King Volcano
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Hello! :izuna: I hope you all have fun reading this one, and you all love it! :3
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Where...where am I? This feeling...so different...what is this feeling? Hmm...feelings...wait...what is that voice?
"Can you hear me?"
Minato's vision was blurry. He could see somebody.
Who...is this?
"I can feel Minato's heart...Jiraiya...he's okay."
Master Jiraiya...
"Thank you Siyuge...I'm so glad I found you here in the village. Why are you here?" asked Jiraiya.
Minato opened his eyes, and saw that he was in a hospital bed. They must have found him, and brought him to the hospital. He saw Siyuge.
Siyuge had long silver hair, green eyes, pale skin, and had a scar on his cheek. He wore black pants, a belt, and a shirtless gray shirt.
Minato saw Jiraiya talking to him on the other side of the room.
"Ugh..."
Jiraiya noticed Minato. "Minato! You're awake!" laughed Jiraiya. "You had me worry for a bit!"
"What-what happened?" asked Minato feeling a bump on his head.
"You performed a very risky jutsu," Siyuge answered. "I'm amazed you woke up already. It's been only two days. I was expecting you to wake up in four."
"Two days," said Minato a bit surprised.
"You have improve in your powers," said Jiraiya. "But next time be careful okay? Ha-ha."
"I will," said Minato. "Where's Sumago and Oiichii?"
"They are at the Kage Temple here in the village," said Siyuge. "They've been assigned as body guards to protect the Prince of the Jungle. Many shinobi here are at the frontlines. You never know when the Mizume will attack."
Minato removed the bed sheets, and tried to get up.
"Wait Minato...you must rest," said Siyuge.
"Ha-ha," chuckled Minato getting out of the bed, and standing up. "I don't have time to rest while everyone else is not."
Minato ranned out of the room. He got his clothes from the storage area, and changed into them.
Jiraiya and Siyuge were standing in the room still.
"Hehe."
"What is it Siyuge?"
Siyuge looked out of the window, and looked down. The sun shined brightly, and the skies were cleared. He saw Minato running to the Kage Temple.
"That boy...to perform a jutsu that great. He has a bright future ahead of him as long as he doesn't do anything dumb."
"That's Minato for yeah!" laughed Jiraiya.
"Hmm..."
Minato made it to the Kage Temple. It was huge, and surrounded by the jungle. Vines grew all over it. As he looked around the area he could see that the village had vines growing all over it. The great junbgle surrounded it. The village just like the Leaf Village had a giant wall surrounding it, but the trees were so high you could still see the jungle.
He made it to the Temple Gates. Two samurai who were the Temple Guards appeared. "Who are you?" asked one of them.
"My name's Minato of the Leaf," he said.
"Of the Leaf?" one of them asked.
"Yeah," said Minato. "Don't you believe me?"
"Oh Minato! You're okay!"
Minato saw Sumago run through the gates, and hugged him.
"Hey Sumago! Stop-stop you're...squeezing me to much..." Minato said not able to breathe.
"Sumago, we are body guards" said a familiar voice.
Oiichii and a boy about four years older than Minato stood by Oiichii.
"Oiichii, Sumago, if my father sees that I'm not in the Temple Grounds he's going to kill me. Is this a friend?"
"Yes, his name is Minato. I'm sure he can be your bodyguard as well."
Oiichii and the prince left, and went into the Temple Grounds. Minato was amazed how nice this prince dressed. He wore a silver robe that had a weird symbol on the back. He had short brown hair, and blue eyes. He had somewhat tanned skin.
Sumago and Minato started walking through the gates. One of the samurais grabbed Minatos arm. He pulled Minato's ear to his mouth and whispered, "Be careful of the king...he's been acting strangely..."
"What?" asked Minato. Sumago pulled Minato into the Grounds, and said, "Come-come on Minato, you heard what the prince said about his father."
Minato looked back. What did he mean?
The thunder roared, and the rain fell to the ground below endlessly. In this area of the Land it was rugged, and not much jungle could be found here.
There was many hills, and a huge mountain. On the top of this mountain was the Kingdom of Mizume while at the base of this great mountain surrounded by walls was the Village of Mizume. The peak of this mountain was so high clouds covered it.
Two people wearing long dark hooded robes stood on a balcony on the western part of the peak looking down at the village.
"Hmm...do you think that our plan will go well...we have done so much for this Village..."
"I think this plan will go well...we will destroy the Jungle Village, than take over. We will then attack the Sand, and a war will start. We wll abandon the Mizume, and then do a surprise attack on this so called Land of Fire. The Land Of Fire will think it's the Sand who attacked, and then a Great Ninja War will start..."
"Wow you have everything set, but what if things don't go as plan?"
"We will then move to our next plan."
"Are you two still talking?" asked a fat man who wore a crown, and a long green robe. He walked on to the balcony. "It is freezing out here! I need to go back inside!"
One of the hooded robed man turned back to see the King of the Mizume walk back into the Kingdom. He had piercing red eyes. "That king, I hate him so much. I do hope my plan works...I get to kill him in this one if it does."
The other one turned back too see the Kingdom as well. "Hmm...so you really are going to kill him Totseku...I hope you have fun." This man had dark skin, and long black hair. He wore black lipstick, and a giant earring.
"Hehe of course I'll have fun my friend," laughed Totseku looking out into the jungles. "It's coming...very soon, hehe."
(I am sorry that it's not that long. I don't have that much time sometimes to make a long chapter.)
