Light yagami Kira
Leaf Village Regular 🍃
- Joined
- Mar 21, 2013
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name: pilot BTW: SORRY FOR THE ENGLISH 
characters: RIMA- main character black hair blue eyes
NIR- best friend
yuro- rimas dad wierd looking: sharp ears orange eyes very white skin... brown hair
other characters in this chapter are secondary character that i will introduce as the chapter go on
basic information- this world have no specific time line people are being controlled by 7 kingdoms that always keep fighting each other in order to get control all over the world...
other thing that is important to the story... deamons are a big creatures... they suppose to be the strongest in this world they cant die and have to be sealed but they were never big threat to the humans even tho once in a while they attack the humans kingdom but the a special national army called "resistance force" (national means it does not work for the kingdoms they work for them self... they are a unite army who fight against the deamons and sometimes the kingdoms... they dont have a lot of people in that army but they have the most sophisticated arsenal weapons that the kingdoms army dont have and they try to get) have develop a special sealing tools. one day something wierd thing happened in the lion kingdom which is where our main character lives.
RIMA: im home dad!
yuro: great... dinner is almost ready! how was at school?
RIMA: great we had a running contest today i won!
yuro: hehehehe that great one day you are gonna be a great soldier
RIMA: i have to be a soldier?
yuro: my son... you know that when someone is 16 the kingdom take him to the army! you are almost 15 now you have to be ready if you want to get back at one piece
RIMA: but... those people are evil cant you see this? they always make fun of people and sometimes they even execute them with not reason! dont you remember what they did to mom?
yuro: SHUT YOUR MOUSE!
RIMA: hmmm
yuro: i dont want to hear you even talking about it now sit down and eat your dinner....
RIMA: why it always have to be soup? cant we have something firm to eat once in a while?
yuro: what has got in to you today RIMA? stop complaining please...
RIMA: its just.... i dont know how to say it... fine just forget about it.
yuro: what? you can tell me everything son...
RIMA: I DECIDED TO JOIN THE RESISTANCE FORCE!
(yuro drops his spoon on the ground)
yuro: ARE YOU CRAZY? why would you join them? do you want to be a wanted man or worse... a dead man?
RIMA: i rather be dead than fight with the people who killed my mom
yuro: hmmm
(the door is open)
NIR: RIMAAAAAAAA you have to see this?
RIMA: what nir we are eating dinner... i hope its not a half dead bird again...
NIR: no its something much better! the resistance are here! fighting a 5 meters deamon not so far from here!
RIMA: what?!? are you serious?
NIR: yes yes come fast this way!
RIMA: dad can i go please please?
yuro: im not fine with this... but go we will talk about it later!
RIMA: thanks dad !
(RIMA run out of the house)
RIMA: you too fast NIR slow down a bit please
NIR: sorry i know im too fast for the top of the school hehehe
RIMA: oh shut it already! are we there yet?
NIR: yea here it is!
RIMA: WOW
(3 people with red coats jumping on the roof and fighting a 5 meter deamon)
RESISTANCE soldier 1: ready? go according to the plan we have to finish this before the army arrive !
RESISTANCE soldier 2/3 :GO!
(they all use giant sword to cut the deamon hand)
RESISTANCE soldier 1: scrolls out! lets seal that thing
(they using a special scroll and seal him easily!)
guy (random guy): all hail to the resistance!!!!
(the other people dont response and the guy get shot)
kingdom army soldiers appear:
captain squad: you are under arrest! dont try to do the army job... everyone who try to join them or assist them will die immediately!
(the resistance soldier throw a smoke granade on
resistance soldier 3 : they are too many we cant escape
capitan: all aim to kill!
RIMA: stop it!
capitan: ? hehehe.... well well look at that...
resistance soldier 1: what is this kid thinking?
capitan: kid you just ended up your own life
(he grab him and aim the gun to his head)
RIMA: do it...
capitan: hehe
kingdom soldier: capitan look at that!!!!
capitan: what?.... ( he shocked from what he sees) OMG ...
(a black hole appear in the sky and hundreds of deamons falling from it)
NIR: what is that?
resistance soldier 1 : call the reinforcement now!!!
(the people start to run and hide but the deamons just keep kill them)
RIMA: NIR COME I HAVE TO GO TO DAD!
(they run to the house)
RIMA: DADDDDD !
yuro: im here son!
(he take a weird necklace from the kitchen)
yuro: son take this!
RIMA: what is that ?
yuro: mom told me to give you that when you will be 16 but im not sure what will happen so just take it and never let it go
(RIMA STARTS CRYING)
RIMA: evrything will be ok dad.... i will never lose it i promise... I LOVE YOU!
yuro: I LOVE YOU TOO S...
(a deamon break the roof)
RIMA: dadddddd look out!
(THE DEAMON TAKE THE DAD and TARE HIM APART)
RIMA: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO RIMA and NIR?
