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Suiton: Nagareru no Muchi ) - Water Release: Flowing Whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user first kneads chakra in their mouth and then, placing their hand on their mouth expels water in the form of a whip which they use to lash their opponent, sending them flying backwards

( Suiton: Shawā ) - Water Release: Showers
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user condenses water vapour in the air above them to generate multiple projectiles of water which shoot at their target with a great amount of force and speed. The user can also shoot a barrage of small water projectiles directly from the swing of their hand.


I gathered my suiton chakra and focussed very good on it. I channelled the suiton chakra into my mouth, placed my hand on my my mouth and I concentrated. I released the suiton chakra out of my mouth and I manipulated it's chakra structure.. I expelled water out of my mouth and it was created into a water whip. I attacked the dummy over there with this water whip, and caused it to break apart!
+it's fast to perform! no handseals or a water source required, and it can defnitely deal some damage. and it's a nice SM whip
-has almost not use against a earth wall, very easy to block it with an earth wall, or other earth shizz

I gathered my suiton chakra and focussed really good on it. I concentrated on it and I released the suiton chakra and started to manipulate it. I condensed water vapour in the air and I generated multiple water projectiles out of it. I shot the water projectiles at your clone and wove my hand to create a small barrage.. *poof*

+ it has a great cutting power, it's easy and fast to perform, no handseals required, and not very easy to avoid because it are multiple projectiles, and it doesn't require a water source
-it's easy to repel the water projectiles with just a wind blast, or block them with a normal earth shield or dome
 
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Next two jutsu.
List me 3 advantages and disadvantages for each one.
(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.
 

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I gathered my suiton chakra, and I focussed very good on it. I channelled the suiton chakra into my hands, performed the Boar → Dog → Ram Hand seals and I concentrated very good. I released the suiton chakra out of my hand, and manipulated it into a vortex of water. I created a vortex of water, and caused it to spiral. I sent it towards your clone (you just created), and the water vortex hit him! *poof*
+ It can be used as defense or as attack, very handy
+it's awesome for canceling out fire jutsus
+ I can perform it when somebody's close to me
-It can't be performed on somebody who is far away
-it requires a little bit time to perform (hand seals)
-An earth wall is enough to block this


I gathered my suiton chakra and focussed really really really good on it. I channelled the suiton chakra into the water source and started to perform the Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird Hand seals! I concentrated super good on the suiton chakra and started to manipulate it. I created a large water dragon out of the water and sent it towards you clone (you just created again), and the water dragon hit him.. *poof*!
+this jutsu looks sooo coool!!!!
+I can perform this on all ranges
+It definitely deals some damage, and nice for canceling out katon jutsus
-this jutsu has more hand seals than I can count! the opponent has a lot of time to attack me, while I"m performing those handseals
-tho, strong earth users can block this with ease
-it requires a water source
 

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Good, next 2 jutsu.

(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.

From here on out, just perform it and give me 1 adv and 1 disadv along with if you have any questions.
 

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As I gathered my suiton chakra, I focussed very good on it. I performed the Tiger hand seal, and concentrated. I created an orb of water, and I added chakra to it, and started to manipulate it. Several whips of water started to emerge out of the orb. YOu created 3 clones, and I caused the water whips to direct towards the clone, the whips hit all the clones. *poof* *poof* *poof*
+can be performed on all ranges
-not much, except the fact that (strong) earth users have many ways to block this

I focussed very good and started to gather my suiton chakra. I channelled the suiton chakra into my mouth, and I performed 1 Hand seal. I concentrated on the suiton chakra in my mouth, and I released it all out of my mouth. I manipulated the suiton chakra and caused a large sphere of rotating water to be spit out of my mouth, which I directed towards the clone. the water sphere hit the clone aaaand *poof*
+can be used on all ranges
-just like the jutsu above: not much, except the fact that (strong) earth users have many ways to block this
 

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Good, moving on.


(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.



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(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

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omg, I realised that you're in Suna!!


