with
exploding tags)
Damage Points: 40(+10 if used with exploding tags)
Description: Shadow needles that can move the
opponent or impale them and can be used with
exploding tags.

While L is impaled,Shikamaru then forms two handseals Horse → Tiger,and releases a meteor sized sphere of fire.This ball of fire then carries away L and then explodes.

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals
Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that
carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion
on impact.
 

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As anticipated, Shikamaru would try and 'blow' the blades away from himself. L recognizes the order of hand seals Shikamaru forms and realizes the technique he'd be performing was: Wind Release: Great Break Through.

Luckily for Shikamaru he manages to pull out the technique just in time, before L's shadow chakra infused blades can pierce his shadow. (The blades had made it quite far in their flight to what would be considered 'mid range' from me, but hadn't quite made it to you, due to the delay in performing your technique as it required 5 hand seals.)

The blades are blown back in L's direction in a gust of wind that Shikamaru produces.
(As a result, ninja wire becomes detached from blades - L lets go of Ninja wire).
Due to Shikamaru's gust of wind being initially produced from mid range, L has more than enough time to anticipate the incoming technique. As the wind approaches L (so now the gust is now about short range of him) L creates a slicing gust of wind which splits the incoming gust of wind, neutralizing it.

(Fūton: Kazekiri) - Wind Style: Wind Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User will create a slicing wind gust which is used to divide and neutralize a Wind attack launched against him. It splits an incoming wind attack of lower or equal strength and makes it harmless.


Immediately after L releases his slicing wind gust (So the wind gust is splitting Shikamaru's wind gust at this time) L reaches into his pouch and throws several flash bombs behind himself. As they are in flight, L performs the Rat hand seal. They land on the ground behind L and as a result explode within moments of being thrown and just moments after the wind is neutralized causing a bright flash of light which blinds Shikamaru. The flash of light also results in L's shadow extending towards Shikamaru and L uses his shadow chakra to maintain its length and make it continue towards Shikamaru.
(So even though the flash of light is gone, L is able to maintain the length of his shadow that the light causes and then make his shadow extend from here using his chakra- this is a benefit as it means that the shadow has covered more ground in a quicker amount of time as a opposed to as if he had simply made the shadow extend across the ground using his chakra from the beginning without the aid of the flash bombs. )

As the shadow approaches a blinded Shikamaru, L materializes his shadow into a giant hand which crushes Shikamaru.

(Kageasshou) - Shadow Giant Hand Crush
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Using Flash bombs to extend your shadow your form it into a giant hand that crushes the opponent.





Attempted Nara Techniques so far: 2
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L then slices the gust of wind in half.Shikamaru then immediately starts channeling Katon chakra into his forearm as L jumps back.As L reaches into his pouch,Shikamaru then quickly swing his arm in a wave motion,creating a wall of flames that act as a wall and a defense.(L can't see Shikamaru and vice versa)

( Katon: Honoo no Heki ) Fire Release: Flame Wall
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user kneads fire chakra into their
forearm and then by swinging their arm in a wave motion
they release the fire chakra creating a line of fire that
spreads out infront of the user acting as a defensive
wall.

Shikamaru then focuses Fuuton chakra in his mouth,and releases a stream of wind which takes the shape of a huge tornado.This tornado heads towards L through the huge wall of flames,making it a fire and wind combination which is very powerful.

(Fūton: Shippuu Tama) - Wind Release: Twister Shot
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused
chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a
twister to attack the enemy.

After doing so,Shikamaru takes out two kunai and infuses them with Shadow chakra.He then jumps to his right and throws the kunai at L's shadow while L is occupied with the huge fire and wind combination.Thus,L is stuck and can't move as the twister approaches.

(Kage Mane Shuriken) - Shadow Imitation Shuriken
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Traps the enemy buy throwing and hitting
there shadow special blades infused with shadow
chakra.
 

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Upon seeing Shikamaru wave his arm, L stops what he is doing (Doesn't throw flash bombs). A large fiery wall appears and his view of Shikamaru is obstructed. The wall suddenly begins warping out of shape into a large fiery twister which heads towards L. Thinking quickly, L releases the fuuton chakra that he had already gathered around his body from the previous technique and creates a wall of 5 large Tornadoes that begin hurtling towards the incoming fiery tornado.

( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.

*Your kunai are either sucked up by your own technique, or simply deflected/sucked up by my tornado wall.*

As it does so L gathers his water chakra then claps, releasing it and creating a large vortex of water out of nowhere which explodes into a large wave of water which L directs after the Tornado wall.

(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid (Made short range of the user with a med range reach)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water out of knowhere. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can also control the direction the wave goes with hand movements.

Along with the waves speed after the tornadoes (So it catches up) and the tornadoes immense power, the wave of water is ultimately sucked into the tornado wall meaning that the tornadoes are now combined with both water and wind.

By this time, your tornado meets my oncoming wall of tornadoes. The two jutsu ultimately cancel one another out. However, due to fire on water, water vapour is made obstructing our vision.

(So there is a large Water Vapour Cloud in the middle of our positions. We are not inside the Water Vapour.)

