My first try on making a signature .

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Title says it all. Im pretty much a beginner at this ... Give me some feed back please! Tell me what you guys think...
 

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Wrong section. Go to the Art Hall or GFX place.

Not bad.
 

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Really really nice, especially for a first time
 

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Pretty good for a first :win:
 

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Thing is hideous, quit now kid you're terrible.


I'm kidding, Nice ^-^.
 

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It's not a bad start. However, you should work a lot on the render and text placement, and the overall blending; the way the render and the text are placed makes it seem as if the text is the focal point, when it's not supposed to be that way. And again, keep in mind that the lack of blending is not good at all for a signature. And as for the text, I personally think that the huge bold font looks awkward and the color does not match the background theme.

Anyhow, keep it up ^^
 
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Thing is hideous, quit now kid you're terrible.


I'm kidding, Nice ^-^.
Hahaha thanks man
It's not a bad start. However, you should work a lot on the render-text placement and overall blending; the way the render is placed makes it seem as if the text is the focal point, when it's not supposed to be that way. Also, the lack of blending is not good at all for a signature. And as for the text, I personally think it looks awkward and it does not match the background theme.

Keep it up ^^

Wow , thanks man ! haha
The yellow isn't really doing me any justice ... It was really hard to blend anything with that yellow ... I make another and post it here pretty soon .
Thank you for the feedback!

I like it, good job!

Thanks dude I really appreciate it.
 

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Good for your first time, post in GFX section next time.
 

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Change the letters. They seem weird.
 

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Keep on getting better. ^^
 

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Not a bad first attempt :) keep doing it and you will get far better!
 

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Nice! What do you guys think about my sig? I know the font crap I need to change that.

Yeah the font is pretty bad choice, but that can be easily changed. Also don't give it as much focus. Also, the background doesn't really fir with the render, so you should change that a bit. Colour scheme doesn't work, try to find two colours that really work well and use them throughout the signature! :)
 
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