My first poem

[a banned cartoon]

Such Beauty​

-Such beauty only exists in fairy tales.
-Such beauty is only mentioned in banter of the goddesses.
-Such beauty belongs in myth amongst the unknown.
-Every man longs for such beauty, yet it seems so unattainable.
-I have witnessed such beauty, and will remain amongst the few.
-Her beauty mesmerizes, and I yearn for it.​

 

[Raphael sannin]

Not bad for a newbie!!!:bouncy:

 

[Sound]

This actually sounds really good

 

[Trúth]

Nice!.................

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Nice poem and good start .

 

[Jazzy Stardust]

Not bad at all.