Quickly, L first throws a few smoke bombs in Water Vapour barrier, they go off and the smoke is barely able to be distinguished from the Water Vapour. The Water vapour then, appears to be simply spreading (Towards both me and Shikamaru), there is no obvious sign that there is smoke within it. Following quickly after them, L throws several more smoke bombs through the water vapour now, to Shikamaru's position. They go off and the smoke surrounds him and combines with the smoke that has combined with the water vapour.
(Now Shikamaru is inside the Smoke-Water Vapour Cloud)

L then performs the rat hand seal and then uses his shadow chakra to extend his shadow to the cloud of smoke and water vapour, materializing his shadow he makes it cover the entire smoke-water vapour cloud stopping it from spreading over himself and anymore , ultimately compressing it and crushing Shikamaru within it.

(Kage Enmaku) - Shadow Smoke Screen
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: You first throw a smoke bomb at the opponent and then your shadow covers the smoke compressing it and trapping the opponent in a body suit shadow with the high pressure smoke crushing them form with in.





Attempted Nara Techniques so far: 3
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As the two combinations of jutsu cancel each other out.This causes water vapour to be produced.This blocks both Shikamaru and L's vision.Shikamaru then releases a gust of wind from his mouth towards L's last known position in an attempt to blow him back and also clear the vapour.This happens extremely fast as the jutsu does not require handseals.

(Futon: Ressenpū) - Wind Release: Violent
Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user gushes a powerful stream
of wind from their mouth towards their enemy.

With L is stunted by the Fuuton,Shikamaru then quickly gathers his Raiton chakra around his body and releases it in a non-focused electrical charge which doesn't kill,but only paralyzes.L is is now paralyzed and unable to move.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One
Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-
focused electrically charged chakra from their body.
Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on
contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be
channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out
into the air or ground.

Shikamaru then forms the rat handseal and inserts his chakra into his own shadow.He then sends the shadow towards the paralyzed L and upon reaching him,Shikamaru manipulates the shadow to form in needle like projections that impale L.Shikamaru then takes out a few explosive tag kunai and throws them at L.Upon reaching him,the explosive tags explode.

(Kage Nui) - Shadow Sewing
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20(+5 if used with
exploding tags)
Damage Points: 40(+10 if used with exploding tags)
Description: Shadow needles that can move the
opponent or impale them and can be used with
exploding tags.
 

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The water vapor obstructs their vision. But almost immediately after its conception, L can see the water vapour begin to rush towards his direction, but also dissipating. It is obvious that Shikamaru has formed some kind of wind technique that he has released at the vapor.

Thinking quickly, L once again releases his wind chakra, creating a wall of 5 giant tornadoes that he sends towards Shikamaru's last known position and ultimately through the dissipating vapor.
*This happens before Shikamaru's technique can reach L, as it too requires no hand seals, and L anticipated the technique when he saw the vapor dissipating and coming towards him, indicating that it had been blown his way with a wind technique. Shikamaru's technique upon reaching the tornadoes, would be neutralized or will join my tornado wall, being a lower rank. Since I am not stunned by your wind technique, your lightning technique never happens. *

( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.

Immediately after the conception of the tornado wall, L performs one hand seal and releases his fire chakra sending large dragon shaped fireballs after the tornado, which catch up to it, combining with the wall and making a large fiery tornado wall which hurtles towards Shikamaru.
*By this time, the vapor should be dissipated, however, our vision is now obstructed by a fiery tornado wall.*

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

By the time they had caught up with the tornado, L had gathered his earth chakra and releases it into the ground creating an earth tremor, which obviously causes the ground to shake.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremor that can result in harming the enemy target.


The ground shaking, Shikamaru is mowed down by the fiery, tornado wall, which ultimately kills him.

*The tornado wall should reach Shikamaru before the end of the tremor, as it obviously travels quite quickly. The effects of the tremor however, will impact Shikamaru before the tornado can reach him. What I mean is that Shikamaru will feel the ground shaking before the tornado runs him over.*
 
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As the fiery tornado wall forms,Shikamaru immediately manipulates the Earth infront of him,and creates a half faced dome that would defend against the incoming attack.

(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth
Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user creates a dome of earth, which
protects them from external attacks. The domes shape is
in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls.
That creates a half face dome.

With the fiery wall obstructs L's vision,he would not be able to see Shikamaru defend against the fiery tornado.Immediately after,the ground starts shaking,causing Shikamaru to stumble and fall.Shikamaru uses this to his advantage and merges himself with the Earth and disappears underground.

(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release:
Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide
underground until they're ready to attack an opponent.
By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily
emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground
around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid
incoming jutsus.

Now,L does not know Shikamaru is underground and thinks that he has been engulfed by the fiery tornado.Shikamaru now has the element of surprise.Shikamaru moves through the ground,undetected,towards L's position.As Shikamaru reaches L,he grabs L's leg and pulls him down into the ground as he pulls himself up.L would be completely immobilized.Shikamaru then takes out his kunai and slit's L's throat,killing him.

(Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Double
Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, emerging from the ground below
the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only
their head is above ground. Unable to move, the
opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.

Sorry for the long wait mate,let's finish this!
 

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That was a great fight, I only just scraped the win there. If your last move were valid (which it almost was - I was panicking) you probably would have won, I have no idea how I would have countered it. You have been a great first opponent, and hopefully we can meet in the battle field sometime again, perhaps when we have both mastered the shadows !

Thanks again my fellow L fan !
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