[Romance] My name is Obito

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i-----------> .


they call me friendzoned but do they even know my story?

a story of pain, sadness and a stolen Glory..


the Girl who i loved till my youth....

broke my heart with a sad truth.....


she gave her heart to a shinobi named Kakashi

what the hell is wrong with you Mr Masashi??


Rin Rin Rin is the bell really ringing??

Rin Rin Rin is the girl who i love still singing?


Rin Rin Rin tell me why do i have to shoulder..

your pains of love and the crush of the Boulder..


Rin Rin Rin something i learned from spiderman..

to hide my wounds and become the maskedman...


what a harsh truth what a cruell Reality

that turns my whole life into a mere pity..


so i swore in the name of the holly Shinju

i shall rule the world and capture every Bijuu..


and hate every shinobi be it uzumaki or senju

and kill em with a sword ,a Kunai or a Kinju...


and take revenge on who stole my wife

cheated me and ruined my life...


so i become a fighter and learnd every jutsu

and every sharingan thechnique and taijutsu..


and mastred the uchiha Kinjustu...

untill i got an epic talknojutsu ...


then turned into dust and ashes

all i got is Rin Memories and flashes...


My name is Uchiha Obito

not some ashes or Dorito
 

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The end is the best. =D
The pair rhymes annoy me a bit.
Still a good job. :)
 

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Splendid Poem. Lol
 

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Rin Rin Rin something i learned from spiderman..

to hide my wounds and become the maskedman...


what a harsh truth what a cruell Reality

that turns my whole life into a mere pity..


Don't EVER compare Obito's life to Spider-Man. Obito fantasized about a girl during his adulthood and Spider-Man fought valiantly for Gwen Stacy a full grown woman but failed to save her then started dating hotter chicks and got over it. He didn't start a war over the bish he became an Avenger and became powerful enough to beat Galactus.
 
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Don't EVER compare Obito's life to Spider-Man. Obito fantasized about a girl during his adulthood and Spider-Man fought valiantly for Gwen Stacy a full grown woman but failed to save her then started dating hotter chicks and got over it. He didn't start a war over the bish he became an Avenger and became powerful enough to beat Galactus.

Somebody hotter than Gwen??? You talking about Black Cat or MJ?
 

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Don't EVER compare Obito's life to Spider-Man. Obito fantasized about a girl during his adulthood and Spider-Man fought valiantly for Gwen Stacy a full grown woman but failed to save her then started dating hotter chicks and got over it. He didn't start a war over the bish he became an Avenger and became powerful enough to beat Galactus.

obito put a mask becuz of a girl.....and spiderman put a mask becuz of a spider sting
 

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Written by Obito's ashes. Bravo.
 
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