my second love poem

[Death Bringer]

for It is only with you that I feel that im where I belong.
as my heart is in tune for our next love song.
so please don't leave me my love, for it is to much for me to bear.
I want our love to be true for the both of us to share.
for every waking moment with you that I spend.
I feel that I am dreaming and I hope it will never end.

 

[Jazzy..]

Oh my that is so beautiful!!! You are very talented with writing love poems that make my heart thump faster and faster ^_^

 

[Mai]

for It is only with you that I feel that im where I belong.
as my heart is in tune for our next love song.
so please don't leave me my love, for it is to much for me to bare.
I want our love to be true for the both of us to share.
for every waking moment with you that I spend.
I feel that I am dreaming and I hope it will never end.

U_U i wish i could express my feelings like you...this is really sweet

 

[Death Bringer]

Oh my that is so beautiful!!! You are very talented with writing love poems that make my heart thump faster and faster ^_^

thank you

 

[Death Bringer]

U_U i wish i could express my feelings like you...this is really sweet

thank you

 

[Train]

It was better than the first.
And although one definition refers to an animal, the right spelling is 'bear'
wait, unless you were trying to make it look like 'share'...
Nice though...the first 3 lines of this were really good, then the next 3 didn't have as much...strength in words?
I'm no poet though.

 

[Death Bringer]

It was better than the first.
And although one definition refers to an animal, the right spelling is 'bear'
wait, unless you were trying to make it look like 'share'...
Nice though...the first 3 lines of this were really good, then the next 3 didn't have as much...strength in words?
I'm no poet though.

thank you i just noticed that

 

[Karmolo]

kind hearted