My Poetry(First time posting)

[Dreckerplayer]

I'm an noob at this, so please understand. I wrote this from the soul. Tell me what you think.

Spoiler

The Origin of the False Image...

They're insecure...
It's hidden in their words,
In their behavior,
An image given to them by society,
They've become so inauthentic,
All about their image,
No longer acknowledging how they truly feel,
but how others will see them,
that's the drive behind it all...
while some of us think we are 'real',
always using 'real' out of context,
thinking 'realness' does not apply to oneself,
thinking 'realness' only pertains to what's said to others,
No...
'Realness' is not one or two aspects of oneself,
it is all aspects,
Can't even be real with oneself,
So you've developed a false image as well...

 

[FemmeFatale]

I like it, it is very insightful...if that is the world for what I am trying to say. I agree with the meaning behind this peice assuming I interrupted it correctly.

 

[Dreckerplayer]

I like it, it is very insightful...if that is the world for what I am trying to say. I agree with the meaning behind this peice assuming I interrupted it correctly.

Thanks Femme =D

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Another new poem writer welcome and you are pretty good .

 

[darkprince]

Great poem.I like it.