HOW THE STORY WILL CONTINUE?
chapter 2 and character design will be release soon !
HOPE YOU LIKED IT !
characters: RIMA- main character black hair blue eyes
NIR- best friend
yuro- rimas dad wierd looking: sharp ears orange eyes very white skin... brown hair
other characters in this chapter are secondary character that i will introduce as the chapter go on
basic information- this world have no specific time line people are being controlled by 7 kingdoms that always keep fighting each other in order to get control all over the world...
other thing that is important to the story... deamons are a big creatures... they suppose to be the strongest in this world they cant die and have to be sealed but they were never big threat to the humans even tho once in a while they attack the humans kingdom but the a special national army called "resistance force" (national means it does not work for the kingdoms they work for them self... they are a unite army who fight against the deamons and sometimes the kingdoms... they dont have a lot of people in that army but they have the most sophisticated arsenal weapons that the kingdoms army dont have and they try to get) have develop a special sealing tools. one day something wierd thing happened in the lion kingdom which is where our main character lives.
RIMA: im home dad!
yuro: great... dinner is almost ready! how was at school?
RIMA: great we had a running contest today i won!
yuro: hehehehe that great one day you are gonna be a great soldier
RIMA: i have to be a soldier?
yuro: my son... you know that when someone is 16 the kingdom take him to the army! you are almost 15 now you have to be ready if you want to get back at one piece
RIMA: but... those people are evil cant you see this? they always make fun of people and sometimes they even execute them with not reason! dont you remember what they did to mom?
yuro: SHUT YOUR MOUSE!
RIMA: hmmm
yuro: i dont want to hear you even talking about it now sit down and eat your dinner....
RIMA: why it always have to be soup? cant we have something firm to eat once in a while?
yuro: what has got in to you today RIMA? stop complaining please...
RIMA: its just.... i dont know how to say it... fine just forget about it.
yuro: what? you can tell me everything son...
RIMA: I DECIDED TO JOIN THE RESISTANCE FORCE!
(yuro drops his spoon on the ground)
yuro: ARE YOU CRAZY? why would you join them? do you want to be a wanted man or worse... a dead man?
RIMA: i rather be dead than fight with the people who killed my mom
yuro: hmmm
(the door is open)
NIR: RIMAAAAAAAA you have to see this?
RIMA: what nir we are eating dinner... i hope its not a half dead bird again...
NIR: no its something much better! the resistance are here! fighting a 5 meters deamon not so far from here!
RIMA: what?!? are you serious?
NIR: yes yes come fast this way!
RIMA: dad can i go please please?
yuro: im not fine with this... but go we will talk about it later!
RIMA: thanks dad !
(RIMA run out of the house)
RIMA: you too fast NIR slow down a bit please
NIR: sorry i know im too fast for the top of the school hehehe
RIMA: oh shut it already! are we there yet?
NIR: yea here it is!
RIMA: WOW
(3 people with red coats jumping on the roof and fighting a 5 meter deamon)
RESISTANCE soldier 1: ready? go according to the plan we have to finish this before the army arrive !
RESISTANCE soldier 2/3 :GO!
(they all use giant sword to cut the deamon hand)
RESISTANCE soldier 1: scrolls out! lets seal that thing
(they using a special scroll and seal him easily!)
guy (random guy): all hail to the resistance!!!!
(the other people dont response and the guy get shot)
kingdom army soldiers appear:
captain squad: you are under arrest! dont try to do the army job... everyone who try to join them or assist them will die immediately!
(the resistance soldier throw a smoke granade on
resistance soldier 3 : they are too many we cant escape
capitan: all aim to kill!
RIMA: stop it!
capitan: ? hehehe.... well well look at that...
resistance soldier 1: what is this kid thinking?
capitan: kid you just ended up your own life
(he grab him and aim the gun to his head)
RIMA: do it...
capitan: hehe
kingdom soldier: capitan look at that!!!!
capitan: what?.... ( he shocked from what he sees) OMG ...
(a black hole appear in the sky and hundreds of deamons falling from it)
NIR: what is that?
resistance soldier 1 : call the reinforcement now!!!
(the people start to run and hide but the deamons just keep kill them)
RIMA: NIR COME I HAVE TO GO TO DAD!
(they run to the house)
RIMA: DADDDDD !
yuro: im here son!
(he take a weird necklace from the kitchen)
yuro: son take this!
RIMA: what is that ?
yuro: mom told me to give you that when you will be 16 but im not sure what will happen so just take it and never let it go
(RIMA STARTS CRYING)
RIMA: evrything will be ok dad.... i will never lose it i promise... I LOVE YOU!
yuro: I LOVE YOU TOO S...
(a deamon break the roof)
RIMA: dadddddd look out!
(THE DEAMON TAKE THE DAD and TARE HIM APART)
RIMA: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO RIMA and NIR?
HOW THE STORY WILL CONTINUE?
chapter 2 and character design will be release soon !
HOPE YOU LIKED IT !
