My S haringan has awakened

[Yuse]

tell me what you think

its titled My sharingan has awakened



my eyes sorrow with tears of blood
which means my sharingan has awakened and my rampage has begun
with my sharingan to me you are nothing but flies
with my sharingan i am able to see through all your lies
before you are dead the last color you will see is my sharingans dark red
if i use izangai i may go blind but i wont mind as long as i have the chance to rewind your death over and over again because we are uchiha in this cruel world its either kill or be killed sadness and pain that is what our destiny is instilled with

 

[Raphael sannin]

very good!!!:bouncy:

 

[babajara0102]

It's too simple

but thumbs up for the effort

 

[Chihaya]

Nice nice.

After this line the last color you will see is my sharingans dark red

I was expecting something like, so now you are dead

 

[Goetia]

It captures the blood-soaked history and fate of the Uchiha quite well. Its pretty good for the context of the poem. Nice job.

 

[Waindo]

I second Silver. Great job bro!

 

[Yuse]

Nice nice.

After this line the last color you will see is my sharingans dark red

I was expecting something like, so now you are dead

yeah i was thinking about it but i thought that would make it to predictable/short



ps thank you all for you positive comments