My first sig ( Luffy )

shanee

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looks good!! Like everyone said, the text is kinda bad. haha

A friend of mine "Hei" gave me some good advice that ill give you. try to make the subject (luffy) and the background to blend more. right now, it looks like its just 2 pictures on top of each other. try blending them. for example, the sun ray circle marks could go above luffy and make it look like the run marks are on top of both pictures and maybe even making shadows over luffy. idk if you get what im saying but i tried. hahah : ) overall, great work! way better than my first one. haha :D
 

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looks good!! Like everyone said, the text is kinda bad. haha

A friend of mine "Hei" gave me some good advice that ill give you. try to make the subject (luffy) and the background to blend more. right now, it looks like its just 2 pictures on top of each other. try blending them. for example, the sun ray circle marks could go above luffy and make it look like the run marks are on top of both pictures and maybe even making shadows over luffy. idk if you get what im saying but i tried. hahah : ) overall, great work! way better than my first one. haha :D

Thanks a lot for the advice, I will bear that in mind <3

Good job for a first try! :D

My advice would be to change the text font, and maybe use a more exciting background?

You'll get better in time, don't worry about it.
Just experiment with different things in the program you're using. :)

Thanks mate ^_^
Actually I think that the text fits well there.^^
Really? xd

Don't be disheartened ^_^
You will improve :y
I hope so :p
 

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Remind me to never attempt text again xd

Don't say that dude :p keep on doing text so you improve :p
Okay so just a quick CnC, I'm not the best at GFX but I'll give you my advice anyway and you can take it if you want :p
Alright then:
1) The Luffy render, I can see you've tried to blend it a bit, so really good for doing that already! To help it look better, use filters like sharpen and blur and try some different gradient maps too :p (try to make the background match with the render).
2) There's no real focal point in the tag, move the render more into the middle (or the text to the right) and focus on an area of the render. Right now the text is on the other side of the tag so you've created two points to look at, the render, and the text.
3) The text. Keep n trying because just like everything else with GFX, you'll get better :p always put the tet near the focal point. Try to use styles too to go with the overall flow of the tag.

That's all I really have to say, some of the advice might be a bit 'iffy' but I tried :p please don't take offense, I'm just trying to help :) you'll be great in no time :)
 

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it looks pretty good for your first signature :)
 
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