My first poe

Rougeninja91

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Never been my strongest suit but this is something i want to dedicate to my new girlfriend...i hope she likes it. <3


I dont know what id do without you

You are the world to me

You are everything to me i just wish you knew how much

You make my day with one single touch.

You are all i want in life Ill do anythng to be with you

I will love you until the moon doesnt glow and the wind doesnt blow


Please dont be too harsh...
 

Kaneki Kun

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Change up the last stanza it feels a little out of place kk, but overall good job.
 

Aurice

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Really good! But the last line does seem out of place. Either move it or add something to the end.
 

SasukeUchiha910

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hmmmmm.....needs more flow
 

Bi0hazard

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I LOVE IT :kisss: :kiss: <3 xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

(night)
 

shanee

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not bad. kinda plain but good for your first one. :)
 
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