My Poetry

[professor naruto]

i am a poet in my language urdu.
By applying the same principles i have done some poetry in english but i dont know wether it is a poetry or not.

A child should learn in his life
An adult means to earn in his life

For a poor child, the situation
It is to turn in his life

 

[Haru70]

Nice poem.

I give it a 4, since that's my favorite number.

 

[EnDash]

i voted 2, i didn't quite understand the poem and it didn't made much sense to me. i guess it's the diffrence in language and the difficulty of translating meaning from one language to the other. i think that a person that is used to english poetry and novels will have a hard time understanding this poem.