Yellow Flash of Konoha
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This is my own story. I was working on it for more than 1 year. This story has no end because its story is like that. The beginning / history is very serious but after the history / beginning the story is very funny. So I'll start with the history / beginning.
But before you start reading, please read this.
EDIT: Now I have written character details and their pictures. You can see them here.
Soon the third tribe came to the planet and ended the war by defeating both tribes. This tribe was famous for its powers. So the third tribe ruled the entire planet and named the planet "Peace" and forbid the war, battle or any type of fight.
There was peace in Peace for 25 years. The old king of third tribe died, his son, the prince sat on the throne. And the leader of first tribe Erick died and Rick (the son of Erick) and his five brothers, took the leadership. And the leader of the second tribe, Shadhan became old and gave the leadership to his son, Adreth. But the first tribe was waiting for a chance for starting the war between two tribes.
One day something was stolen from one of the first tribe's house. The first tribe suspected the Adreth's tribe for this. Rick said:
"We can't do a disgraceful thing like this. And our king's tribe can't do this. The one tribe is left is Adreth's tribe. I am sure that he or his tribe has done this."
Adreth came with his people and said to Rick:
"We can't do a shameful thing like this, you fool!"
After this Rick thrown his shoe on Adreth's face. Adreth said:
"Let's show this maggot our true power! GO!"
"We're going to kick their asses! GO!" Rick said.
And the clash has begun again.
Soon the king knew that they started to battle again. He came out with his soldiers to stop the battle. All three tribes' war begun. The war continued three days. Adreth's tribe was about to lose but his elder brother joined the battle and turned the situation. Adreth's tribe won the war. After the war was over, Adreth's brother returned to his hometown that is far from Peace.
When the Peace built again after 5 months, voting started for who will be the king. The leader of Ricks said:
"I know a person that is capable for king's throne. I will bring him in one day."
All people accepted on this. After Jamoonie Rick returned to Peace, he saw all people waiting for him. Prince said:
"Let's see who he is."
Adreth's elder brother came out. All people voted for him. After he won the voting, the old minister of Peace said that the fight between two candidates should be held. That's our traditional way to declare the king.
The fight was begun between the prince and Aardeth (Adreth's elder brother). The Prince was amazed that Aardeth can wield his ancestors' sword. The fight continued for an hour. Both got tired. Aardeth stood up and shouted "DRAGON HEART!". That broke his sword's seal. Now his powers are unleashed. In no time, the Prince defeated by Aardeth. The old minister declared that the new king will be Adreth's elder brother, Aardeth.
Later Aardeth declared the Prince as his minister.
So here ends the history. Soon I will post other chapters.
If you have some suggestions, tell me. If there's something missing in story or it looks incomplete somewhere, please tell me. If something is weird and you can't understand, feel free to ask.
But before you start reading, please read this.
EDIT: Now I have written character details and their pictures. You can see them here.
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Adreth is the hero of this story.
Rick and his five brothers are villains of Adreth.
Six Ricks' nicknames are: Red Rick, Black Rick, Rick, Gunman Rick, Jamoonie Rick (meaning: Purple Rick) Aasmani Hazrat (meaning: Mr. Blue)
History
Far from Earth, a small planet found that has an atmosphere like earth, found. two tribes gone there. After 10 months, more than 1000 people where there. As soon as the two tribes completely transferred to the small planet, the clash began between two tribes for the kingdom. The war started.Soon the third tribe came to the planet and ended the war by defeating both tribes. This tribe was famous for its powers. So the third tribe ruled the entire planet and named the planet "Peace" and forbid the war, battle or any type of fight.
There was peace in Peace for 25 years. The old king of third tribe died, his son, the prince sat on the throne. And the leader of first tribe Erick died and Rick (the son of Erick) and his five brothers, took the leadership. And the leader of the second tribe, Shadhan became old and gave the leadership to his son, Adreth. But the first tribe was waiting for a chance for starting the war between two tribes.
One day something was stolen from one of the first tribe's house. The first tribe suspected the Adreth's tribe for this. Rick said:
"We can't do a disgraceful thing like this. And our king's tribe can't do this. The one tribe is left is Adreth's tribe. I am sure that he or his tribe has done this."
Adreth came with his people and said to Rick:
"We can't do a shameful thing like this, you fool!"
After this Rick thrown his shoe on Adreth's face. Adreth said:
"Let's show this maggot our true power! GO!"
"We're going to kick their asses! GO!" Rick said.
And the clash has begun again.
Soon the king knew that they started to battle again. He came out with his soldiers to stop the battle. All three tribes' war begun. The war continued three days. Adreth's tribe was about to lose but his elder brother joined the battle and turned the situation. Adreth's tribe won the war. After the war was over, Adreth's brother returned to his hometown that is far from Peace.
When the Peace built again after 5 months, voting started for who will be the king. The leader of Ricks said:
"I know a person that is capable for king's throne. I will bring him in one day."
All people accepted on this. After Jamoonie Rick returned to Peace, he saw all people waiting for him. Prince said:
"Let's see who he is."
Adreth's elder brother came out. All people voted for him. After he won the voting, the old minister of Peace said that the fight between two candidates should be held. That's our traditional way to declare the king.
The fight was begun between the prince and Aardeth (Adreth's elder brother). The Prince was amazed that Aardeth can wield his ancestors' sword. The fight continued for an hour. Both got tired. Aardeth stood up and shouted "DRAGON HEART!". That broke his sword's seal. Now his powers are unleashed. In no time, the Prince defeated by Aardeth. The old minister declared that the new king will be Adreth's elder brother, Aardeth.
Later Aardeth declared the Prince as his minister.
So here ends the history. Soon I will post other chapters.
If you have some suggestions, tell me. If there's something missing in story or it looks incomplete somewhere, please tell me. If something is weird and you can't understand, feel free to ask.
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