My first Manga drawing ^^

[Aki Kimura99]

Hello guys!
So, after a long time, I actually decided to pick up the pencil and to try and draw something so here it is:

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This is my second, or the third time trying to draw this girl, I tried really hard and I really hope you like it
My camera kinda messed it up but meh :/
I'm still inexperienced so any kind of advice would be useful
And please be gentle with your critics *grabs a shield*

 

[Arian]

i have seen people here with far more experience being far worse^^ good job for first drawing keep doing them! the more u do the better u get^^
advice: it is kinda unfinished: make the shadings or try them. work some more on her hair and eyes^^ make darker lines on the shades and so on

 

[Magatsu Izanagi]

Looks good! Better than anything I could do :bouncy:

It reminds me of a character, but I can't put my finger on it...

 

[Sir Blades]

I like the eyes.

 

[YokoKurama]

Not bad at all for a first time!
Her right eye could be raised up a tiny bit. Other than that she looks great.
Keep practicing and refining your skills

 

[Namikun]

You're good, well done.

 

[xjimbox]

I see great potential in you

 

[Trolling King]

I like it. But it needs more monkeys. DRAW ME A MONKEY! Riding a beetle with an adorable worm on its belt and a hedgehog facing away on the back of the beetle holding a fishing rod. An the monkey is trying to read a map.

 

[China IL]

Her head looks miplaced :I

But really good! You definitly have potential v.v

 

[Souji]

Not bad, once you master the proportions and shading, you'll be even better!

 

[suki]

Her head looks miplaced :I

But really good! You definitly have potential v.v

not really. I can do that with my real head. .-.

AT OP: YES you did great as a first try. NOW keep practicing!

 

[Excālibur1]

Nice Drawing ^^

 

[REX Lex]

Awesome work

 

[Aki Kimura99]

i have seen people here with far more experience being far worse^^ good job for first drawing keep doing them! the more u do the better u get^^
advice: it is kinda unfinished: make the shadings or try them. work some more on her hair and eyes^^ make darker lines on the shades and so on

Thanks :bouncy: I really appreciate it
I will, thanks for advice ^^

Looks good! Better than anything I could do :bouncy:

Aww, thank you!!

I like the eyes.

Thanks

Not bad at all for a first time!
Her right eye could be raised up a tiny bit. Other than that she looks great.
Keep practicing and refining your skills

I will, thanks

You're good, well done.

Thanks!!

I see great potential in you

Haha, thanks :bouncy:

I like it. But it needs more monkeys. DRAW ME A MONKEY! Riding a beetle with an adorable worm on its belt and a hedgehog facing away on the back of the beetle holding a fishing rod. An the monkey is trying to read a map.

Lol, I'll see what I can do

Her head looks miplaced :I

But really good! You definitly have potential v.v

Thank you :yayy:
I'll be better next time I promise

Not bad, once you master the proportions and shading, you'll be even better!

My broooo <3 :hug: Thank you so much

AT OP: YES you did great as a first try. NOW keep practicing!

Thanks you very much!!

Nice Drawing ^^

Thank you!

Awesome work

Thanks Rexey!! :hug: