My Manga/Comic: Front Facade; Chapter 1

[AvatarZuko]

Hello, here is the first chapter I made of my story: Front Facade.

I wrote the story and drew the images. Please let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is welcome.=D

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[SumnNarutoRelated]

Is this the origin story to the Mask?

i loved that movie

 

[AvatarZuko]

Is this the origin story to the Mask?

i loved that movie

LOL, I knew that the Mask would be the elephant in the room. However, my story uses masks as the power tools. Like how devil fruits are for One Piece, Jutsu for Naruto, etc.

There are many masks in my story such as masks that enable you to transform into a fast creature, an invisible creature, etc.

 

[hixa kuogame]

Lol L

 

[Lance171]

I think youve got a decent idea here man. How old are you btw? And the artwork is not bad, obviously room for improvement but definately dont give up!

 

[AvatarZuko]

I think youve got a decent idea here man. How old are you btw? And the artwork is not bad, obviously room for improvement but definately dont give up!

Thanks bro. I'm 23, and I just draw for fun. I wrote the story and drew after I came home from my real job at night; hence, the drawings are not as detailed.

 

[ComplexCity]

If you're planning to go somewhere with this, I recommend not releasing too much to public eyes

 

[AvatarZuko]

If you're planning to go somewhere with this, I recommend not releasing too much to public eyes

I was just about to post my second chapter. Do you think it's not wise to do so?

 

[ComplexCity]

I was just about to post my second chapter. Do you think it's not wise to do so?

Nah, do you man. I'm just saying to be careful because you don't know who is finna steal your ideas

 

[Dark Sonic]

Interesting. I'll be looking forward to more of this.