[Other] My reverse poem

[Punk Hazard]

Forwards version:
Stucks in the slums, in the gutter
Never again will I utter
"Happiness I feel today"
Forever I will always say
That hope has escaped
What is the greatest lie?
"I can get by"
Something I will always repeat
"This world will hand me defeat"
I can never accept
I will gain victory and respect

Reversed version:
I will gain victory and respect
I can never accept
"This world will hand me defeat"
Something I will always repeat
"I can get by"
What is the greatest lie?
"That hope has escaped"
Forever, I will always say
"Happiness I feel today"
Never again will I utter
Stuck in the slums, in the gutter.​

 

[villain55]

Ohhh I see it's the same, but in a different order. Very tricky

Seriously though I liked the poem

 

[magicman420]

nice work very creative

 

[Punk Hazard]

Ohhh I see it's the same, but in a different order. Very tricky

Seriously though I liked the poem

Thank you, and it's not the same forwards and backwards. Words are, but not the meaning.

 

[Corgi]

I'm liking the way it's read backwards and forwards.

Nice work.

 

[Erebus]

That is cool

 

[Punk Hazard]

I'm liking the way it's read backwards and forwards.

Nice work.

That is cool

Thank you both.

 

[Revyy]

Clap Clap Clap!!!!

 

[Punk Hazard]

Clap Clap Clap!!!!

I love when you clap for me C;

Thank you <3

 

[villain55]

Thank you, and it's not the same forwards and backwards. Words are, but not the meaning.

Well son of a gun, I did not notice that at first (I know I'm a retard). Bravo sir, bravo

 

[Revyy]

I love when you clap for me C;

Thank you

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You deserve it. :3 <3

 

[Chibiusa]

I always wonder how long these things take to plan out. Must take serious thought

Good job

 

[usag]

That's something! Nice one.

 

[UchihaMifune]

This was awesome, did you come up with it yourself?

 

[Zorø]

Nice man i like the lyrics.......

 

[Punk Hazard]

That's something! Nice one.

Nice man i like the lyrics.......

Thank you.

This was awesome, did you come up with it yourself?

I always wonder how long these things take to plan out. Must take serious thought

Good job

I did come up with it myself, and it does take a lot of thought. I feel like like this kind was harder to do than regular ones because I wanted this one to rhyme. All in all, it took me about an hour last night to finish it, though I had started the night before.

 

[-Phoënix Flower-]

That was really nice ^^

 

[Punk Hazard]

That was really nice ^^

Thank yew!! C:

 

[YokoKurama]

<div class="bbWrapper">Looks like a lot of thought went into this. It's very well written. I really enjoyed the reverse reading but they are both exceptional in my eyes. Great job!</div>

 

[Punk Hazard]

Looks like a lot of thought went into this. It's very well written. I really enjoyed the reverse reading but they are both exceptional in my eyes. Great job!

Thanks a lot, I appreciate that.