my Sasuke vs Itachi drawing

[Mellow]

my attempt to recreate the Uchiha brothers fight Lol

Here it is

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Comments and critique appreciated

 

[Trúth]

Its good bro

 

[Barbarossa]

Eyes are little wierd...but its good

Thumbs up

 

[Mellow]

Its good bro

Eyes are little wierd...but its good

Thumbs up

Thanks bro & ik Lol the eyes and nose were the hardest for me idk why

 

[Brainstorm]

I don't think its good.

 

[Mellow]

I don't think its good.

Ight thanks for the feedback bro

 

[xjimbox]

I like it im sure u will become even better in time dont let people ge you down

 

[roncato]

4/10

How long were you drawing it ?

 

[Mellow]

4/10

How long were you drawing it ?

Like 45 mins

 

[Ōkami]

It's satisfactory work I suppose.

 

[Aoihime]

It's very good but here's some advice and things to work on

-keep it clean, the main thing I noticed was that it wasn't so clean, the key to making it look great is keeping it clean and neat.
-work on your lines, try and keep them as smooth as possible, I know it's very hard but draw them carefully and keep them smooth.
-work on your shading, I realised your shading wasn't so flat it was more lines, if you are not already you should use soft dark Pencils like 4B-6B for the hair, also try make the shadows in the hair stand out.
-lastly try and make the drawing fit the whole page and if your inspiration image doesn't go further use your imagination and extend the drawing.

Overall 5/10 it wasn't perfect(neither are anybodys) but there is still loads of room for improvement^.^

 

[roncato]

Like 45 mins

Well, tooth and hair look terrible, imo. Were you drawing it looking at the picture or just from your imagination? If it was from ur imagination, then I'd rate 5/10

 

[Rekudakune]

use a scanner next time you 12 year old unregistered hypercam let the bodies hit the floor scrub!!!