[Discussion] My own manga/comic! I made it by my own!!!

[UzumakiRam]

Okay, where to start.

- name of the main protagonist: Sasori.

- page five, that Kamui.

- You basically copied the life of Naruto. Father, who dies because he cannot win agaist a monster and puts the monster into his baby? Come on.

- his mother named Rin.

Do I need to continue? And if you do know how to draw and shade, then do it.

ok... but i didn't put kamui and his father is not a hero and didn't die by a monster, he died by a devil, the baby was 1 and 2 months ,and when the baby became a kid wasn't bullied but he wasn't accepted as a student, I will explain more in chapter two, when he tries to be accepted from a school, o i forgot i multi posted sorry (i edited to write that i multi-posted you can check down)