my idea for a part 3

Light yagami Kira

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i have also wrote a story for a part 3

its takes place 150 years after naruto era .
the piecefull world naruto created was gone already in the begining of the story .
and its the job of the new naruto/ ashura recarnation to fix it. there are many antagonists but at the begining at least they are fighting a new uchiha clan (fake one) that has been controlling the village and at the top is a very powerfull man having both sharingan and a tenseigan... if you want to hear more PM me i would love to tell you the story

i actually wrote a full series with 7 sagas if you are interested to hear...
the main character is another ashura reacarnation and there are many other character who get the spot lights some times
and there are a lot of anatagonists one of them is actually oruchimaru ... lets just say he took the whole senju and uchiha dna to the next level with the help of a mystirious woman and her chakra he found a way to implant the sharingan in mant people...
but before the main protagonist solve all of those problem ... he need to understand who he is and what does it mean to be ashura reacarnation ... he seek to find his lost father and the 9 bijues for an answer ... but if there is a good reacarnation... there is an evil one some where.....
 

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The main storyline seems too similar to Narutos I think. Alittle different plot line for the main character would help. Otherwise i like the idea of the uchiha ruling over the village as opposed to before where senju ruled over it
 

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Tenseigan was filler, Kishi doens't have the rights to it.

The protangonish should be a female Uchiha, With the jade Sharrigan, and the byakugou. And her side kick should be a Uzumaki with the byakugan
 

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the story is way darker than naruto many character died ... there is a female antagonist . if i will see much interest in this post i will actually write a first chapter (no drawings yet but im working on it)
 

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the story is way darker than naruto many character died ... there is a female antagonist . if i will see much interest in this post i will actually write a first chapter (no drawings yet but im working on it)

As longs as there is is strong female lead, Im fine.
 

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you should just let go of naruto..... it ended.... just move on.
 

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Great.. up until you brought up transmigrants...

That was the point of the whole war. It ended the cycle. Indra and Ashura finally worked together (even though they already have before: madara and hashirama).

Be original. This is part 3, not shippuden.
 

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that the whole point . why its came back ? did the cicle really end after naruto era?
 

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I dont like that the Uchihas are evil.
 
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