My Sketch

[FaHaD 5212]

Please don't ask if I used reference or not, the answer is obvious
Anyways
Here it is

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Rate out of 10 (And out of 5 in the poll). Dattebayo!

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How is this for a 14 year old

 

[-Tremendous-]

It's done fine but need more with the facial expressions and there are lot's of place for you to improve on

 

[FaHaD 5212]

It's done fine but need more with the facial expressions and there are lot's of place for you to improve on

Ok Thanks for the advice but could you point out some mistakes
I am a rookie and this is my third piece of work

 

[Chaos.]

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[suki]

It's pretty good.... I like how you tried shading, this shows your determination! Keep it up and you'll become better, watch tutorials too

 

[Killer Vision]

nice one mate. try using plain paper next time ok?

 

[FaHaD 5212]

It's pretty good.... I like how you tried shading, this shows your determination! Keep it up and you'll become better, watch tutorials too

nice one mate. try using plain paper next time ok?

Thanks a lot

 

[Uzumaki Kato]

Lined paper -,- ps: try to add more straight lines and add darker tones in the shading to give more a 3d feeling