My Manga! Progress...

[Soraton]

Well, this is how much I've managed to finish in about one day......this is the first and third page of my manga. The second page isn't finished yet so that's why there's no flow between the first and second images. I would have waited until tomorrow to submit it but I've gotten too excited :yayy:
Reviews? Howzit so far?

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[imsuppish]

wheres the 3rd?

 

[imsuppish]

where and how did u do this?

 

[Normal fanboy]

pretty cool but i would also like know how you did it 0.0

 

[Soraton]

wheres the 3rd?

Like I said, the second page isn't finished yet so that's why there's only two pages. I've finished the first and third page...

where and how did u do this?

pretty cool but i would also like know how you did it 0.0

I've done this using a combination of Photoshop (for dialogue & text), Manga Studio (for the artwork and toning) and Gimp (for the sfx).

 

[AaaaNinja]

On the page where the guy is getting punched, look at the overall page composition and try to figure out where you want people to look. I don't think you want people's eyes to be drawn to the left center of the page. The diagonal gutter is making a tangent by touching the horizontal gutter right on the page border. Tangents are lines or curves that intersect but do not cross each other, attract the eyes and in this case I don't think that's where you want people's attention to be.

 

[Soraton]

On the page where the guy is getting punched, look at the overall page composition and try to figure out where you want people to look. I don't think you want people's eyes to be drawn to the left center of the page. The diagonal gutter is making a tangent by touching the horizontal gutter right on the page border. Tangents are lines or curves that intersect but do not cross each other, attract the eyes and in this case I don't think that's where you want people's attention to be.

Um...I...didn't understand a word you said...

 

[Dreckerplayer]

Please use original characters, not Naruto/manga look-a-likes.

Technically, it's a comic, because manga reads from right to left. Please make a comic. =) it sounds interesting so far.

 

[YowYan]

It's called pie?.. xD

 

[AaaaNinja]

Here

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[BazzBee]

Nice......Pie ? Lol nice job if you did this