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Where...where am I? This feeling...so different...what is this feeling? Hmm...feelings...wait...what is that voice?
"Can you hear me?"
Minato's vision was blurry. He could see somebody.
Who...is this?
"I can feel Minato's heart...Jiraiya...he's okay."
Master Jiraiya...
"Thank you Siyuge...I'm so glad I found you here in the village. Why are you here?" asked Jiraiya.
Minato opened his eyes, and saw that he was in a hospital bed. They must have found him, and brought him to the hospital. He saw Siyuge.
Siyuge had long silver hair, green eyes, pale skin, and had a scar on his cheek. He wore black pants, a belt, and a shirtless gray shirt.
Minato saw Jiraiya talking to him on the other side of the room.
"Ugh..."
Jiraiya noticed Minato. "Minato! You're awake!" laughed Jiraiya. "You had me worry for a bit!"
"What-what happened?" asked Minato feeling a bump on his head.
"You performed a very risky jutsu," Siyuge answered. "I'm amazed you woke up already. It's been only two days. I was expecting you to wake up in four."
"Two days," said Minato a bit surprised.
"You have improve in your powers," said Jiraiya. "But next time be careful okay? Ha-ha."
"I will," said Minato. "Where's Sumago and Oiichii?"
"They are at the Kage Temple here in the village," said Siyuge. "They've been assigned as body guards to protect the Prince of the Jungle. Many shinobi here are at the frontlines. You never know when the Mizume will attack."
Minato removed the bed sheets, and tried to get up.
"Wait Minato...you must rest," said Siyuge.
"Ha-ha," chuckled Minato getting out of the bed, and standing up. "I don't have time to rest while everyone else is not."
Minato ranned out of the room. He got his clothes from the storage area, and changed into them.
Jiraiya and Siyuge were standing in the room still.
"Hehe."
"What is it Siyuge?"
Siyuge looked out of the window, and looked down. The sun shined brightly, and the skies were cleared. He saw Minato running to the Kage Temple.
"That boy...to perform a jutsu that great. He has a bright future ahead of him as long as he doesn't do anything dumb."
"That's Minato for yeah!" laughed Jiraiya.
"Hmm..."
Minato made it to the Kage Temple. It was huge, and surrounded by the jungle. Vines grew all over it. As he looked around the area he could see that the village had vines growing all over it. The great junbgle surrounded it. The village just like the Leaf Village had a giant wall surrounding it, but the trees were so high you could still see the jungle.
He made it to the Temple Gates. Two samurai who were the Temple Guards appeared. "Who are you?" asked one of them.
"My name's Minato of the Leaf," he said.
"Of the Leaf?" one of them asked.
"Yeah," said Minato. "Don't you believe me?"
"Oh Minato! You're okay!"
Minato saw Sumago run through the gates, and hugged him.
"Hey Sumago! Stop-stop you're...squeezing me to much..." Minato said not able to breathe.
"Sumago, we are body guards" said a familiar voice.
Oiichii and a boy about four years older than Minato stood by Oiichii.
"Oiichii, Sumago, if my father sees that I'm not in the Temple Grounds he's going to kill me. Is this a friend?"
"Yes, his name is Minato. I'm sure he can be your bodyguard as well."
Oiichii and the prince left, and went into the Temple Grounds. Minato was amazed how nice this prince dressed. He wore a silver robe that had a weird symbol on the back. He had short brown hair, and blue eyes. He had somewhat tanned skin.
Sumago and Minato started walking through the gates. One of the samurais grabbed Minatos arm. He pulled Minato's ear to his mouth and whispered, "Be careful of the king...he's been acting strangely..."
"What?" asked Minato. Sumago pulled Minato into the Grounds, and said, "Come-come on Minato, you heard what the prince said about his father."
Minato looked back. What did he mean?
IN THE REPUBLIC OF MIZUME
The thunder roared, and the rain fell to the ground below endlessly. In this area of the Land it was rugged, and not much jungle could be found here.
There was many hills, and a huge mountain. On the top of this mountain was the Kingdom of Mizume while at the base of this great mountain surrounded by walls was the Village of Mizume. The peak of this mountain was so high clouds covered it.
Two people wearing long dark hooded robes stood on a balcony on the western part of the peak looking down at the village.
"Hmm...do you think that our plan will go well...we have done so much for this Village..."
"I think this plan will go well...we will destroy the Jungle Village, than take over. We will then attack the Sand, and a war will start. We wll abandon the Mizume, and then do a surprise attack on this so called Land of Fire. The Land Of Fire will think it's the Sand who attacked, and then a Great Ninja War will start..."
"Wow you have everything set, but what if things don't go as plan?"
"We will then move to our next plan."
"Are you two still talking?" asked a fat man who wore a crown, and a long green robe. He walked on to the balcony. "It is freezing out here! I need to go back inside!"
One of the hooded robed man turned back to see the King of the Mizume walk back into the Kingdom. He had piercing red eyes. "That king, I hate him so much. I do hope my plan works...I get to kill him in this one if it does."
The other one turned back too see the Kingdom as well. "Hmm...so you really are going to kill him Totseku...I hope you have fun." This man had dark skin, and long black hair. He wore black lipstick, and a giant earring.
"Hehe of course I'll have fun my friend," laughed Totseku looking out into the jungles. "It's coming...very soon, hehe."
(I am sorry that it's not that long. I don't have that much time sometimes to make a long chapter.)
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pretty good... little grammar mistakes...