My Manga! Emperor, Chapter 1 Preview...thoughts?

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Just a preview of a manga I'm making...any thoughts?

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did ...you ..Draw DAT!!!:mad:_@:
 

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What ?? You did that ?????

Make a video please . That's a high level draw of a manga . I don't trust you...
 

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I wanna know what happens next TBH, cool villian mask (I'm a villian fanboy) but the hero alright I guess.
 

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Looks good, it doesn't look a lot like a manga tho, more like a comic, too much detail

The storyline sounds great ^^
 

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How did you make that? Did you use a program?
 

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What ?? You did that ?????

Make a video please . That's a high level draw of a manga . I don't trust you...

Um, I don't have the recording software required to make a video...but...I'll upload the title page soon and that'll have my name on it. Should be proof enough ^^

I wanna know what happens next TBH, cool villian mask (I'm a villian fanboy) but the hero alright I guess.

Yeah I know, I couldn't think of a good design for him so he ended up looking a bit generic.

did ...you ..Draw DAT!!!:mad:_@:

Yes, yes I did. Hopefully I'll get better, I aspire to be as good as Oda, Kishimoto and Kubo-sensei's.

Not bad man. I like it :). Better than anything I could do haha.

Thanks :blush:
 

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Impressive mr.sir... I like how you used the techniques of a manga writer like the shocking ( the beepy one lined panel ) moment and the surprising moment ( shines sun background panel ) you have really good talent and yes indeed, I would love to see the next part *_*
 

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impressive and interesting..
when people are curious about whats gonna happen next? then i believe..you are on a right track buddy..
keep it up
 

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Looks awesome!
Very professional :)
 
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