[Predictions] 'My Ninja Way'

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Obito is shown floating in the air and looking at naruto with satisfaction.
Obito : hmm the so called child of prophecy.
Sasuke is shown looking at the jubbi's current form, shivering
''this is bad, naruto can't even move'' he thinks to himselve before gaining cmposure and smiling this is my opportunity to show my worth by defeating the jubbi he thinks to himselve once more
tobirama : ''welldone hiruzen, i wonder what will have happened if you didn't act quickly''
hiruzen : ''i was still to late, naruto can bearly stand'' he said looking at naruto.
Naruto : ''i cannot feel my body'' tries standing up but falls down again.
Obito : smiling, its time i finish you off naruto
minato and tobiram quickly teleports towards naruto
minato : you will have to pass through us then
naruto : dad he says in a feint voice, thank you but i dont need anyone protecting me, he then stands and smiles, even if there is no more chakra in me, i will never give up because thats my way of ninja.
All the faces of the shinobi's will be shown with an expression of supreise on their faces
sasuke : that naruto he will never change
both madara and hashirama are shown looking shocked hashirama : that boy he would have definatley been a better hokage than any of us.
Madara : the boy will never learn, if obito doesn't finish him off i will.
Hashirama : so my freind from the story you've told me about the forbien fruit it seems like you are expecting the fruit soon.
Madara : you are right and when it comes i will at it and become even stronger than the legendary sage not you, not your brother not even the current jubbi's jinchuriki, he said looking at the tree.
Hashirama : well freind i am sorry, but i will have to stop kill your dream, right now my only priority is to see that naruto boy get to eat that forbideen fruit.
Madara : now look at the tree with his eye wide opened ' its hapennig'
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i know there's gonna be a lot of mistakes but just manage this is my first so enjoy.
 

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It's very short But I like it very much Great Work + Rep
 

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Obito is shown floating in the air and looking at naruto with satisfaction.
Obito : hmm the so called child of prophecy.
Sasuke is shown looking at the jubbi's current form, shivering
''this is bad, naruto can't even move'' he thinks to himselve before gaining cmposure and smiling this is my opportunity to show my worth by defeating the jubbi he thinks to himselve once more
tobirama : ''welldone hiruzen, i wonder what will have happened if you didn't act quickly''
hiruzen : ''i was still to late, naruto can bearly stand'' he said looking at naruto.
Naruto : ''i cannot feel my body'' tries standing up but falls down again.
Obito : smiling, its time i finish you off naruto
minato and tobiram quickly teleports towards naruto
minato : you will have to pass through us then
naruto : dad he says in a feint voice, thank you but i dont need anyone protecting me, he then stands and smiles, even if there is no more chakra in me, i will never give up because thats my way of ninja.
All the faces of the shinobi's will be shown with an expression of supreise on their faces
sasuke : that naruto he will never change
both madara and hashirama are shown looking shocked hashirama : that boy he would have definatley been a better hokage than any of us.
Madara : the boy will never learn, if obito doesn't finish him off i will.
Hashirama : so my freind from the story you've told me about the forbien fruit it seems like you are expecting the fruit soon.
Madara : you are right and when it comes i will at it and become even stronger than the legendary sage not you, not your brother not even the current jubbi's jinchuriki, he said looking at the tree.
Hashirama : well freind i am sorry, but i will have to stop kill your dream, right now my only priority is to see that naruto boy get to eat that forbideen fruit.
Madara : now look at the tree with his eye wide opened ' its hapennig'
end

i know there's gonna be a lot of mistakes but just manage this is my first so enjoy.

Its short but i like it you explained it well :)
 

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Hashirama wanting Naruto to eat the fruit ! Lol.


good one though ! ***** :)
 

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Quite short but great!
 

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Good job, I like it!
 

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very nice but next week is the end of Volume 67, and it's a long chapter. Great writing though,
 

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thank you all
 
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