As I gathered my suiton chakra, I focussed very good on it. I performed the Tiger hand seal and I concentrated really good. I released the suiton chakra and started to manipulate the suiton chakra, and caused a powerful slicing water jet, running through the rocjs, backing your clone off, and slices him *poof*
+pretty strong, doesn't require a watersource and nice for backing somebody off
-Can't perform it on long range

I gathered my suiton chakra and focussed on it. I performed the Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon Hand seals, and concentrated very good. I released the suiton chakra, and manipulated it. I caused water to be generated, I added some chakra to it, and manipulated it's shape. The water took the shape of a giant snake, which I sent towards the clone. It twisted the clone and swallowed it. The water became a river and carried him away.. "hheeeeeeelp!
+no watersource required, all ranges
-many handseals (takes long) and doesn't do any damage
 

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(Suiton: Suikō Teppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shark Gun Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: An advanced version of Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough in which the user can summon up to three sharks at once rapidly to advance on the target, and can cause severe internal injuries.
Note: Requires a water source

Concentrate on your chakra levels until you have enough amount and manipulate it to form 3 water sharks and directed it to my clone.

*creates clone*

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(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Manipulate your water chakra underneath me and cause a sphere of water to trap my clone in a sphere of water.

*creates clone*

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I was focussing on the suiton chakra I gathered.. I concentrated very good and released the suiton chakra.. I was manipulating the suiton chakra in the lake over there.. and caused 1 watersharks to be created out of the water, manipulated by me, and sent towards the clone *poof*
-requires watersource, only short range
+fast to perform, no handseals

We're standing on the lake
I gathered mah Suiton chakra... I focussed really good on it. I was concentrating, released the suiton chakra, and started to manipulate the water chakra beneath the clone. I caused a flow of gushing water to be created beneath him, that formed into a water sphere around the clone trapping him inside
+fast to perform, don't need to put my arm in it, , creates own watersource
-, can't perform on long range

Edit: check my mood and status
 
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(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After waving the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals, the user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

Just give me all the advantages and disadvantages that you can and if u could please provide a picture of the jutsu above and ask me any questions that you may have.
 

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I gathered my suiton chakra and I focussed very good. I channelled the suiton chakra into my mouth, performed the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals and I concentrated on it. I released the suiton chakra out of my mouth and manipulated it. I created a water jet to be launched out of my mouth, directed at your clone! *poof*
+I don't need a water source, and it looks badass
-only mid range, requires a few handseals
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I gathered my suiton chakra and focussed really good. I channelled the chakra into my hands while concentrating on it and slammed my hands on the ground while release the suiton chakra. I manipulated the suiton chakra in the air, and caused a lot of water to be created and summoned it 10 meters above. The water crashed down and I could use it as a water source.
+no hand seals requires, you can use it as a water source
-no damage points, and it takes a little bit of time before the you can use it as a water source, since the water has to be summoned 10 meters above
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We're going to do this a little diff now.





(Suiton: Mizugakure no jutsu) - Water Release Hidden Amongst Water Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then blend in with a water source to be undetected by the enemy for a short period of time. However Sensory Ninja and Doujutsu users can find the enemy easily within the water source.

(Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.



How and when would you use the jutsus above and give me some advantages and disadvantages that come about in using it in the way you described.
 

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Can somebody pleeeaaaase reply for me here:

I am way to lazy, and didn't reply that training thread for ages...
just write the text, send it to me, I'll copy and past it
I'll rep you ;)



I am sorry about my laziness.. :T_T:
U_U DO I get my rep now? I even did the copy and pasting bit :rolleyes:
 

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I gathered my suiton chakra and focussed very good. I channeled the suiton chakra through my whole body, started to manipulate it. I blended into the waterlake next to me
*I'll use it when I don't want to be noticed by somebody (opponent).. or make sure he doesn't know where I am
+The opponent won't be able to notice me as long he doesnt have a doujutsu or is a sensory type, no handseals
-I cant stay in there for long, and there are many sensory types and doujutsu users


I concentrated very good and gather my suiton chakra. I released the suiton chakra and created a wave of water which was lifting me up. I added some chakra to it and started to manipulate it. I was riding the wave..YEAH I'M SURFING (see title of this thread).. I traveled with a high speed on the wave at your clone and attacked him.. *poof*
*I'll use this purely for attacking, traveling fast at the opponent, and for lifting myself up, because there are many jutsus that are nice to be used when you're lifted up
+nno handseals, I can travel fast with it, deal some damage, all ranges
-a simple C rank earth technique can block this/cancel this out
 
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